
Motokari
元狩
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 128k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5.9kRecommends
9.2kFans
56Chapters
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Chapter 1 of Night
Eunuchs will be eunuchs, don't put the blame on the trend. The book is a good book and the story is wonderful, no doubt about it. Die in updates. New book issue, updated once a day. Looking at the starting point, how many have achieved good results by doing this? Don't blame your problems on the environment. Trend: I won't take the blame.
Eunuch! ! ! I have read many books, and this is the first time I have given a reward (although not much) to encourage it before it is put on the shelf. The result is really speechless. To be honest, no matter what trendy new book you change, the results will not be good if you update it every day.
Now is the time to read the dynasty. Does the former dynasty Shanda still want to counterattack? 😏
The writing is sophisticated and the descriptions are delicate and rich. It is a good book. Although there are some cliché elements in the setting, what I like is not the setting, but the story. After reading too many books, I discovered a truth, that is, content is king and quality is king. The quality of the story and its ability to stay on the bookshelf are more important than anything else. I hope the author can keep the quality updated. The slow update speed is not a problem for me personally. There are many more books that don't stay on my bookshelf for more than a few days or weeks. Come on, author.
Don't just blame the readers
Don't just blame the readers, there must be internal and external conditions to achieve things. Novels that abuse the protagonist, such as Tonglu in Troubled Times, Yang Jian - Life is Long and Hate the Water, have also become popular. Slow-paced novels also have many fans who are waiting for updates every month. Those who do not write formal literature in YY also have a large number of loyal readers. You don't want to write clichés, but you have to be strong. No matter how you write novels at the starting point, you are writing legendary novels, not realistic novels, so you must have something that can capture the interest of readers. As I said before, the author of this book tried to use a formal literary writing method, but his own level is still lacking, and he failed to grasp the balance between interest and literature, reader satisfaction and plot rigor, writing speed and detailed expression. In other words, the ambition is too high, but there is nothing you can do. In fact, you should take your time, don't set your position so high all at once, or write a few more books to gradually improve the literary quality, or start with something more cliché to build popularity first, and then gradually improve the literary quality. Moreover, the author still reads too few online novels. For example, the protagonist has a child. This is actually a very dangerous trap in online novels. It cannot be touched easily, but the author casually takes a step into it. For example, the abuser, this is also something that cannot be touched easily now. Generally, best-selling authors will cleverly use fast updates to fill the time gap, so that the plot of the abuse of the master can be shortened for readers. If it was the early days of online literature, it might not be a problem for the author to write like this. At that time, quality and innovation were valued, and word-of-mouth was helped by people to promote it. However, from the current starting point, unless you are already popular and platinum and have fans, it is better not to pursue literature too much first, especially if the update speed is not fast.
I think the reason for the poor performance of this book may be that there is a conflict between delicate writing and refreshing writing. Note that I said delicate writing is not good. Although delicate writing is good, it should not appear in cool articles. Most of the cool articles have one thing in common, the overall pace is fast, and the pace of this book is too slow. I guess this is also the reason why some people don't read it. The cool articles with too slow pace will make people feel dragged out.
Why did the dog die? Either let the dog die from the beginning or simply die of old age. The loyal dog that has been described for so long dies like this, and the protagonist's tragic bloodline is ruined. I immediately don't want to read the following chapters. It is not suitable for people who regard reading as leisure.
I've rewarded you, now let's say a few words
This book was really excellent before the author forced it to give up. I've been a bookworm for more than ten years and it's really good. There's nothing to say about the writing or stories. It doesn't matter if the updates are slow, as long as it's good to read. But the next plot is a bit confusing. To be honest, it would be good to get rid of the abandoned plot and continue writing it. Is this plot to introduce the background? Then your writing and ink are too little. This plot was written as soon as it was written, and it was acceptable. However, this plot is not very good in the context of you updating it once a day, and it will dissuade many people. Can you hold off a little later? Write that he can cultivate, and then be abolished? And then explode, letting the reader's unhappiness pass quickly?
Protagonist Our Lady White Lotus Female Protagonist Green Tea
After all, I am still a writer of online novels
I'm really not a god. What happened? Why did it disappear? The author will think about it and change it to rewrite the story about the explosion of spiritual energy and the death of people. . It's helpful, the front is really beautiful
I don't think it has anything to do with trends. It's just that the writing is not good-looking. The protagonist's apprenticeship with the Immortal Sect is very tacky, and the rest of the story is too slow. Don't talk about update issues. The early stage of this book is very different from the Perfect Life, and it has no aura at all. Just like the later stage of the Perfect Life, it is a pity to discard it if it is tasteless. Come on for the next book!
Kings are not respected by blood. I like the latest one very much. I envy and like this kind of strong character. I have read too many novels where blood determines everything, so I want to read one that relies on myself. I hope I won't rely on my bloodline to defeat heaven and earth. That would be too disappointing.
I saw that many people in the book reviews had some objections to the book Shang Sanjiang. I will explain it here to prevent newcomers from being dismissed by the book review section. First of all, if you are looking for cool writing and hate slow reading, don't read it. This book is extremely toxic to you. Then tell me what I think. This book can be called a masterpiece: countless details of life exaggerate the reality of the world in the book, the slow-burning plot ensures the vividness of the characters, and the language is full of the atmosphere of that era. The undercurrent of power, the contrast between the high-ranking fairy sect and the humble life of the protagonist made me unable to stop. On this basis, the early plot of torturing the master made me feel like I was watching a fantasy epic. Generally speaking, this book does not fit in with the general impetuous atmosphere of Qidian, but if you calm down and appreciate it as a truly excellent literary work, you will be able to discover the literary charm contained in the book. Finally, regarding the routines in the book, I want to say: Routines everywhere are called poisonous points, and appropriate routines are called excellence. (The protagonist is either extremely talented, mediocre or useless. Everyone has used these before, so they are all routines?)
What a pity... I hope you can still think of this unfinished story when you don't have to worry about five buckets of rice. Waiting for your return.
Not to mention anything else, I will pursue it to the end just because of the writing style. . . . .
I always wonder if it is a waste stream. As a writer of urban fantasy, Lao Dao writes with delicacy and looks at his skills. Why do you want to pretend to be so fast? What's the point of pretending to be like reading a running account in Chapter 10?
Passing by recommendation 👍
Passing by recommendation 👍
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Are you a eunuch? After collecting it, I looked through the bookshelf tonight and found that it has not been updated!
Passing by recommendation 👍
When will Brother Dao come back and continue writing about Yuanshou? . . This book is really great. If you keep writing it, you will definitely become a great person. . . As long as you write, I will follow it to the end.
Just because you don't comment doesn't mean you don't follow this book. In fact, this book is the novel that I have paid most attention to recently. I think it is not because I don't pay attention to it, but because the master doesn't update it much every day, so I just keep reading it. Yuanshou's three views are very upright. I hope to update a little more chapter, maybe the clouds will clear and the moon will shine. Also, the plot line is a little slow, and only the protagonist can practice. If he is not a master, it is really difficult for a small author to stick to this routine.
Keep writing this book, it would be a pity not to write it
It's getting better gradually, but the updates are not strong enough.
I give my most sincere recommendation vote to those who are willing to write good stories. It's not easy to sail against the current. May all your efforts be rewarded!
If my guess is correct, the reason for the leakage of the clepsydra is the eyes of the protagonist