Hand in Hand on the Path to Immortality

The book written by the author is very good. Although the two protagonists are talented, their luck is slightly worse. The luck of the supporting characters is more like that of the protagonists in other books. On the road, one does not walk alone, but a hundred flowers bloom. Everyone has their own destiny and they all move forward. The protagonists are only two of them. It is refreshing, but the two protagonists are like reincarnations of great powers. There are also some settings that vaguely arrange everything. I don't like it.

Watch from beginning to end. See this result. I hope the author will continue writing. The writing is very good and the outline is good. Like it very much. This article can no longer be found in the PC version of Qidian. There is also a mobile phone. It is a pity. I hope to continue writing where I started. Finish writing this journey to immortality with your hands in hand. It's such a shame to dock the tail like this. No one even watched it. Hope it's finished.

This style of writing is very suitable for writing ancient romances. I predict that if the author abandons ancient romances, he will be able to make a breakthrough. Although the story is a bit dull, it can better highlight the calm atmosphere of ancient women ——It's been a while, so let me re-tell my thoughts. It doesn't matter whether the heroine is weak or not. It's impossible for the whole world to have good books, but the style of this book particularly touched me. It's a pity that the author didn't finish it

Suddenly I understood why a novel with a good layout and a good plot setting was not popular. It turned out that it was a bad eunuch. Don't look at the 800,000 words, but there are at least two to three million words left for the plot behind it, so be careful! Be careful!

What a beautiful book, why don't I write it later? Alas! ! ! ! ! !

Um? ? ? ! Don't write anymore? ! I think it looks pretty good, and the outline that follows will definitely look good when I write it! Why didn't the author write it?

I'm most afraid of seeing this kind of ending😭

Very interesting, good luck to the author! !

I don't quite understand why people say it looks good, maybe it just doesn't suit my taste. The heroine is a stubborn person, a kind of "selfish". Because he was unwilling to kill, he and Qin Feng got into trouble again and again. Lessons are never learned. There is a saying that "a gentleman does not stand under a dangerous wall." Hazards will not be assessed. I did not see a female monk who aspired to become an immortal, only a dodder plant.

It's a pity that I didn't finish it. It was very good. I hope the author can return to complete it when.