Founder of Konoha

Cultivation through Naruto Haha

The fight descriptions I have seen so far are all ninjutsu. Except for the use of strange fire at the beginning, there is no trace of cultivation elements. It looks like a time-traveler who has obtained the system. The pretense is also very stiff, giving the feeling that you are in JOJO. But the opposite is a daily cute series. In the eyes of outsiders, it is a chuunibyou harassing normal junior high school students returning home from school. The most important thing is that you wrote it without even understanding the basic plot of Naruto. Before the establishment of Konoha Ninja Village, there was no ninja exam. And what's even more outrageous is, are you sure you're not writing about martial arts and Naruto? How did you develop your inner strength? Can you explain it? Originally, cultivators seek detachment and great freedom, and the protagonist has obtained two artifacts. He should not be bound by the so-called rules, but just pretend that you have not ascended, so the rules still have influence. But as the cultivation continues to improve, the protagonist should gradually get rid of the constraints of the rules, but why not? You still use ninjutsu... At least that's the progress I'm watching. This is not a cultivator at all! Take off your skirt! Then there is Chakra. According to the setting, Chakra is not the power of the human body itself, but comes from the fruit of the sacred tree that Kaguya brought (this is why blood is so important in Naruto). Only natural energy is the original power of this planet in Naruto's view. Moreover, natural energy can be cultivated, but only a few people have the method of cultivation and the efficiency is extremely low (of course, Japanese authors eat books every day, and natural energy cannot be repaired at first), it is not impossible. I believe you have read it and understand the setting, but I am curious as to how you think that you can actually write natural energy, which is completely different from chakra, into the same thing... If you write natural energy as internal force, I don't think there is such a poisonous brother. The last and most critical question is, how do you plan to perfectly integrate the element of cultivation into this ninja world? If that doesn't work, I suggest you change your profile! Otherwise, this title will only attract trolls and doubts. In addition, you yourself have not thought clearly about the key and non-key settings, and the writing is a mess, as if it has become a new world. It looks very messy... You have not written out the refreshing writing that originally belonged to a cultivator.