The Fifth Boundary

Not bad... So update soon. I also received rewards, recommendations, and monthly passes. Never be a eunuch...

Was the protagonist outwitted when he couldn't defeat Haruto? The King's Treasure is not as good as an E-level Noble Phantasm in his hands, especially when he let it escape for the second time. I don't believe there is no mysterious binding Noble Phantasm in the King's Treasure. Are there still people who can't take drugs even though they can't fight? This is not a sports meeting, you can choose to take drugs.

If you don't like Kasumigaoka Shiyu, should you cut off the relationship with the protagonist directly, or should you and the protagonist return to the way they were before? It's very uncomfortable to hang there all the time.

Is there any kind of novel that only writes Japanese and comprehensive comics, with a harem, no studs, no brainlessness, and the plot is not slow and most of it is daily life, the protagonist is semi-invincible, not a dog licker, a little strong, and not a loser at the beginning

There are too many villains written, I feel like the villain has to force ntr, I don't know why

It's really poisonous. Do you have to be cheated all of a sudden before you accept a senior? Others are green thumbs, so you are being greenlit by others, right? And he just confessed and was rejected, so he fell in love with someone else? Is your protagonist still a spare tire?

Wow, the author is so perseverant. He kept writing this book even though the results were not good. I read a lot of negative reviews and gave him some mental support.

Seeing that it's Wo Ying's opening, I'm sorry that I won't continue reading.

If girls like Kasumi Akira Shiyu are like this in anime, you might think they are cute when you see them, and their venomous tongue is cute, but if you put them in reality, girls like this will be very annoying.

What exactly makes an author so persistent?

The combat power system is broken. Do you really think that ghouls can become stronger without limit? Wouldn't it be better to just get a ghoul bloodline like this? Just swallow this few people and you can reach level 9 or 10. Just write about ghouls ruling the world. The king's treasure house is used to store drinks? Tm talent. The characters that should be written are not written, and the things that should not be written are not filled in. I don't understand why readers read this book. Changing the system midway is like eating candy. As soon as you take a bite, you find that it is filled with shit, and the shit is actually poisonous. The portrayal of the characters is not good either, and the storyboards are even worse. They are left hanging all the time. Just write what you want, and there is so much nonsense. There are also problems with the character setting, and you can let yourself go infinitely. The mastery of rhythm makes people speechless. I don't know whether I have drafted it or not, and I write whatever comes to mind. This is definitely the book I have read the most. Summary: The early stage was okay. The pacing, storyboards, and characters in the middle period were incomprehensible, almost like the author, and the later period was a mess. Newcomers enter the trap with caution.

From the introduction to this book, you can tell that the author used it for his own pleasure.

The author is so ruthless, almost no one subscribes and can continue to write

You'd better revise it. I haven't seen it in the comments, but I haven't seen it, but if you do this, the fans of that anime will be discouraged and they will criticize you. Then, the second dimension of anime originally represents beautiful things. Don't make these become so hypocritical. If you must write, just create a character of your own.

Senior sister persuades you to quit, mdzz likes to be a spare tire so much?

Entering the opening chapter is Hero Academia, forget it, forget it.

Can a ghoul be as strong as a heroic spirit? Kurumi can't beat Sakuya Izayoi who can only throw knives from time to time!

Another hodgepodge😏.

This kind of hodgepodge writing method will probably offend fans of the original work, because the world view of the works is very different, and the emotions and thoughts expressed are very different. It feels uncomfortable to force the matching. Although the original plot is very thoughtful, fan fiction is not very suitable for this kind of writing. Unless it can be written at a very high level, the author's level is still worthy of recognition, although I don't like it very much.

The author knows that he wants to write well, but the problem is the author. Go and read other people's novels and learn from them. Some of the protagonists in your plots are too stupid, and the Madonna-type protagonists in current novels are really not good. Not many people are willing to read the kind-hearted protagonist who looks like a white lotus. There is nothing wrong with being kind, but being too kind is stupid.

Come on, author. I admire authors like you very much. Only those who have written books can know how difficult it is to keep writing. So, come on, author.