Wasteland Teleport

The author needs to work hard, he writes slowly, and the number of words in one page is not very many. I finished it in two times, please update quickly 🤫

I don't know if it's because the author doesn't update frequently, but I feel like the chapters are incoherent. The two worlds bounce around too often. Halfway through writing about the things in the present world, it has reached the end of the world.

It is said that the author is short on word count, but the name of the protagonist is always replaced by "he". In many places, I have to think about it to understand who the "he" refers to. It is so tiring to read!

I just can't figure out why the author often uses him. It means how he said it, he said it this way, and he said it that way. Who is he, brother? Although I know he is the protagonist, the way you write it really makes people confused.

Sure enough, the apocalypse is still beautiful! !

Both have 330,000 words and have not been published yet. I suggest the author change the platform! Having read tens of thousands of novels, I can responsibly say that this book is not poisonous.

People like me who usually only watch girls' channels think they're pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, three recommendation votes a day.

Come on, three recommendation votes a day.

I watched real-life urban content directly, and skipped after watching the post-apocalyptic content.

This kind of subject matter is what I prefer to read. I think reality and the apocalypse are both important. Two-way development makes it interesting. However, this book is a bit too cliche. Many of the plots are familiar. I hope the author will think more about it. The protagonist should have his own thoughts and personality. It is better to be darker.

In the apocalypse, those little gangsters can't become a climate, right?

As mentioned, I seem to have seen this introduction or a similar introduction there. In short, it looks very familiar. It seems that I have seen this introduction in a very old novel. Has the author written a book before?

Isn't it bad to always look at numbers? Many people are used to one kind of