Conan Reborn as a Detective

I like the previous part very much, including Kido's pretentiousness, which is always on point, and the scale is also very measured. But to be honest, the extra chapter comes a bit abruptly. I was still high-spirited in the last chapter, but suddenly fell into despair in the next chapter, and was forced to remain anonymous for ten years. To be honest, the gap is too big, this book I thought that the protagonist was strong enough and it was time for a decisive battle with the organization. As a result, the part of the organization was skipped directly, and a new force appeared inexplicably. This force even made the protagonist, whose strength value is almost higher than the current world level, not even able to parry, and ran away directly, which felt a bit strange. But I can probably understand that there are foreshadowings before filling in all this, including the role of the transformation card. I thought about why I found it a bit unacceptable to fill in this foreshadowing. It was because before, Gao Cheng's main focus was on his swordsmanship, a man who could cut satellites with his sword. In our opinion, the transformation card has always been used to tease Kyogoku Makoto, a kind of condiment. As a result, he was suddenly told that the protagonist's skills were of no use at all. Instead, he needed to rely on condiments to endure for ten years in order to get revenge. This can indeed fill in the foreshadowing of the seasoning, but it takes away from the main line that has been there before. Logically speaking, if you tolerate it for ten years and finally get revenge by changing your ways, what difference does it make if you have sword skills or not? In fact, if you look at the extra chapters, the plot should not be too bad. The protagonist is no longer purely righteous, but instead has a battle of wits and courage with his former partners, and there is also a large gathering of detectives. These plots should not be bad. It's just that maybe I don't want to believe that this is the story of the unparalleled swordsman Takanoge Kido. Maybe as the protagonist himself said, Takanoge is dead. He died ten years ago. He died with the black organization with one sword and one man. The story that follows is about a professor named Yukawa Manabu's resistance to government oppression.

I still want to give the author some personal suggestions. I feel that the settings are really good, but the plot development and character dialogue are almost unchanged. I think it will actually reduce the sense of immersion. And because of the expressiveness of the animation, there are some shortcomings in recreating the same description in the novel. After all, readers have more or less seen some of the original works, which may make people feel a bit lazy. In addition, there are actually bugs in such a complete application. Take Chapter 283 Countdown to Heaven as an example. In the original work, Gin knew that Shirley was in the Twin Towers because he monitored Shirley's phone calls to his sister at night. However, because of the forced plot, Xiao Ai lived in the protagonist's house and there was no phone call. Theoretically, Gin did not know that Shirley would appear here. (Maybe I haven't caught up on the plot later, if so, I apologize.) Overall, I think the writing is quite attractive. I hope the author can read it. This is just a personal suggestion. If possible, add some daily plots to reconcile the tension of solving the case and increase the interest. In addition, the endings and processes of some cases can be appropriately adapted, similar to operations such as preventing them in advance. , Some characters are quite regrettable; finally, if possible, the author can try original events. The serialization rhythm of the starting point may be a bit difficult, but when making originals, you can consider writing slower, and it doesn't matter if it is not so good or perfect, because the freshness and creative space of the original case plot cannot be compared with the original adaptation, and the author can also exercise his writing skills very well. Maybe some of the ideas are taken for granted, but overall I still hope that the author can write better and better novels. I am also looking forward to the handling of the emotional line. Come on 🤝

There are a lot of cases to write about, but the progress of each case is very fast. At the beginning, people watching were confused. Later, it was a little better, but there were many plots that made people feel dizzy when jumping between chapters. Even if they copied the plot, there was no need to copy all the plots of Jiqianji. Wouldn't it be better to slow down the pace a little to make people feel more immersed? Some less important plots can be skipped, and then there must be a main line and development, otherwise it will be like watching endless unit dramas and it will make people tired. Although the black organization should be regarded as the main line, as far as I saw 20% of it has always been as casual as a light novel. In terms of purpose, the emotional scenes have become like the second generation of Mouri Kogoro. He longs for romantic encounters but has no action for the girls who are easily available around him. It is simply schizophrenic. From a personal point of view, I don't like a bit pretentious girl like Mariko, but it's not impossible to accept it as a female protagonist. Yes, judging from other reviews, the author is writing about the evolution of Ultraman fighting. I also read a little bit of that book. The writing is difficult to describe in one sentence, and it is difficult to have a sense of involvement. This one can be seen as an improvement. I almost gave up on the writing at the beginning, but then the writing got better and better, except for the connection of some chapters. It even makes me think that I should read less of one chapter. Come on, author. I have written more than two million words. I hope I can write in my own style and not completely copy the plot. After all, I don't know when the original work will be finished. I must have my own ideas to make up a happy ending.

I feel that the reason why many people can read it is not because they didn't notice what many people criticized or because the aesthetics are too poor, but because the protagonist Gao Cheng of this novel did what many fans and even outsiders wanted to do. For example, let Ai live with him, become a famous detective, become a peerless master, become good friends with many plot characters, stop many people who should not make mistakes, or save many people who do not want to die but should have died (such as Honest Doctor), and the protagonist is the self that many people dream of, and is a bit afraid of trouble. But deep down, he is unwilling to give up when faced with difficult things. He does not have the extreme values that many Conan fandom protagonists often have. He does not hope that anyone will die. He will help anyone who is about to die. It can be said that he has a very upright outlook on life, so I don't think there is any sense of disobedience in becoming good friends with Conan and the others. I have watched Conan for a long time since I was a child, and I also read a lot of Conan fanfics. Kido Takainari's character is my favorite. Moreover, the heroine who has been criticized by many people is Sonoko. This seems to be the inherent prejudice of many people. They think that Sonoko is too open-minded and a very carefree girl. In fact, those who have watched Conan for a long time know that Sonoko is a very good girl. She is obviously one of the best eldest ladies in the world, but she does not have the airs of a eldest lady. She plays with many people who are not very rich, such as Mao Lilan and the detective team. They are very popular, and they often take them to places that ordinary people can't go. It can be said that most people are not as good as Sonoko to their friends, and Sonoko's love interest was before he had anyone he really liked. After having the dark horse prince, all his heart was gone. If you still have any objections, please watch Conan carefully. It is really annoying to casually use your own stereotype to belittle an anime character. I think many people don't like Yuanzi as the heroine, maybe because Xiao Ai is around. From the plot description, Xiao Ai already likes the male protagonist deep down, but she is cut off by Yuanzi. (From here I point out the problems of the novel that I personally think) I also think Xiao Ai is better than Yuanzi as the heroine. Wouldn't it be nice to get rid of the black clothes and regain an adult body before dating? Why are you in such a hurry to fall in love? There are so many single male protagonists. The plot development (whether the main plot or the daily plot) is too fast. Many people who read Conan fan fiction don't care about how clever your reasoning is. If they really care about it, the original version is not good. What is the point of catching people in fan fiction? It lies in the impact that the protagonist has on the original plot after being inserted into the world, or to put it another way, by treating him as the protagonist, he can travel to the world of Conan to do things that the original plot failed to do but regretfully, and become good friends with those plot characters. From these points of view, there is no need to hurry up and push forward the original plot. Slow down the reasoning of the plot. Between cases, there will be more daily life in the case. Then, as the plot is advanced bit by bit, people will feel that the protagonist and plot characters are more flesh and blood. You can write some original plots by yourself. The reasoning does not need to be too advanced, the logic is self-consistent, and you have to have some personal things of your own. Personally, I feel that the current situation of this book cannot be said to have half a foot in the coffin, and it will not reach a higher level if it is written. I should try to finish it as soon as possible and give fans a better ending. If the author continues to write Conan novels or other types of novels, he can correct some of the flaws in his writing. I like the characters in your novels, whether it is Ultraman or Conan, and I hope you can go further. Come on! 😚😄

I have been reading books for a year now. When I first started reading, there were only a few dozen pages, and now there are so many chapters. From the beginning, I could only rely on the one-minute detective mode, but now the system has basically been diluted, which allowed me to see the growth of the protagonist. It is not that he is superior in various ways from the beginning, or relies on the system all the time. I feel very good about reading, and I often go back and read it again. This is the first fanfic that makes me want to look back. Compared with other Conan fanfics, I think the biggest feature is that the protagonist starts to show off his IQ from the beginning like other books. The character image is still very distinct, and a flesh-and-blood character is written. Watching the protagonist slowly learn to think about various cases instead of relying on the system and prophets all the time made me feel very bright. With the system basically out of sight, I almost forgot there was one. Let me see now that the handling of the emotional line is very good. I am annoyed by reading some books that I don't want to read. Personally, I don't like the harem plot. Are relationships the same as collecting stamps? It's not very satisfying, but I think the emotional development in this book is very realistic, and I quite enjoyed reading it. I feel that the processing of the reasoning is quite good, and it does not feel too abrupt. I feel that the narrative of the story is quite good, but it has been a long time since I visited Lake Toya World! It's been a while since I've been there! It's been a while since I've been there! (Say important things three times) But in fact, it is normal to think about it. After all, it is a world of reasoning. How about attacking the black organization from behind every day and every second? Overall, the book is very good and I like it very much. It is the best Conan fanfic I have ever read. I hope the author can work hard. The recent update speed is a bit touching. I went back to read it again from the case of Hotaru Genji. Do you dare to give me some help? Finally, I attach a little starting coin reward to provide the author with a little motivation, not much but to express my feelings. Finally, I still hope to update, update, update as soon as possible

This is a very good Conan fanfic. It is different from a certain wizard novel titled Conan. The protagonist is a real detective. He relies on the system for reasoning in the early stage, but gradually breaks away from the system later on. Reasoning is the ability to become one's own, and it does not depress the performance of Conan and other supporting characters, including the tone, which is pure Conan style. In particular, the protagonist also maintains a heart of persuading people to do good during the investigation process. The cases are connected one after another, closely connected, and full of useful information (Have the author ever thought about writing some daily ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ)? The protagonist's three views are very correct, and the experience of the work is very good. Every case is a reflection of some human nature. Excellent author, the current emotional line seems to be between Xiaoai and Yuanzi? But it seems that the main thing is to investigate~ Sonoko is quite beautiful when she puts down her hairband, but I feel that Xiao Ai is already an indispensable part of the protagonist's life. It depends on the author (for children... Of course for adults...)_(:3∠) I admire the author, this is really the best Conan fan I have ever seen, I feel like it, cheers for the author

For those who say Sonoko can't be the heroine, please tell me which girl who doesn't often hang out with her boyfriend isn't a nymphomaniac. Even if you have a boyfriend who is always with you but is not very good, what's the use? Men often get interested in sex.

I just read the beginning, and I feel that the protagonist is very mentally retarded. Even if he has no talent, it's true. You said that you introduced kendo at the beginning, why don't you exercise? You don't have a good body to be a detective, right? The birthday boy always eats arsenic

Another day of waiting for updates. Many readers feel the same as me. Can you write more daily plots? , The theatrical version is very well written. I feel that the protagonist is very busy, and every day is a case. Author, when you write about the protagonist going on vacation, you can write two more daily scenes there, and have more daily interactions with Xiao Ai. Can you write the emotional scene with Yuanzi more clearly? , And finally I wish the author good health, all the best, and more updates.

After voting for six monthly votes, I also want to recharge at once🉑🐴? The author is great. Still need to work hard to update. I can't wait for the next content. I like it so much!

There are many poison points, so it is not recommended to waste time.

Who is the heroine? Stop being ambiguous. . . Personally, I think Sonoko Suzuki is the most suitable.

Today is the first day of my fourth week... In the general light novel recommendation list, I glanced at only two Conan fanfics. The Witcher ranked quite high, in the top ten, and this one was the rest, ranked 69 (hey hey) There are piles of Pirate Naruto fanfics, why are there so few Conan fanfics It should be that the readership is not large in the first place, and the Wizards have been diverted in large numbers But I really don't like the Wizards. I tried many times, but I couldn't get into it. In the later stage, I really felt that it was so silly and cute (it wasn't the later stage, I didn't see the later stage). I couldn't stand it because I couldn't stand it So I had to finish it 4 times I just hope that the author can work hard and don't fall into a similar trap (but if you want to delay the word count and slow down the pace until Conan is finished, there is nothing you can do about it... After all, it is a story interspersed with the case, and it is easy to run away without enough main threads to connect it. (The branch lines are too scattered and difficult to control) I think the Gintama world is actually a good example. Unfortunately, the interval is too short, which does not play a buffering role when the reader (actually me) is tired. Instead, it interrupts my reading rhythm when I am getting started. I was not very happy during that time, but after the completion of the world, I started to miss it again when I was a little tired of aesthetics. Suggestions for later reading Add a similar plot, set up branch lines when there is no main line connection, such as the so-called 100 transformation cards, which can be set as other small tasks (for example, only given after the disguise, or need to clear a small copy, etc.), Give more sense of accomplishment, don't just give them away with a mediocre "but I drew two transformation cards this time" I really like this book, the author can see it, and it can be helpful Come on

Can you be more routine? Don't you think the case is moving forward too quickly?

In fact, this kind of book is quite friendly to people like me who forget about the plot of the original work after reading it. It is also very attractive every time I get close to the plot of the theatrical version. Moreover, the character of the protagonist of this book is well written, and there is no personality that is incompatible with the characters of the original work like some fan fiction ( Conspiracy, Holy Mother, God's perspective, etc.), The identity of the time traveler and the premonition of the case make it easy for readers to get involved in the drama. After all, the protagonist of the original work, whether it is Conan or the uncle, has no sense of substitution, and the way this article adds the Gintama plot is still very attractive. The book Conan: I'm Not Crazy feels like it has more about animals and bloodlines and less reasoning plots, but the original parts such as the main character being a mercenary and the reasoning process are very well written. The addition of fantasy elements to the events in the book about the Spiritual Master is very imaginative and refreshing. I can only say that the author is awkward, but the protagonist, emmmmm, has a serious mental disorder, often filling his head with malicious intentions, and then all kinds of plot characters are deceived. I don't like it very much. If you don't have any requirements for reasoning and plot, you can give it a try. I can only say that each has its own merit (This is my first time as a newcomer during the epidemic. I don't know if this counts as a book review. It's my personal opinion. It's not to start a fight. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. Thank you)

Now that I have read Chapter 195, are you sure that the heroine is Yuanzi later? If the heroine is Yuanzi, then I will completely abandon it.

Kindaichi, Furuhata Shinsaburo and Yukawa Manabu (Detective Galileo) are all my favorite characters. Although the work is very classic, I hope the author will not follow the reasoning process. For people like me with a good memory, it is no different from reading the original work, except that the reasoning detective has changed his skin. Of course, I still like this novel very much. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have only read more than two hundred chapters now, what should I say? . . Case after case, the plot is basically the same as the original, except that the protagonist thinks about it himself. Anyway, I just have no memory. I think the protagonist's reasoning method can be more distinctive, not just like replacing Hattori in Sherlock Holmes or replacing Mihoko in Orient Express. Even if it emphasizes the deduction method like the shooting upstairs at the TV station. Also in the section to Kyogoku, where you change into a girl, the psychological description is really bad. From there I felt a little uncomfortable watching, might as well win.

The protagonist already has Lake Toya, regardless of whether he is right or wrong. Who doesn't believe it? Just chop that one to death and that's the end of it? 😏

My dear Watson (the letter read): I write these lines, courtesy of Mr. Moriarty, who was waiting for a final discussion of the problems that existed between us. He had outlined to me his method of escaping the British police and ascertaining our whereabouts. This more certainly confirms the high opinion I have of his talents. I am very happy to think that I can rid society of the evil caused by his existence, although I am afraid it will bring sorrow to my friends, and especially to you, my dear Watson. But, as I have explained to you, my career has come to a critical juncture, and nothing could be more satisfying to me than this ending. It is true, if I am completely honest with you, that I knew full well that Meiringen's letter was a hoax, and I told you to go away because I was sure that a series of similar events would follow. Please tell Sheriff Patterson that the evidence he needs to convict the gangster is in the file holder that begins with the letter M. There is a blue envelope with "Moriarty" written on it. When I left England, I had disposed of my property and paid it to my brother Mycroft. Please give my regards to Mrs. Watson, my friend.

The relationship progress is very touching. Apart from Kudo Shinichi, there is no other undisclosed partner in Conan. It's really boring for you to keep delaying the breakup even though you can obviously do it. Tired

Didn't the idea of ​​the collision between red and black come from Conan? Why is it not related to Conan?

Mao Se Da Da please improve it I got to know you from this book, and I would like to offer some personal opinions as a reader who has followed it until now I like this book. At least I am not doing what I want for the protagonist, but the protagonist is humane. After reading this book, I realized how childish Conan and Hattori are in the original book. A guy who doesn't care about anything when it comes to a case and doesn't even want a girlfriend, should I say that he likes to solve cases or likes to be in the limelight? Even after getting smaller, when encountering a case or a black organization, he rushes forward as soon as possible, regardless of the consequences. Hattori is even more ridiculous. I have been reading this book until now, and I think murder is a bloody and terrible thing. No matter what the reason for killing is, such a thing should not be done. But for such a terrible thing, Hattori insisted on distinguishing himself from his peers, ranking one, two, and three. It would be fine if it was a past case or an old unsolved case, but it would be fine if the person he just spoke to died in front of his eyes. But it is a bit unhuman to compete with others to solve the case faster or other things. But one person is right, this book is considered to be "eating and waiting to die". There are several Conan and human books whose names I have forgotten, and the characters and plots are particularly well written. As for the female protagonist, although the author said that only the female protagonist Yuanzi is the only criticism, in fact it doesn't matter who the female protagonist is, but I personally don't like to separate Xinlan, Ping and Kuaiqing, the others don't matter. Others are really great, and the three views are also very positive. I will continue to follow it until the end. Also, the unshakable one update every day is too few. I hope you can evolve into a two-update beast

Come out and take a bubble🙂

I just finished reading "The Detective I Hate" today. I hope Mao Se can learn from the content and write a story or two.

I went to see the movie "Wings of the Unicorn". It was really amazing. I was moved again.

I started reading it now, but in the first few chapters, the details of the process of solving the case were not in place, and it felt like it skipped directly to the end. I hope the author can add a little more details.

My name is Kudo Shinichi. I was originally the boss behind the black organization. I was originally there to supervise the underground transactions of my organization that day at the amusement park. Unfortunately, I was knocked unconscious by a newcomer named Gin and was mistaken for a stalker and force-fed poison... I lost part of my memory and became Edogawa Conan. Although my body has become smaller, my head is still the same big. I am fighting wits and courage with my own organization. The truth is just nonsense.

At the very least, it is a mystery type of fan fiction. Many Conan fans directly write fantasy or magic, and some even directly apply the Sharingan and ninjutsu from Naruto to the protagonist. It is simply terrible. It's good to make a little bit of reasoning based on the cases in Conan, secretly save some money, trick little Conan, tease Xiao Ai, and the writing style is relatively relaxed.

Hahahaha, as expected, I only recognize Conan as the heroine of this book, +1 if I agree