Yijian Chunqiu

It was fine before, but since I killed the black thread python, I have been slapped in the face by all kinds of brainless pretense, so I gave up

There are many details in the novel, which are very delicate. 🤭🤭🤭

This plot is very similar to Feijian Wenwen

Once we have a drink in Yicheng, The sword gate passes by. Spring spreads across the imperial state, Qiu Jing sees his head.

The progress of the first male and female protagonists is a bit fast and not very natural. Secondly, since the incident between the male and female protagonists has already happened, if we really kill the male protagonist, wouldn't we be enmity with the female protagonist? If he can't be killed, wouldn't he be offended? I hope the author will consider this and not write about the sect in a too bad or too conventional way. For example, the top management does not support or oppose the story. Most of the peers care about the female protagonist and do not have much hatred for the male protagonist. Most of them are indifferent. If you have a love rival, don't be too petty, be upright and a little proud. In fact, it would be better if there is no heroine, but since it has been written, don't go through so many hardships, just be more natural and smooth, otherwise the emotional drama will affect the big plot too much. In the end, the author's writing is very good. Just refer to my opinion. If you think it's right, just think about it. If you think it's wrong, forget it.