The Female Number in Gu Aotian

I thought it was a tough opponent, so I rushed in to watch, but I found out that it was another kneeling and licking opponent. It was so boring~! A group of max-level krypton gold players went to bully the junior friends in the novice village, and even grabbed lollipops from each other's mouths to show off their strength. This is really "powerful"~!

Where is the animation updated? Is it really good where you update it?

After roughly reading it, I found that there were too many plots, and the beginning was unreasonable. The Bone King was suspicious. If you directly showed that you were a time traveler, would the Bone King think that you were deliberately dragging him into trouble? [Various prompts are too obvious and too rigid] This is a big bug. The protagonist just blindly promotes the plot, so this novel becomes a retelling of Gu Aotian's original work. You have to have something of your own, and don't be afraid of bugs, because with the protagonist as a butterfly, it's hard to tell what effect it will have. . . . . . Therefore, this book can be cut and rewritten. If the author's transformation story does not explain his orientation, not many people will read it. . . In addition to this beginning, I have made so many mistakes, and I am destined to fail if I continue to write it. You can consider rewriting it. Seize the invincible cool article, Lily's welfare, the protagonist Lily's harem, try to summon as few elements as possible, do not abuse the master, and have an online IQ. It is absolutely excellent.

Come back to me￣￣)

It feels like the author is copying the plot of the light novel, just like reading the original text of Gu Aotian's light novel. It's amazing to be able to write it like this. However, there is some innovation, but it is more like the original text. _(:ᗤㄥ)_, There is a feeling of tasteless food and a pity to throw away.

Xiao Huozhi, are you also a eunuch...

The protagonist is like Balabala, the little magic fairy 🤭

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I feel that the author has watched the animation but not the novel. There are many details in it that the author exposed through the protagonist's mouth, which proves that the author has not carefully read the original work. Then there is the matter of recruiting apprentices. Is it appropriate to expose the top secrets of the union to an 'apprentice' so easily? Should I at least wait until she returns home before telling her? And to put it bluntly, why does the protagonist of a 'minor character' like her have to be introduced this way and that like a housekeeper? Then there are some wordings, introducing the battle maid, there is nothing wrong with the female Yuri as the vice-captain, but what is the meaning of the male Sebastian? This book can actually be read, but there are too many problems, which have become the flaws of this book... If these flaws are not fixed one by one, the author will probably be sprayed to death by fans of the original book after it is released.