Endless Travel Across the World

Author, the biggest problem is not Pirates and Naruto. Some people hate it and some like it. The real problem is that there are too many female characters and they are too cliche. There is nothing new. The upgrade system is not cool enough...

Naruto, I haven't seen it and I don't like it, so I ran away.

Author, have you figured out the plot of Naruto? Obito founded the Akatsuki after Lin died, okay? And when Lin died, Obito had already been judged dead by Konoha. Now Obito is still alive, Madara is still studying the Samsara Eye underground, and Orochimaru hasn't rebelled against the village yet. Where did your Akatsuki organization come from?

Throwing watermelon and picking up sesame seeds. The author's childish writing style is unbearable.

As long as Xie Hokage seems to be a eunuch, forget it, I won't watch it, the power system is too inferior

Naruto and the like are fucking rubbish. Isn't it good for me, the Great Celestial Dynasty, to cultivate martial arts, cultivate truth, cultivate immortality, and cultivate Taoism? There are too many *** who write about Naruto and Pirates. If during the Anti-Japanese War, these people would have been traitors.

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the introduction, I suddenly had an idea, 💡What would happen if a pig's feet were inserted into the ancient world to become a disciple of Tongtian, who was a teacher without distinction, or if he became a disciple of two random teachers and then listened to Hongjun's sermons, he would also be considered a registered disciple 🤓

I don't know why so many people want to write about the Japanese anime Naruto and One Piece, which are completely loveless. When I saw that the catalog started with Naruto, I immediately turned it off. . .

The protagonist's character is really not very good, why is he so shameless? It's just a matter of taking away the body of his predecessor. How could he have the nerve to use him to attract Liu and use Liu. Is it okay to take advantage of her and shamelessly say that I am borrowing the protagonist? Why does my predecessor, who can kill people without giving a nod, have any grudge against you for humiliating him like this? I almost vomited after reading less than three chapters. Remarks (Liu Zai blushed instead of resisting when the protagonist touched her head, which means that the relationship between her and her predecessor was just a window of paper. How could the protagonist not know? She is shameless and despicable to the extreme) Shennong is dead, and there is something to burn the paper.

There is an apprenticeship system. Not much else to say. Just walk through the Dragon Balls and make a wish and you will be invincible. If you go to Hokage, you will have a hammer.

There are too many verbose explanations in the whole article. It looks like there is no passion, no love, never seen again!

Your writing is not rigorous at all and contains too many mistakes. I'm going to put some effort into figuring out the plot before writing it. It's amazing that your grades are improving. 😅

System + Naruto, the persuasion function is super powerful, goodbye!

Since when did Naruto Pirates become so hated? In the past, I remember that the one about Pirates and Naruto was quite popular and no one criticized it. It was popular enough. After all, there are three major migrant comics. Is it because of aesthetic fatigue or because there are too many brainless authors? How come you have to persuade yourself to quit now? ? ? 🤔

FireI searched a lot of Shadow Pirates fans, and there are quite a few good stories and writing, so it's hard to read any more

Naruto, Pirates is good, but your comments are very dark.

I saw a book review about The First World: Naruto and One Piece. Are you stupid? Just go for one of One Punch Man, God of War, Invincible World, become a teacher, and kill the Sage of Six Paths with one slap.

My Hokage, you wrote that I have no passion anymore.

It's okay. The disadvantage is that the imagination is too small. People who watch fantasy worlds just think of all kinds of abilities gathered together. Yours is too monotonous. The prophet identity is also uncomfortable to use. Except that the system is very unique, there is nothing else.

The writing is so bad, I didn't find it interesting at all after reading a few chapters.

Enter One Punch Man and directly become Saitama's disciple.

Those who write about Naruto are basically fooled by Naruto's incomplete world logic.

Why does it feel tasteless when I look at it?😆

The way I wrote about Naruto felt like you were talking, without any sense of involvement at all.

It feels like a child's bragging, nonsense. Neither the logic nor the meaning can be expressed.

[Become a disciple and gain strength] This golden finger setting is not very exciting.

What kind of garbage book is this? The writing is not good and the imagination is not enough. Still a eunuch, disgusting

Why do so many novels start with a woman silently caring for the protagonist? Alas, I haven't even finished the first chapter yet.

I traveled through the prehistoric times to become a disciple of Pangu, ah, I am invincible. I traveled through the Hokage and killed him with an axe. I fainted due to too much force and returned to chaos. Look at me opening up the world. Wait for me to break out. Keep going.