Xuanjie Dianxianlu

Author~Happy National Day 🌹 I also wish all book friends a happy holiday 🙏

🙏 Author: Sorry, I am in a hurry every time I log in to read a book, and I never click on the private message (actually, almost no one sends it to me, so I just ignore this function). . . Then, Dian Niang was not allowed to send private messages to the author 😜, so I had to "reply" directly to the book review~ Just came in and started reading, already bookmarked~~😄

Author, I read the first chapter and I feel like you don't need to annotate the article. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people.

The writing is beautiful, the plot is twists and turns, and there is a lot of cleverness in it.

There are many details in the novel, which are very delicate. 🤭🤭🤭

Throw flowers, throw flowers, I'm here to support you 🤭🤭🌹🌹🌹

Come on, author! 🌹🌹

The writing is smooth and flowing, and the suspense twists and turns are all very delicate and beautiful.

The beginning is very grand, and the pits dug are not bad, but the later stages must be controlled well, otherwise it will be easy to mess up.

🙏 Author, writing is not easy, please pay attention to your health, write and cherish it 🌹

You can enter the game with confidence, the plot is not cliche, the progress is reasonable, and the author's writing style is very delicate. The protagonist doesn't just know how to fight monsters and level up. I'm very optimistic about the author, come on!

It's so immersive. How can it be written so vividly? I beg you to update it as soon as possible.

I followed this book because the author didn't advertise it in other book review sections but messaged me directly privately. . .

Read the author, I despise you, I despise you for being so slow, I didn't finish reading until I was satisfied 😵😵😵😵

Upon first reading the first few chapters, you can easily find that the writing is anything but casual. The further you look back, the more you can appreciate the charm displayed by words.

A good novel has a sense of involvement and anticipation. These two points are already very perfect and successful. 🌹🌹🌹🌹

Good article and good book, but not enough popular elements. It is recommended to add more, so as not to let the good book be buried.

It seems very profound at first sight, but it is not that difficult to understand when you read the main text.

I always feel that there is some bright sadness in emotional dramas. Of course, that is definitely not looking up at the sky at 45 degrees.

Ahhhh~~ It's getting more and more exciting, I can't stand it anymore, please give me ten more updates

I have read online articles for more than ten years, haha, it sounds like I am very old... This is the first book. It's a dream I've had, and I want to write it out. I want to write something different, maybe it's naive, maybe it's not routine enough, But I want it to be sincere and touching, It allows you to enter this dream too. After all, I think the fun of fantasy lies in dreaming. Hope you all like it. I'm a newbie, please give me some advice haha.

On the long road of cultivating immortality, what you cultivate is your heart, what you cultivate is the Tao, and what you cultivate is an obsession. The book is very good, the pace of the plot is neither too slow nor too fast, and it is acceptable to new and old readers. The foreshadowing at the beginning really adds a lot to the story. The number of words is still too small at present. The world of Xianxia has a huge world structure. The foundation has been laid very well so far. I hope I can continue to write well! Come on 🙏