My Fantasy Game World

I was persuaded to quit by SUV and level 1 psionic energy. Can the author first understand what you want to write before you start writing.

I just opened the beginning, and I feel like the main character is middle-aged and stupid. I am also half an otaku. Otakus have a high receptive ability and will not be prone to such casual expansion.

Protagonist, it's not going to end well. We have parents, children, and a wife. We can't all be extraordinary. How many resources will it cost? , Reality should add some plot, these people are immediately gray, it is an international criminal with supernatural powers who was seriously injured and happened to meet the protagonist's family, so the murder resumed. Leaving a mess behind. After knowing the news, the protagonist was devastated and worked hard to become stronger. Anyway, none of these people's faces were shown. Don't keep a role as a sidekick without a name.

When I read Chapter 67, the second time the author wrote that a person's personality is not so easy to change, I couldn't help it anymore. As for the protagonist's personality problem, I couldn't help it when I saw that he already had a child. Take my brother as an example. Before he got married, he loved to play all kinds of things. All kinds of friends came to him every day when he had nothing to do. It was completely He is just a mixed-race person. After getting married and having children, his whole person has changed. He is particularly responsible and has no trace of his former self. This is the transformation of a normal person's life. Even though the protagonist is an otaku, he has been running around alone in the Three Kingdoms for several years and has the name of Qingniu Ke, and has not changed at all? In reality, there should be a change from when he got married, or is it that he is completely indifferent, has no responsibility, and is a second-rate person himself?

This is the first time I encountered a book that I wanted to give up after only three chapters. I felt that the protagonist was so stupid.

What is the name of the protagonist? It's just Bao Bubu Tong and Yi Fan. It's such a mess.

Well! It's a good subject, but I read a few chapters. It's too wordy. . . Just tell me what you chose. . A big push to introduce. . It makes my head hurt to watch!

It's so messy that I can't see it, and there are no restrictions at all. The world of the Three Kingdoms series just uses guns and cannons, which is too messy. The world of technological war starts to use martial arts again. It's very embarrassing to watch.

By the way, why is the protagonist sometimes called Meng Fan and sometimes Bao Zheng?

The power system is confusing, the character's personality is unclear, and the names are confusing. I have seen three names so far: Bao Zheng, Meng Fan, and Bao Bubu. What novel was this copied from?

Write a JB. There is no plot at all. You enter the world and write about characters and skills. Then you start talking about winning and losing and it's over. Is this called a novel? Go home and go to bed.

The name of the protagonist is really important to a book. I just force myself to ignore the name of the protagonist. This way the book is not bad, but once I pay attention to the name of the protagonist, it will easily cause drama.

The protagonist's operations cannot be learned or learned. Old, old. Nowadays, I still prefer the cultivation, farming, and behind-the-scenes genres. The protagonist's routine of showing off in person can be used occasionally. It can be said that as you fight monsters and upgrade, you no longer have the same momentum as before. When I see the protagonist, I think of the young man who was so high-spirited when he read Long Aotian's novels. Now that I think about it, I still feel nostalgic. Time is not forgiving.

There is no plot at all, so I deleted it.

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There's not much to say, it feels like a running list, and the main character's name is just a trap.

The first few chapters are very ink-intensive. Can't we leave those system settings and other things to be written bit by bit later? The three golden chapters are really important

What is the name of the protagonist of our novel? Where did Bao Bubu and Bao Zheng come from? Could it be that the author copied this novel from somewhere?

It's really a bit messy. The first few pictures were okay. But in the middle of the Three Kingdoms period, I was confused.

It's too messy and I can't understand it 😰

The protagonist's IQ is very questionable and he gets distracted all the time. What the hell is this?

The author must be single. You have a misunderstanding of the word father. A father is not his son's slave, do you understand?