Open Sea

What do you say about this book? It's not that the writing is bad, it's not that the plot is awkward, and it's not that it's poisonous. It just leaves readers scratching their heads. In other stories, the goal is clearly stated at the beginning. If you want to rebel, do it step by step. All the plots serve the goal of rebellion. If you want to be a powerful minister, the entire plot must be focused on the goal of becoming a powerful minister. Where is this one? The name is Kaihai. I wrote hundreds of chapters but didn't write much about Kaihai. He was a hammer here and a stick here and there, and he worked as a soldier in a guard station. He finally got ahead. Just when it was time to work on the protagonist and show off his talents, the author suddenly jumped the plot and jumped to Xiangshan to deal with Franji and pirates. Forget it, Xiangshan is developing steadily. I thought I was going to talk about how to open the sea, but the author suddenly made a U-turn and went to the border to train troops. The advantages of writing this way are not known at present, but the disadvantages are obvious. Each plot does not get enough satisfying feedback, and always gives readers an inexplicable feeling. The protagonist does not have any clear goals, and even the feeling of seeking strength and advancement in troubled times is not described enough, making readers feel that the protagonist's goals have always been hazy, and the reading is also very confusing. I have read a lot of historical time travel stories. I was halfway through this book and realized that I had abandoned it before, but I couldn't remember why I abandoned it. Now that I think about it, it's because of this reason. Can you explain clearly what your protagonist is going to do? Halfway through the cooking, I ran to the side to poop. It was really powerless.

To be honest, the author's knowledge and writing techniques of this book are not limited to online writing. It has the elements of refreshing writing, but it also has the flavor of "joking about history". Just as the "Fifteen Years of Wanli" reminds us, the root of the ups and downs has been from the time when the country was peaceful and the people were peaceful, so we set a time to travel through it when it is not too late, bring modern science and engineering knowledge, political wisdom and historical mirrors, and devote ourselves to opening up the sea to save the nation and prosper the empire. Instead of personal power, the Chinese use fantasy, conjecture, and the unknown theory of traveling through time and space to give history a new possibility. The subsequent journey will not only stop at Chen Mu's struggle history or online biography, but also be able to discuss the general trend and realize the dream of prosperity. Many "poisonous points" in the comment area are from the typical readers' perspective of online articles, such as the position of the two female characters (it does not support monogamy and multiple concubines under the feudal patriarchy, but there is indeed not much mention in the article about love and marriage, but it can be said to be half of the country in the comment area), the role of the protagonist, and the protagonist's goal and the attitude of the centralized emperor (that is, the other half mentioned above). This is in line with the habit of reading articles at the starting point. This article certainly does not break away from many of the routines of online articles, but many book reviews that only focus on this are a bit disappointing compared with the author's writing style and interest, so I squeezed out the time to write a review, which can be regarded as support. This book far exceeds my knowledge base in terms of history and geography, so it is very slow to read, and sometimes (such as those khanates) I am even confused. I have been very busy in the past six months. I read more carefully before going out to sea. I can get the general outline in the middle. There is too much left behind in the last two or three hundred chapters. I will jump to understand the progress and read it slowly when I have time in the future. I hope the author can maintain his thinking and vision so that this dream-like Ming Empire can be presented coherently and vividly. As for whether to continue to increase the protagonist's role to satisfy the taste of readers who are following the update, including the roles of the two ladies, on the basis of focusing on the Dongyang Army, or to logically promote the activities of each person and department according to the progress of sea development, this balanced consideration, I just hope it will not be too biased.

I like this book. I think this book is actually the best among the historical novels I have read in so many years. It is different from other historical novels. The protagonist is not a wise or mighty hero, and the historical figures are not the protagonist's tools. In that era of change, everyone was looking for a way out of this ancient country. Not only the protagonist was thinking about it, Zhang Juzheng, Gao Gong, Qi Jiguang, these famous ministers and generals who left their names in history, were all looking for it. So the protagonist is just an Eastern minister now. He is just a beacon, lighting the way to the new era for the ancient era. This is enough.

Say goodbye with tears. Great book! ! !

It gave me the feeling that I couldn't understand it unless I read it word for word. It was mixed with too much information from Baidu. The story was quite good, but it was too wordy.

The writing in the front is pretty good, the characters are well created, and everyone has their own stand and independent thoughts, but the latter part is more dry to be honest, and you can't see the motivations and logic of many characters doing certain things at all, and there are more sensational parts. However, the author obviously put a lot of effort into reviewing the information. The data is very detailed and you can learn a lot of historical knowledge and evaluate the food overall. Historical writings are niche and minefield, making little money. It is not easy for the author to hope to continue his work. Also fully booked and supported.

The writing is very good, but there are a lot of typos and little use of punctuation, making it difficult to read. Sentence reading is very important. All recommendation tickets are given away

What can I say? The author's writing style is not bad, but many places are a bit obscure and difficult to understand. I hope he can speak more clearly.

Writing well means writing well! ! !

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It could have become a masterpiece like the late Ming Dynasty, but unfortunately the author's own courage and insight are not enough, plus he is probably a fan at heart, so in the end it is only at the level of dry food+. I still say the same thing, the more you know about these feudal dynasties, the less likely you are to fan them. What's more, among the unified dynasties, the Ming Dynasty is still the last type of crotch-pushing type, which is better than defeating the Song Dynasty (slavery colonial empires such as the Manchu and Qing Dynasties are not considered orthodox).

The two worst things I can't accept. Having a harem in modern society, having a single heroine in ancient society.

Ming Chuan has a lot of novels, a lot of junk, and a lot of classic works. No matter who writes them, there will be a lot of pressure. But I am still very confident in Seizing the Luhou. After all, I have been unique and unique in the Three Kingdoms, and I have unified the country once with the natives in "Seizing the Tripod". Strictly speaking, Winning the Ding is unfinished, but the opening is powerful, the middle flows smoothly, the story is powerful, and the writing is concise. In addition to the vivid image of the protagonist himself, other characters such as Jiang Jin, Dian Yi, Zhang He, etc. Are also very successfully created. Among the Three Kingdoms novels, I am ignorant of the idea of ​​unifying the country in an indigenous way. This is the only one I have ever seen. The protagonist of "Open the Sea" is in Guangdong. It seems that this Ming Dynasty has a tendency to develop into the sea? There are many novels based on the sea and gradually conquering the interior, but there are very few good works. Although "Opening the Sea" has just begun its journey, a few chapters have already laid out a picture of the customs of the lower class, especially military households, in the Ming Dynasty. The protagonist's feelings of powerlessness and thoughts of trying to survive as an ordinary person are already very moving. The image characteristics of several of his subordinates were also portrayed by the author respectively. This also shows the author's profound writing skills. I believe that Duo Luhou can tell this story well, and I look forward to "Opening the Sea" becoming more and more moving.

The author is really miserable. He wrote a good book. The comments exploded first. There was a fight over whether he should be the emperor or not. Isn't this book about the middle of the Ming Dynasty? It was at its peak, and a feudal dynasty was rebelling at its peak. What did you think? Did you really think that you could do anything after reading the novel for two days? 😅

I would like to ask if this book can independently claim the throne and conquer the world? If you have been working for Zhu Ming, you should not read it.

When I read history books, I usually only read about people who were emperors, because I read history books just to see how history will change a lot in the future. . Especially the Ming and Qing Dynasties, not to mention the Qing Dynasty. In the early Ming Dynasty, you were not the emperor, you were only a monarch and minister, and what you could change was very limited. The history you changed might be better or worse than the original history, and more likely, you could not change anything because you couldn't do the Ming Dynasty. In the middle Ming Dynasty, classes had been solidified, and there were already examples of reform failures; I won't go into detail about the late Ming Dynasty. Those who are kings and ministers only look to the early Tang Dynasty. . The above is just my personal opinion. I won't comment on this book because I haven't read it. I will take a brief look at it later. Pig's trotters are just for powerful officials, and this book is not my cup of tea!

Alas, I really liked Yan Qingyao being with the protagonist. Later it became clear that the protagonist liked Miss Yan, but the main wife turned out to be a supporting actress who appeared out of nowhere. . . Many people probably don't know what the position of a head wife in ancient China meant. Well.

I am a dignified Chen Mu, a man of eight feet, a dignified third-grade officer who fought his way out of a pile of dead people with swords and guns. Why rely on the wife's family and the in-law family! I, Chen Mu, swept across the South China Sea and shocked all the barbarians. Who dares to laugh? Come on, I won't marry anyone other than shopkeeper Xiaoyan!

The Ming Dynasty would not be saved if it did not rebel and overthrow it and start over. From the very beginning of the founding of the Ming Dynasty, land annexation was doomed and corruption was serious!

I don't want to see such a protagonist. The fate of the common people cannot be changed. The common people should be killed by the Ming Dynasty army. Even if it is useless to occupy the entire earth, the suffering is still the common people. The protagonist will continue to work for the emperor instead of seeking welfare for the common people.

He returned to the Ming Dynasty and became a slave. Are you a dignified time traveler, or do you want a hundred thousand royals to lie on the common people, drink blood and eat meat? Are you going to save the princes and nobles or the common people?

Damn it, do those who lead the rebellion have any brains? 1. Emperor Wanli was the emperor of the Han people, and the Ming Dynasty was the most righteous to win the country 2. Due to the influence of the protagonist's time travel, Emperor Wanli was already in his prosperous age, and Emperor Wanli was also influenced in a good direction 3. In the Age of Discovery, monarchs and ministers should be united and grasp the pulse of the times, or else wait until Europe develops to define the world again? 4. This book is about farming. If you want to know about the rebellion, go to the Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China. There are still people who went through the Qing Dynasty and did not rebel. Why don't you criticize them?

In the end, I took the lady from Boshu, which is really awesome. The protagonist has done so many things that are different from ordinary people, but he is afraid of what others will say about marrying a wife. You are a military commander, and even if you are a civil servant, they will look down on you from the bottom of their hearts. They are treating you well now because they use you. Can't the protagonist understand? Whoever you marry has no impact on your future. Besides, do you need Banzhou's support? What did Banzhou give you? Those dowries? Isn't your main development at sea? With Dayang, do you still care about the support from Banzhou? This article was written in the first half of the story. The single man held it in for several years and had no idea. I thought he was going to do something big, but in the end it was an inexplicable marriage. What about the original persistence? Listening to the cat meowing in the brother's house in the middle of the night, did Chen Sailu put the work in the blunderbuss tube to solve it? Let's put it this way, Sai Lv's material status in the Ming Dynasty was high, but psychologically and spiritually he was not worthy of Xiao Yan. The author's portrayal here is baffling, Sai Lv is a fool, over

Back in ancient times, you had to be the emperor yourself, otherwise you just farmed honestly and didn't cause trouble! For a feudal society, it is useless for you to engage in black technology. In the prosperous times, everyone lived a good life. If you engage in technology, the labor force will be liberated. If you do not work, some people will make a revolution! In the apocalypse, if you engage in black technology and not engage in internal affairs, you are subsidizing the enemy.

Eight out of ten readers today are blind-minded. Kaihai's book was originally quite good, but because he married a girl from the Yang family, his popularity dropped to the bottom; just because he didn't rebel, he was talked about by a group of trainees from the beginning to now. I think these days, if you want to write a good book, you have to please the target audience, right? Back then, a group of people talked about a certain Qin story about rebellion, saying that they would abandon the story if they didn't rebel. I don't know if the author forcedly re-enacted the troubled times of the late Qin Dynasty that had been avoided in order to please readers. The protagonist was made to use golden fingers to make it awkward, and the villain also became single-minded and stupid. In the end, he forced a regency republic, which made me embarrassed to death. So let's just write this book and stop putting our butts on the common people of Guizhou. Sit down on the feudal ruling class and act like a prince. There is no need to rebel and there is no need to worry about opening a harem, and the working people below are exploited in a fancy way. Anyway, what these people who are clamoring to rebel against themselves as emperors want to see is not time travel at all, but Wushuang. As long as you write that the protagonist can easily crush the ancients by virtue of his identity as an ordinary modern person, they will be happy. The more vigorously the protagonist exploits, the happier they will be, as if they are also an exploiting class (manual comedy saves lives).

Let me also tell you my personal opinion. Many people have opinions about (Mingfen). In fact, whether (Mingfen) wants to protect the Ming Dynasty or conquer the world and become the emperor, I dare say that all those who read or write Ming Dynasty novels are actually doing it so that they will not be slaves in the next two hundred years. I know when the word "mingfen" came into being, it became the target of some traitors. Later, the word "mingfen" was used by these traitors to confuse people, divert attention, further demean and look down on them. I am proud of Mingfen, just like I am proud of the Han people.

Although I haven't read it yet, I just read the review and I'm like, why do so many people like to rebel? If you are an ordinary person in modern times and you travel through the Ming Dynasty, if you are directly wearing the body, there is no system, no golden fingers, the first thing you want to think about is to survive. Even if you rely on the knowledge that surpasses the ancients and live very freely, what are you going to rebel against? Just an ordinary person, to put it bluntly, any high-ranking official can beat you to death with their brains. Just because you have insights beyond the times, it does not mean that you have that kind of IQ. Although novels can be YY, they must have a certain degree. Will people who are brainless like to read them? I personally feel this way, don't troll if you don't like it. If trolls say that they don't dare to rebel when they go back, what a slave you are, then you should first refute my words, 'Tell me which province or city you are in now, and I will see if the news will say that there is a rebellion there in a while. Of course, if you wear it clean and don't rebel, put an electric drill on the chrysanthemum, even if it doesn't succeed, you still want him to cause chaos

Why are there so many rebellious posts in the comments about this book? (Don't criticize my posts if you don't have any cultural knowledge, I think you are embarrassing.) I remember that many great authors wrote novels about the history of the Ming Dynasty, and I didn't see readers telling the protagonist to rebel. Why are there so many posts about rebellion in this book? (This book seems to be about farming and not about rebellion!) Your cultural and scientific level (Including Chinese, mathematics, physics, chemistry, biology, sociology, management, psychology and other knowledge.) Your character, your moral quality, these are factors that affect the success of your rebellion. Every founding emperor or person who can establish a career, their abilities are very strong! If you can't even complete the tasks assigned to you by your boss in real life, your destiny is to "farm" if you travel to ancient times If you travel to the ancient ruling class, will you change your life? (A flowing dynasty, an iron-clad family) You also don't want to think about rebellion. Do you mean rebellion is just rebellion? The rebels are immortal? Every time a court changes and a dynasty falls, don't a large number of people die? Can it slow down every few decades? Does your interest group support your rebellion? The source of troops, food and grass, funds, social environment, and international situation, These are all factors that can affect whether your rebellion can succeed. Even if your rebellion succeeds, how will you appease the trauma caused by the war in the future? Do you rule your country with feudalism, capitalism or socialism? Does the social form you choose fit the social background of the time? Technology, culture, society, customs, how do you solve these problems? How to ensure the current dominant position in the world colonial war?

I think the author has put the cart before the horse. It is very important to look up historical information, but the most important thing for everyone is to read the story. As for the story, I think the writing style and plot are more important. The historical information is just a background. Relatively speaking, good writing can make people more immersed in it. I read it all from the beginning of Zongbing. To be honest, Zongbing was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more unbearable towards the end. Both the character descriptions and the dialogues were too out of the ordinary, making it difficult for people to sink into it. I think the author should pay more attention to polishing the text, even paragraphing, and punctuation. Sorry to say it too bluntly, I can only say that love is deep and responsibility is deep. I still hope to see the birth of a good novel.

Don't tell me that everything is a feudal dynasty. There were also gaps between feudal dynasties. Don't talk to me about the sufferings of ordinary people. Throughout the ancient world, people's lives were very poor. China is considered good, so we cannot completely deny ancient times because of this. On one point, in terms of military technology and tactics, the Ming Dynasty continued to make progress. From the early Ming Dynasty, the main firearms were door guns, and artillery was small and weak in close proximity. In the later period, the main musket was the matchlock, and the Frankie gun and the Hudun gun were equipped with the entire Ming army within a few decades. With the improvement of heavy artillery technology, heavy artillery tactics emerged in the late Ming Dynasty, and car camp tactics were also more widely used. These new weapons generally appeared in the middle and early 16th century, and were widely used in the late 16th and early 17th centuries. What about the Qing Dynasty? Since the situation on the mainland has been basically stable, the tactics have been fixed, and they are still the same as they were in the late Ming Dynasty. Until the Second Opium War. During this period of nearly 200 years, the Manchu Qing Dynasty had no chance to come into contact with advanced weapons. How is it possible? Guangzhou Line 13 is still open. Tributes from British missions also brought advanced weapons, even to the battlefield. During the war against Burma during the Qianlong period, the Burmese also captured the broken-hair guns purchased from the British. The Manchu Qing government did not choose to imitate and popularize these new weapons. Instead, they shelved them or limited them to the Royal Guards. Why do this? It's not like using Manchu to control Han