Wishful Branch

The center of the article is really not clear. I read Chapter 191 and kept chasing until the fee was charged. Where is the center of the novel? When writing about a heroine, at least the space should be centered around the heroine. It would be too scary for others to write dozens of chapters. The main perspective should be that of the heroine

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I felt very tired and kept repeating it. I felt that the author did not want to write a story, but wanted to forcefully plant the relationship between the characters into his mind and then put it into writing. I did not expect that it would cause such a big disgust to the readers. May I ask the author, would you read it from beginning to end? Aren't you tired of watching such repeated and protracted explanations of character backgrounds?

I just started reading it and I thought it was quite good, but it was too repetitive and kept emphasizing what happened in the background of the characters. I felt a little tired after reading it. I will continue reading and hope it will get better.

Repeated background introduction is tiring In addition, the heroine's mother was tortured to death by the evil mother-in-law. Although the father is a scumbag, the evil mother-in-law is almost the same. In order to live a good life for herself, the heroine actually has no objection to the so-called grandmother in her heart. She is very affectionate and looks very scumbag.

My mother no longer worries that I won't remember the background and relationships of the characters when I read the book…I can skip reading without worrying about missing key details. 🥱 I'm so drunk... I've read a novel for so many years and this is the first time I've encountered this kind of story that repeatedly introduces the relationship between the characters in the past and background 😒

Will a concubine who was born a prostitute and whose reputation was completely ruined marry the eldest son and grandson of the General's Mansion and become the wife of the future head of the family? Should all irrationality be rationalized?

A routine uses 500 chapters. It starts with the concubine being framed and falling into the water, and the relatives prefer the concubine. The routine is repeated N times in the middle. I skipped to chapter 480 and it is still the concubine who fell into the water. More than 300 chapters have been written and the heroine is still eight years old. The word count is too high to make sense. Demining.

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To be honest, the plot of the story is very attractive, but the author is obviously uneasy and explains it over and over again to the point where it becomes a bit verbose.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I don't know who the author wants to be the male protagonist. It's all boring. Stop being such a Mary Sue, can you let the national master be the male protagonist? Others are not good birds.

I really can't stand it anymore, it's so long-winded and tedious!

The author's idea is quite good, and it's interesting to read. It's just that the plot advances slowly, and the background of the characters is often explained repeatedly. I hope it can be improved. Come on!

In the end, if Xie San is the male protagonist, then the female protagonist will be reborn in vain. It would be better to die and be reincarnated.

The story is pretty good, but it's too long-winded. I've explained a background section 10 times, going over it over and over again

The writing is too verbose

There's so much nonsense, I still skipped reading it, it's just the same nonsense over and over again

After reading the book for a long time, I felt that the plot and background were always repeated over and over again. I was too tired and stopped reading.

The first two hundred chapters were written when I was five to six years old. I was really convinced. I wrote the whole story about the background. I could have dozens of chapters just about the supporting characters. The protagonist does not appear. I obviously just want to read the story of the heroine. You write long chapters about the supporting characters. There is not much main content originally written, and the background nonsense still accounts for two-thirds. Give up!

I guess I copied it. I read the names and past events in the previous chapters a few years ago. The author is definitely not this.

After reading more than 700 chapters, it was said that Ma Wenyuan was dead, and later it was written that the man was alive. It is so contradictory.

At the beginning, when the heroine fell into the water when she was a child, wasn't it because she and her brother were twins who looked exactly the same and changed their clothes so they were mistaken... Why did they become different siblings when they grew up?