One Piece: I Am a Fortune Teller
海贼之我为戏命师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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3Chapters
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A 10,000-word short story? That's awesome.
It's not bad, but what you wrote about Jhin still feels a bit out of place, especially when Jhin fired the third shot, he said: This is not dead, very good (probably written like this 😰) The thief is out of character, but the details are still a little short of 😐. The fruit should be a cat fruit - a tiger fruit or a tiger fruit 😥, but overall it is very NICE, the author, please give it a try! Personal opinion, for reference only.