Consciousness Comes

Can't you write the copy well? You have to write about the conspiracy of Goldfinger and the extraordinary power of reality. You can't treat reality as a safe back garden

How to put it, the protagonist's power comes too easily, and this power can also be plundered, which makes the protagonist seriously lack of sense of security and mentally abnormal If the protagonist's power is completely lost, he knows that he has no method or ability to become a transcendent again, so the protagonist should learn a systematic power system.

I looked at the book review section, sorry to bother you. Farewell

Why are they all a group of critics? The author writes very well.

I hope it's not from Japanese comics, because I haven't read most of them.

Book friends who feel that the previous chapters are too confusing should start reading from the third volume, as if the previous chapters do not exist.

Hahaha, the book review persuaded me to quit, but after reading many of the author's replies, I found that he is a very polite person.

The power confused the mind, the timeline was improperly explained, and the black hand was too strong and poisonous. Even though I love the beauty of your pufferfish, I can't bear the poison of your pufferfish! ! ! ! Pity. . . .

The character of the protagonist is OK, but the most annoying thing is the protagonist of Infinite Flow, the Virgin Mary. The bad thing about this book is that the protagonist's power is not relied on and feels very weak. He absorbs it inexplicably. There is no limit on weaknesses or anything. He simply doesn't know anything. The author did not write the power gap rigorously when writing. It gives the impression that the protagonist has abilities and moves, and the power and consumption limits are all determined by the reader's imagination. It's still very messy, let's talk about the telekinesis at the beginning. How to upgrade? What is consumed? There's no clear explanation of what the restrictions are.

If the protagonist of this book is Black Tiger Ah Fu, seriously, this book will be so popular that it will explode.

The author's layout is too big and it will collapse sooner or later.

After reading the introduction and then reading the book review, I found that I can accept the problems mentioned in the book review. After all, there are very few Infinite Darkness books. Some old classic books are obviously poisonous when read now, and the good new books have few words and talk so much nonsense. I will finally say that I will save them and give thanks to the author.

The character design of the protagonist and the writing are great →_→ But the plot and the conspiracy theory of Goldfinger really... Left me speechless

The author has good ideas but lacks writing skills! Some people have too much ambition but too little skill!

It was okay at first, but then suddenly it exploded. The author probably lost his temper.

The plot is too confusing and the protagonist is too abusive