Conan: Death Eyes on Me

Understand?

I read the last book again in my spare time. The author's last book, Conan, has both advantages and disadvantages. First of all, the finale of the dog trough is really nerve-wracking, but it is understandable. The original work is the fault, and then there is the love tug-of-war. It is really redundant, smelly and long. Although the original author likes to do this, you are not the original work. This relationship does not participate enough in the plot and does not interfere enough. It's not good enough. Mao Se can't actually write about love relationships. From fighting to human evolution, it can't be said to be bad, it can only be said to be a trampled fresh tomato. The idea is good, but the result is bad, but the author knows another relationship, family, Aili in the beginning, Xiao Ai in the detective, long-distance love is really not suitable for the author. Also, the Gintama in the detective was a bit too subtle. Maybe I thought it was not good and deleted it. If that was the original plan, well, it can only be said to be redundant. There is also the problem of Kyogoku. Monogamy is not fun at all. This plot is really embarrassing and baffling to me. The detective may be because of the first book. The protagonist's character is Mao Kelan. Conan's detective side, Xiaolan's martial arts (replaced with swordsmanship), and Kogoro's daily life side. Finally, there are minor issues such as Kudo's face and system settings, but they are not important and do not affect the overall look and feel. Of course the author also writes well. First of all, the detective story is well written, and secondly, what I personally feel is the best is that although I am a Conan fan, I don't hang around Conan and his friends 24 hours a day, and also adds other detective stories. But no matter what, it's the last book. How this one will be written can only be said after it is finished.

In fact, I personally feel that Koizumi Anko is pretty good 😁, but there are too few female protagonists in the fandom.

There are signs of a golden, omniscient and omnipotent star. It would be boring if his extraordinary abilities are too outrageous.

As the title suggests, Conan itself is a love mystery series, why should we directly write about cases? The more you write, the more you write. Because the cases are repeated a lot, how can you write something new? One hundred chapters are all cases. When the time comes, those who keep the book will not want to read it at all, and those who have been chasing the book will give up the book after reading it for a long time. Besides, it is best for the author to look at the market. First of all, who will read the Conan series? Is it for people who don't watch love? There are so many mystery books out there, why just read Conan? I feel that Wanding's Conan novels are definitely not all about the case, or about the protagonist group. However, the direction of this book is not to follow the protagonist group, so there is very little ink to be written. And the most important thing is that although the original work was scolded, it is actually more attractive because of the new ideas written in the original work. As for Mermaid Island, I really don't see what it is written. It has no new ideas and is not as good as the Judgment Knight.

I have listened to twenty chapters of the book, and the first twenty chapters alone are incomparable except for the initial lag. The accidental death in the elevator shaft gave me a different feeling from the Conan novel before. The death cruise later was even more exciting. The detective novel has a slightly thrilling feeling that after the case is completed, there are actually people involved without being caught. It makes people remember it for a long time🤓. When the case happened, it may be because I felt particularly immersed in the book while listening to it. I had that uneasy feeling that the god of death and the murderer might appear at any time and kill the protagonist. As expected, the investigation should be a bit scary😋 However, after reading the book review, it may involve Xiao Ai It's about emotional writing, and it doesn't seem to be well written. I can only say that I don't want that kind of thing😭😭😭. It's hard to find a good book. If you can't write emotional lines, don't write it. Please solve the case honestly for me😡

This time, don't write Sonoko as the heroine. There are many beauties with distinctive personalities in the Conan world. Any one of them is better than Sonoko. Like Witch Anko or the movie version of Akita Reiko or Koita Natsumi. These are all suitable for heroines.

Some words are unpleasant to say. This book is really too complicated, with the God of Death, the darkened version of the world, and the time-travelling Xiao Ai. Each setting is fine on its own, but when mixed together it looks nondescript and tired. Far inferior to your last Conan

The protagonist's main goal now is to survive. There are two main obstacles. One is that as a guy who has come back from the dead, he will attract the attention of the God of Death. Once discovered, he will face great danger; the other is the Mark of the God of Death, which will amplify the malice of others and make people easily murderous. So in order to cope with the first problem, the protagonist opened a detective agency, actively looking for murder cases, and constantly distracting the attention of the God of Death; the second solution was to open a vest, so that other people's malicious intentions could not be found on him. He could only kill a vest that appeared in a specific safe place or for a limited time, and he became a harmless little detective agency boss.

You really like Sonoko, and so did the previous Conan. The plot of this book continues to be secretive and slowly digging holes. If you want Sonoko to continue to be the heroine, why not just say it openly? At least let the readers who don't like Sonoko get together and relax, okay?

It's just my personal opinion. If it doesn't work, please delete the post. I beg the author not to engage in ambiguity. Forget it if there is no heroine in this book. If there is a heroine, then invite a straight shooter so that the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is established as early as possible, and then write about the relationship between male and female friends. I believe you can write this well, but don't write about ambiguity or hesitation. After reading several of your books, there is no well-written plot about this aspect.

His name cannot be mentioned. Every time he appears, he will be accompanied by death. He has his own exclusive symbol. He was very popular in the past and now everyone shouts about him. He has a fateful connection with a little boy. He is targeted by a mysterious organization. It is you Voldemort🤣

The protagonist insists that he doesn't want to find a partner, and then there is a story about ambiguity. Author, do you want to die?

Now the starting point is to completely catch up on the conversation, which seems to be counting the latest chapter readings in one day. Without follow-up reading, there will be no traffic 😭

Endless Shennong, I order you to write an evaluation of this book

I don't want to pour cold water on it. Although Lao Mao's character design is quite good, the emotional drama is really not well written. Why do so many people in the comments say they don't want a female protagonist? It's not so much that they don't want to watch emotional dramas, but rather that they don't want to be spoiled by abstract emotional dramas.

It's better to write about it. There are too many things happening between Pokémon and Conan. Yesterday, I just saw the Chinese military website naming Pokémon, Conan, Harimoto Tomokazu and the like. I don't know if those who write fan fiction are not excited, but those who read books will definitely not be motivated.

The heroine Ooka Momiji, anyway, the original work does not have a cp (Heiji Kazuha is a cp), and Ooka Momiji is beautiful, gentle, beautiful, rich, and dedicated, how great.

It's not that the protagonist doesn't know the plot, it's just that he doesn't remember the cases or only remembers a few early cases, and he doesn't know the methods of the cases. What's wrong with this?

Although this is the theme of this book, this should also be the reason for poor grades.

There are too many vests. The protagonist wears a vest every day and follows the original plot to solve crimes. It is boring and boring. At least the main characters knew the protagonist before. Now the protagonist wears a human skin mask every day and knows no one. He keeps buying new vests. There is no priority at all. All I watched for so long is just to see the protagonist transform into a passerby. It doesn't feel any better.

If you don't understand, just ask, is the author included in the Death Note?

I finally discovered that once I get to the end of a cat-colored novel, I am not very good at writing it. The later it gets, the more sluggish and rushed it becomes.

Recently I read the author's Conan Reborn as a Detective again, and I still feel that the writing is very good. It is plain but has highlights. The protagonist has his own goals and works hard to achieve them, which gives a solid sense of peace of mind. In addition to those childhood shadows, the memories that have a deep impression are the several incidents related to Kidd, the three incidents involving Gao Yuanyuan, the two incidents involving Kishui Nanatsuki, as well as the incidents at the Opera House, the Strange Mansion, the Blizzard Villa incident, and those "supernatural" cases. He is truly a supernatural detective.

The case is not the main plot, it is just a copy, so it is strange that you say it is the same as the original plot. When writing a Conan fan, you need to create an original case? Picture what? It's even more strange to say that you don't know what the protagonist wants to do. Why have a system? It is to strengthen the direction of the protagonist in the early stage. The main line of survival and growth is clear. You said the protagonist doesn't know what he is doing.

I hope Laomao will ignore the comments in the comment section, about not having a female protagonist, about hating being friends with Conan, etc. Your writing style is not that kind, and if you forcefully change to please, you will only lose both sides. Besides, unless you only read fan fiction, who would hate the original characters? And except for some rectifications, neglecting the protagonist team too much will only lead to a dead end, because I have watched these cases many times, and what I was looking forward to was the interaction with the original characters. Finally, I support the owner of the garden. The garden is so successful that I can't help but feel sorry for her.

Among the author's books, my favorite ones are Fighting Evolution and the first Conan. The taste of the later books has changed. Personally, I feel that I have lost my original intention and am a bit literary, as if I have been beaten by life and lost something...

Old cat, I hope you still remember how you used Takaro's tone to persuade Shinichi to tell Xiaolan the truth. You can persuade Shinichi, but you don't have the ability to give Sonoko an ending. I hope it can be handled properly this time. If you still can't give Yuanzi an explanation, don't hurt her anymore. If you took away her CP, then do it as a man and give her a good result. Although Conan is mainly a detective, the proportion of love is still quite large. If there is no emotional scene, it will be uncomfortable to be abused as a dog every day, so Lao Mao has a good control of the rhythm this time. You are a good hand at writing detective plots and making up for regrets, but I really want to curse others for letting myself go. In addition, there are many other people who can be mistresses, Sonoko's sister Suzuki Ayako can do it (her cp is ignored), Ooka Momiji can do it, Akine Reiko can do it, Curacao can do it, there are also Shinname Kahori, even Okino Yoko, Sister Bei, these are all blank, you can shape them as you like~ No matter you are a harem or a single heroine, the minimum requirement must be to make them happier than the original. If I write it again like the previous book, I will use the alliance fees to spray you, and they will all be spent on you anyway. I have endured it, if I try it again, Buddha will be on fire

When will you come back to write about Owen? When will you come back to write about Owen? When will you come back to write about Owen? Nowadays, it's impossible to watch Oven outside. It's either a pure Virgin or a protagonist's name is added to the original work.

Sure enough, the author should not have given any expectations at all.