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It can be said to be a very good article. Whether it is the writing style, plot or character design, it cannot withstand scrutiny. The plot is relaxed and the twists are refreshing. After reading it three times and looking at it from the beginning, I still have a different feeling.

The writing style is very good, and it is quite comfortable to read. The early stage is very exciting and very good-looking. Unfortunately, in the later stage, Shi Kuo was mentioned in many book reviews. I personally think that the whole character image was really darkened in the later part. It may be to create some contradictions and waves in the protagonist's life, but it makes people uncomfortable. Free, because Shi Er left a really good impression in the early stage, and Yue Fan, the carefree and loyal young man suddenly became so unbearable. Although there is a written explanation of his character, the convincingness is a bit weak. Hu Yuniang is a bit confused about losing a marriage in her life. . . All in all, it's a pity, but the growth of a great master usually takes several books ~ Come on, the author is great!

My favorite in this book is Lu Changying. The first man who made me want to write a long review is that the ending of this book is too hasty, but the writing style and story are not picky.

I admit that A Yuan is biased in this article. But it's definitely not what user "59511973" said. 1. Princess Zhending has never been smart. From the beginning to the end, she believed that the second son was not qualified to take charge of the Lu family, and she had to protect the flesh and blood of the eldest son. When she first learned that her second son had assassinated her eldest son, she never wanted to protect her eldest son's flesh and blood. There is no need to pick up Changting Changning in person. Just point someone to pick it up. During the great turmoil. Isn't it normal for accidents to happen on the road? I know Changying is still here. He attacked decisively, protected Changting, and killed Lu Fan. The only moment of weakness was when he learned that Lu Fan had been molested as a child. As a mother, I learned that my child had been molested by her brother-in-law. What should you do? She is very clever. Is it possible to rebel at this time? But she didn't. She killed her brother-in-law. Let someone bring a message to the second son. The wish of the youngest son was fulfilled. Princess Zhending just wants the Lu family to remain alive in troubled times. How can it last forever? Is Lufen at the helm? No way. Lu Fen is a secretive person with no hidden plans, and even conspiracies can only deceive the people who trust him the most. Once Lu Fen becomes the head of the family. Isn't the future of the Lu family the same as the Chen family? Not the Cui family? Do you want to conspire with the Youzhou Tongling who can't do anything? She was really sure that the eldest princess was not out of her mind. She wanted to take the Lu family she valued and accompany her second son to go crazy together. 2. Shi Er is not precise either. He was proud, but there were two reasons why he gave up on Lu Changting. First, the only purpose of marrying Lu Changting was to gain support from the Lu family. However, when it is known that Chang Ting's heart belongs to his beloved general, marrying Chang Ting by force will only make his beloved general feel heartbroken and turn against the Lu family. As a calm and self-possessed monarch who wants to belong to the world, will he marry Chang Ting by force? Why not sell your favorite general to a good one, so that you can better appease him and get help from the Lu family? Secondly, okay, we think Shi Er is out of his mind. You must marry Lu Changting. I don't care about my subordinates, Shi Er can fight him anyway. But Lu Changting still has a resourceful brother standing there. Why did Lu Changying want to exchange with Shi Er whether there was a letter for Shi Er to imitate Lu Gong's handwriting to deceive his sister? Okay, take a step back. Don't believe this anymore. I held my thumb as proof. Lu Changying changed hands and gave you the chance to compete with the legitimate daughter of the second wife of the Lu family. You want a legitimate daughter? Give it to you. Why bother? Regarding Qingshao, I think it is actually a misunderstanding of Changting. She thinks Shi Er has liked Qing Shao for a long time. I don't think so. Before Shi Er favored Qing Shao, Qing Shao had been following Shi Er for a while. Why can't this be the time when love lasts for a long time? You insist on saying that he has liked Qingshao for a long time, so he kept Qingshao during this period of time. So why doesn't he have to please the barbarians during this period? Why don't you send Qing Shao over? The timeline should be: sending Qingshao to the Hu people (I don't like Qingshao) - rescuing Changting, Qingshao and Changting return to Shi's house together (starting to notice Qingshao) - Changting returning to Lu's house (starting to raise Qingshao), right? Otherwise, how can we explain that he did not give green shoots to the barbarians during that period? Still trading anyway. Anyway, I have to please you. How difficult it is to raise another skinny horse. Is there a ready-made one here that I don't need? Third, ten thousand enemy troops is the only thing I have doubts about. Because the father of the Hu people can only hope that the Shi family court will be more chaotic, the better.

It is said in the article that people with big neck disease can get big neck disease if they eat without salt. This is a misunderstanding. I have read several articles and thought that big neck disease is due to lack of salt. Big Neck Disease is caused by iodine deficiency. Iodine is mainly found in seafood and cannot be obtained in mountainous areas. The addition of iodine to salt was also done after the founding of the People's Republic of China. People who are deficient in salt mainly have no strength and cannot walk steadily.

I like this article very much and have read it three times. Everyone in this article is working hard to realize their dreams. There is admiration for family, warm friendship, sweet love, but also blood betrayal, and life and death fights; there are dynasty iterations, brothers fighting for property, and conflicts between Hu and Han, as well as dignity and morality, responsibility and commitment; there is hereditary glory and wealth, and there is also personal growth and self-realization in troubled times. This is a story that takes place in the best of times and the worst of times, and love is not the main thread. The heroine has very upright views, I like her very much. Fortunately, the author is finally finished.

It's a little bit anticlimactic, it started out wonderfully, but then it suddenly ended with a big reversal, leaving countless foreshadowings.

Why do I think Lu Changying is more like the male protagonist than General Xiao Meng? Alas, what a pity for such a good boy like Shi Kuo. And Yue Fan and Lu Fen, both of them are shameless betrayers. Why should they be spared their lives while talking about eradicating the roots while leaving so many hidden dangers!

I started reading this book a few years ago, but the author stopped reading it for a long time. Now I'm starting from the beginning.

In fact, you have all forgotten. A long time ago, our ancestors had boundless power. At that time, heaven and earth collapsed, and all living beings suffered disaster. There is a person who holds up the sky with his shoulders and life. Therefore, we say that he split the chaos and stood upright. Giving people a new world. The fish in Beiming soars into the sky without knowing the end. That majestic figure left behind a legend. But when the sky falls and the earth falls, we have no wings. So a woman, with her boundless kindness, completed the sky. The flood is coming. The tribesmen died in the water one by one, and the food they had worked hard to cultivate was submerged. Creatures in distant places scrambled to escape. I want to leave this world of endless disaster. But our ancestors refused to surrender. If the mountains block the direction of the water, then split the mountains. If the sea forgets its responsibility, then fill up the sea. The unyielding will created China. But today, everyone has forgotten. There once was a place called the Three Realms. When disaster strikes, our ancestors use their boundless power to take us away. But fleeing is not our way back, so more ancestors used their blood and bodies to pave a way back. I wrote all this in "The Dream Weaver" (also known as Return to the Three Realms), which tells the story of a modern man who, after entering the ruins of Zhuangzi, was sent to the Three Realms by the butterfly that Zhuangzi dreamed of in the legend. The secrets hidden in ancient times are revealed step by step. The names that had left their blood on this return road appeared one by one. Introduction In the distant ancient times, there was once a group of people who used their blood-stained backbones to prop up the dignity of a nation and ignite the hope of inheritance. Many years later, their descendants set out again, just to find those names that shone with glory.

It seems like the heroine at the beginning is a standard tsundere, she says she hates her but in her heart she envies her. However, her stepmother is also really unlucky. In terms of etiquette, the status of the second wife is lower than that of the first wife. She is also suppressed by the first wife from the perspective of "the living cannot fight the dead" and "the status of the aristocratic family crushes the clan". Even her own daughter is "disciplined" by the stepdaughter who wants to vent her anger time and time again. She is relieved if she does not suffer from depression...

The story is still well written, but there are a few shortcomings. First, my writing skills are a bit shallow, and my words often fail to convey my meaning. Second, the characters' personalities are not unified enough. In order to increase the twists and turns of the story, the characters' personalities are deliberately distorted, which is inconsistent with common sense. For example, the second master of the Lu family is simply a pervert, making the wise and powerful Lu Chuo not live up to his reputation. Yue Fan and Shi Kuo also changed inexplicably. In the finale, Lu Changting was forced to go to the palace, and Lu Changting was written like an idiot. He was completely different from the wise and brave person he was when he was escaping at the beginning, and even a little Cui family couldn't deal with it. The moment when the lives of the cunning Shi Meng and the Yu family were at stake turned out to be nothing. The second half of the story was too sloppily written. Third, the ending is too hasty.

Lu Chuo died like this, so early, what a pity

I've seen parts of it a long time ago! ! ! After searching all night and all morning, I finally found it!

I just realized that there are so many leave requests 😂

After reading the first few chapters, I don't like the heroine. She's squeamish and pretentious. I'll continue reading to see if there will be any discounts.

I came here from "Beauty God Stick" and I liked that novel very much. I flipped through this article and was a little uncomfortable with the writing style. Why not use popular vernacular, but half-literary and half-white, which seems so laborious?

After reading it all day, I finally finished it. Anticlimactic feeling. What is very unacceptable is Shi Er's final darkening! It's completely incomprehensible. It seems that apart from the heroine, the heroine's father and brother can't have other prosperous people, so they write people like this. Obviously the male protagonist said that the second brother is very good and can be compared with Lu Da. He is completely capable of conquering the world without the heroine marrying or relying on a woman to rise to power. Why is that Qing Er still the one who likes Shi Er? Oh my god, is there Qingxiao in front? It's written with no beauty, so that it can become Shi Er's beloved, just to highlight his ruthlessness, it's too superficial! How could such a character attract the male protagonist to be loyal to him? Shi Er was later written like this by the author. It was really disappointing.

I read the first few chapters, they were pretty good.

After reading this book, I was reminded of "Mei Gongqing". Has anyone read it? Do you feel the same way?

I would like to thank the author for the great platform and giving me an opportunity to showcase my work. Please pay attention to the new book "Only I, Qingfeng", and recommend it. It is a clear stream among immortals, shocking the rainbow for eight thousand miles, and who can defeat me, Only I, Qingfeng! Updates are steady and the number of words is sufficient! Save a lot of manuscripts! Welcome to visit, I will read the collection and recommendations one by one when you return! Finally, I hope that your work will soar into the sky, collapse the clouds, and hurt your mind. Please remember to pay more attention, your body is the capital of revolution!

So pretty! Isn't Changying going to create extra stories or new stories? I like Changying and Ah Rong!

As soon as I read the article, I flipped through dozens of pages of leave requests, looking at all the different ways to ask for leave.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!