The Enlightenment of Prehistoric Times and Eternal Life

The plot is mostly okay, but the setting is a bit confusing, and the author is too over the top, probably because he has watched Ni Tianwen too much. When I saw the protagonist worshiping Yuanshi as his master, he said, "If the Tao stands in my way, I will kill it." I couldn't stand it anymore. I just wanted to say that this is the prehistoric times. If you say this, are you not afraid that the Taoist will kill you? In the prehistoric times, Tongtian did not dare to say that he was cutting the way, but he only dared to say that he was intercepting a glimmer of life on the way to heaven. Moreover, you worship Yuanshi as your teacher. Yuanshi's philosophy is to follow the way of heaven and explain the principles of heaven.

What the hell are you writing? There are several Guangchengzi in one sentence. This is the most annoying thing when reading. It's so awkward to read.

What are you writing about? There are 49 forbidden innate treasures in the world. Do you think you are creative? Is there any difference between your top-grade innate treasure and the top-grade innate spiritual treasure? Ignorance is still illiterate.

It really gave a kick to the prehistoric person in my heart, the character in Stephen Chow's movie was beyond recognition! Innovation is okay, but messing around is toxic!

Author, does this book have a female protagonist?

The ultimate innate spiritual treasure "AWM".

It was a mess, and he was extremely poisonous. One moment he turned pale, and the next moment he collapsed under the pressure, and then he said that he had not transformed yet. Are you afraid that you write it every time you remember it?

Chaos Pearl is idle all day long, silently knocking people into the wilderness

Becoming a disciple is the safest and most economical. After all, the Supreme Master has few disciples and has many resources, and the Supreme Master is the most calculating. However, becoming a disciple is the most difficult. Becoming a disciple is the second safest, because Yuan Shi favors his disciples the most and even takes action personally. Moreover, he has fewer disciples so he has more resources. Becoming a disciple is the second most difficult. Bai Tongtian can go sideways in the early stage. After all, Tongtian has the highest combat power in the early stage and his disciples are very united. If he can't defeat himself, he can get others to beat him up. But in the later stage, it is almost doomed to tragedy, and there are too many disciples and the least resources.

The old-fashioned swordsmanship, which sword has the most offensive power, is all nonsense. In a world full of gods and gods, you still believe this. Do you think it is fantasy?

This is the most vicious prehistoric novel I have ever read. It doesn't matter if the magic weapon setting is complicated, but it needs to be explained clearly, okay? The realm setting is based on your book. Set up so many realms, and then use one yuan of time to go from zero to Daluo Jinxian in the ancient times? No, I was wrong, is it Da Luo Xuanxian? ? ? What the hell is this? There is no such realm of Daluo Xuanxian in your own setting. When I first wrote about transforming into a human form as early as possible, I might be able to catch up with Hongjun's sermon after the Yiyuanhui. I thought it was a joke, because the protagonist didn't even have a trace of cultivation at that time. It wasn't until the protagonist Yiyuanhui directly became Da Luo that I realized that the protagonist was so awesome. There is another poisonous point, directly practicing the original skills? If you don't say that you can't be afraid of being pointed out in ancient times, how can you explain it when we meet in the future? I have only read Chapter 15. To me, the poisonous points are too dense. I will not talk about the poisonous points in other settings. There is no point in arguing with the author about the basic settings. This is the second time I've clicked in, but I still can't get used to it, and I have a thousand words in my heart that I can't say out loud.

I was really drugged out in the middle of the night. I told a joke and explained the teachings on the importance of carrying the Taoist tradition according to heaven and walking in accordance with heaven. The protagonist said in front of the Three Purities: If the Tao blocks me, I will kill it. Yuanshi Tianzun still applauded loudly? ? ? Then why don't your T. M. D just collapse? ? The essence of writing about an innate demon god is the same as that of a mortal. Why don't you just write about a mortal? Not to mention the confusing settings and unclear narrative. There are not many books that can stop me from being poisoned by dozens of chapters, but I saw this again today. 👍

Forcibly weakening the protagonist? In the past, even saints could be killed, but now they can't even kill the semi-saint emperor of the Great Thousand World. Even if there is support from heaven, it is nothing in front of the saint. The saint is higher than the level of the great thousand world. Even the great thousand world cannot compare with the saint. It can kill a saint, but it cannot kill a semi-saint. It's really rubbish.

It can be completely set that when being struck by the Zixiao Divine Thunder, the Jade Pure Immortal Technique was destroyed. Sanqing, who was attracted by the Zixiao Divine Thunder, met and became a disciple. I practiced the Original Gold Medal without being a disciple. I always wanted to see how it would work out when I became a disciple. But when I became a disciple, I said that I had enlightened it, and I was speechless.

I saw Chapter 4 "Chaos Orb" and gave it up! This is the first novel I have seen that divides innate treasures into low-grade, medium-grade, high-grade, and top-grade! I know the author wants to set it himself! But please trouble the author to read more when setting up the book. The "to" in Xiantian Zhibao means the most, the most! Do you give this a share? ? ? The most powerful spiritual treasure of inferior quality? The most powerful spiritual treasure in the middle grade? . . . . In addition, the downgrade of the Chaos Orb was fixed as soon as you said it would be fixed? Generally speaking, Chaos Orbs in prehistoric novels will be repaired in the later stages, but don't say it right from the beginning, as you will be full of misconceptions! Hongjun knows where the Three Treasures of Open Heaven are, so why doesn't he cultivate them? Where did you get the confidence you just wore to repair the Chaos Bead! What else can you do to live up to your name as the treasure of chaos! So passionate? Didn't we say before that we are taking life and death lightly, and our moods are ups and downs because of a foreign object? Say goodbye to Taoism and go to sleep! This state of mind is the same as that of the villain who got the treasure!

Damn it, Guangchengzi shouted "Splitting the Sky Palm" and poisoned me to death

The writing is poor, the plot is poor, there's a lot of nonsense, it's verbose, it's really so bad that people find it annoying.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Apprenticeship. Please, please write carefully. Did you go to Yuan Yuan and talk about the self-enlightenment of Yuqing Kung Fu? 😒Is it possible? Can it? ? Unless you read all the articles about soul detection, the Great Being will believe you.

I'm so embarrassed that I've contracted cancer. I practiced the Yuqing method before becoming a disciple. I also practice swordsmanship. I don't know if Tongtian Sword is the best. The foundation is still unstable. This is a slap in the original face. Zixiao Palace heard that 3,000 guests are fixed. I didn't go the first time. I can go a second time. I'm speechless.

It is extremely poisonous, even worse than the Poison Dragon and the Poison Warlock.

The three saints couldn't keep one Guangchengzi. It's really embarrassing. On the one hand, the author describes the protagonist as being extremely powerful in all the worlds, but on the other hand, he derogates the earth as weak and incompetent. What reader would be comfortable reading this kind of inconsistency?

Several major poisonous points in the prehistoric era: 1. Chaos beads 2. Grabbing seats 3. Dividing gourds 4. Helping Nuwa create humans, and then reincarnation is established 5. Black Yuanshi, blowing to the sky, The character of Jiejiao has no brainwashing, and the character of Chanjiao has no brainwashing 6. Hongjun (Tiandao) conspiracy theory 7. Later saints are like ants, like saints, they are superior to heaven, chaos, supreme, and dominate a lot of realms

The prehistoric times here, Luo Hou's grand plan, and the innate divine countermeasures are like this! The victim Cang and Gong said... Shocked! Nuwa created humans just for it. The truth behind Hongjun's command of Zixiao Palace is this! Luo Hu is not the remnant of the Chaos Demon God, his true identity is... The ancient Dragon and Phoenix Era, there is such a truth, now the Lich catastrophe, where to go The protagonist Feng Xi, how to turn the tide, save the building from collapse, save Fu Xi and the water and fire ª Where should we inherit the ancient inheritance and grievances. I am Xihuang Fu, I am the daughter of Emperor Wa, I am Hongjun Dao, and I am fond of playing in the prehistoric times Reveal the truth behind the epic and focus on the development process of the prehistoric times, in Huanghuang, the holy way of the prehistoric times! ! !

Originally, the writing and logic were poor and sloppy. It even had three clones. I advise everyone to take care of themselves. It's extremely toxic.

Why do I feel that this book looks so tired? Mythology should not be about excitement, treasure hunting, adventure, etc. Isn't it tiring to introduce more than a hundred words for each introduction?