Reborn to Cultivate: A Quick Transmigration Journey

It's such a mess, I'm so tired of looking at it

The writing is very messy, I'm not going to read it.

The setting is good, but the writing is not smooth and a bit childish. I hope the author will re-read his article and revise it.

It's a bad article. The heroine, Bao Zi, is tortured to death by the hero and the heroine in various worlds. She was killed by the hero twice and still likes him. The plot of the article is also messy, but the word count is quite large.

I'm looking at myocardial infarction. This is a typical example of the male protagonist abusing the female protagonist thousands of times, but the female protagonist still treats him like his first love. I wouldn't be able to write an article like this without having had cerebral thrombosis for ten years.

Is there an ending? It feels like there is no ending, so I just end it forcefully because there is no more ideas! It's a bit messy at the beginning!

The beginning was good, but the more I read, the more boring the book became.