The Most Exquisite Fairy

After chasing him all the way, he has gained some reputation. One advantage of this book is that it is written very steadily. I have read a little bit of the author's previous book "Quarry" and I feel that this book has made obvious progress. The length of the copy is moderate and the rhythm is well grasped; and it is not a mindless upgrade flow. The author's language performance is quite outstanding. I like the description of the fighting scenes very much, which is quite atmospheric. But again, it feels like there are some shortcomings. First of all, the character creation feels too "flat". It is difficult to infer the type and characteristics of a character from just a few words. I think so too, including the heroine. Some people may say that the heroine is very calm and rational. I think the heroine is still a little short of this adjective: on the one hand, it is because calm and rational is usually used to describe people's attitude and performance when solving problems. I think it is not directly linked to extroversion/introversion, enthusiasm/coldness and other personalities; on the other hand, it is my subjective feeling when reading the article. Reading the article is like playing a stand-alone game, with very few objective comments on the protagonist and less expression of the protagonist's subjective thoughts. Therefore, the sense of immersion in the character is not strong. Although the text expression is quite good, better than other works of the same period, the feeling I feel when I follow the article every day is the same as when I eat rice every day. I still have to eat it. I definitely can't do it if I don't eat it, but I don't feel anything after eating it, just like living my life. The protagonists and supporting characters all gave me the same feeling. Except for a very small number of brainless cannon fodder characters, there was always something missing from the other characters. Of course, you can say that Song Jinghong is amazing, but the setting of "protecting the calf" and contrasting cuteness are really not uncommon in Qidian these years. The second is the plot design. It is relatively flat. In layman's terms, it is composed of similar copies, without too much trouble. A better way to deal with it is to write several small copies around one large copy. For example, in the previous plot of Yongye Bay, although many people died in the battle, I still feel a little regretful. The author is fully capable of writing about it - war is the place that best highlights human nature. This is a background that can write thrilling plots. The author just wrote to me how I felt when I played a single-player game - while saying "You can cut a dungeon after this wave, it's so weird", while taking two sips of Coke - what a pity. It is precisely because of this that I am not able to follow the journey of the protagonist. I have forgotten many things in the middle and am not very impressed. The most vivid plot is still about working for Boss Yan. The author has buried a lot of foreshadowings, but most of them are relatively easy to guess and are not yet expected and reasonable. Writing such a long book review is not because I am too busy, but after reading it for a long time, I have accumulated my thoughts to a certain extent and I want to express them. I basically only write two kinds of book reviews. The first type is for super exciting books, and writing book reviews at this time is just to add icing on the cake; the second type is for I think the author has the ability to write super exciting books.

Why are almost all the stupid, stupid and naive people who are jealous of the heroine 😅 What kind of stereotype is this?

Hey... I saved it for so long and then disappeared after a while. Waiting for more waiting for more waiting for more...

This heroine must be the most stupid heroine! Obviously you saved others, and others saved you. But if it weren't for you, the female cultivator named Ye couldn't escape and the heroine is stupid and mentally retarded. It feels like all my previous lives have been in vain. And he doesn't know how to do it within his ability. After watching part of it, I found that the heroine often tries to show off her strength and gets into trouble at every turn.

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The writing is very good, but why is there only one update? It's a bit less.

Nice! I like this kind of slow-paced writing. Everything is explained very clearly and delicately, but it's just not fat enough. I'll wait until it's full 😒

There are really very few books that I can read these days, and they are very suitable for my taste. I will give you a lot of rewards and subscribe once they are on the shelves, thank you for your hard work.

Oh, don't be fooled. It's so beautiful. After Atlas of Immortals, this is the best book I've ever seen with a female protagonist cultivating immortals! ! Compared with the previous book Quarrying, this one is a huge improvement. Mainly, I personally like to read orthodox fairy-cultivating articles, such as measuring spiritual roots, entering a sect, becoming a disciple, competing, traveling, and upgrading. I don't like casual cultivators, nor do I like sects that are unfriendly, cunning, and scheming, and I don't like novels. . It seems that only Yunji and Dadashu are the most popular. The rest either don't like the settings or the writing is too childish. . Don't be fooled, please

I like this kind of orthodox immortality novel without a male protagonist, a step-by-step adventure to find treasures and upgrades. It's a pity that it's a trap. I don't know if I can wait until it's finished in my lifetime😭

It's been 2 months, I'm afraid it will be like fairy stew…😭😭😭

This is a beautiful book that I have kept on my bookshelf and I have been reluctant to delete it. It has been almost three years since the author took leave. I came in countless times hoping to see surprises but ended up exiting in disappointment. Regardless of whether the author gave up or not, can you come back and explain the ending?

I look forward to the new story beginning. I like Chang Ning and want to see through it. I look forward to a different and exciting performance 🤭

After reading a few chapters, I feel pretty good. The article that has already been written for hundreds of chapters is too long to read, and the new article is afraid that it will not be finished after writing it.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​The completely unnecessary killing of a fellow sect member, I feel that the author is cruel and cruel for the sake of cruelty, which makes people uncomfortable. 1. The protagonist and elite disciples such as Yang Pan'er kill monsters just for experience and good looks. The Foundation Establishment Pill is not important to them, but it is extremely important to the outer disciples. So Yang Pan'er didn't kill his fellow sect members for valuable treasures, or for the sake of life and death like digging up magic stones. It was the villain's brutality and face-saving, while the protagonist stood idly by. Why? To let readers see the hopeless struggle of the ants outside the door? What if the ants are replaced by the protagonist, won't they despair? 2. The cost of "meddling" is not high. In terms of seniority, the protagonist is a master uncle; in terms of combat power, he can defeat three against two. Yang Pan'er would never dare to kill his fellow disciples in front of the protagonist. The protagonist only needs to show his face to intimidate him, without saying a word, and three lives are saved. It is not even more troublesome than Wu Daman's words in Yaowang City. Why hide? In order to show that he is not the Holy Mother? When the protagonist was haunted by the water evil spirit, others were immune to it. Wouldn't it be complete? Third, it completely deviates from the spirit of Yaowang. Yao Wang fought for the sake of the casual cultivators and built Yao Wang City, but the protagonist, as a registered disciple and future successor, has no spirit of helping the weak. If both parties are outsiders or elites, the protagonist will still have something to say. But what is the difference between two golden elixir disciples, who are rich and wealthy, who rob and kill outer disciples just for the sake of good looks, and the big sect who bullies undependable cultivators? And what about the protagonist's performance? First, he hid, blaming them for hitting him in front of his eyes; he watched calmly as they killed two male outer sect cultivators, and finally, the outer sect female cultivator detonated the thunder bomb, blaming the female cultivator for hurting him. Others were forced to die together, and they were blamed for overestimating their own capabilities and fighting against elites with a golden elixir backing. So, does that mean that the female nun must face death obediently and not be able to take revenge even if she is a ghost? The protagonist's resistance to bullying is an act of righteousness, while others' resistance is an act of overestimation of one's own abilities and failure to die properly. What a ridiculous logic.

Can the editor come out and say something? Has the author stopped writing? Please give me a voice whether you want to write it or not... If you don't want to write it, don't write it. It doesn't matter. It's just a trap. But please don't whet the appetite of readers who love this article. It is a responsible attitude to come out and give an explanation.

The authors of Immortal Stew are all back, and I hope Juepin Lingxian can continue to write. After so many years, I have never looked forward to my first love so much 😁

Looking forward to it, I'm here to jump into the trap! There's a lot of people out there! !

It's a pity not to continue writing such a beautiful article. It's even more beautiful than the author's "Quarry Story". I really want to continue reading it. I want to see what the heroine's next adventure will bring to her magnificent life experience.

There shouldn't be any conflict if there is a male protagonist... It's not normal for the female protagonist to be so good and no one likes her

Someone please finish writing this book😭

If you abandon the article, just say it and save everyone from waiting in vain.

The author has finished writing the article. It is so beautiful. The author of Xian Stew has come back to fill up the hole. When will you come back｜

Even if I don't write it anymore, I'll come back and explain it. Thank you.

Hey, the well-written orthodox articles on cultivating immortals are no longer updated, and so is Xiandu. The articles on farming and cultivating immortals that I read before are also no longer updated. Instead, the popularity of the illogical and poor writing is very high, which is really contrary to Tiangang.

When will the author come back? I have been waiting for you for many years.

Our Guilan has been fighting for five years.

Ah, I finally couldn't help but read this book, and I finished it in one sitting. I can only wait silently for the update 😭. Come on, come on, come on! !