Hunting for a Thousand Years

I'm a little confused. I know what you wrote, but I'm still a little confused.

How should I put it, it feels a bit self-explanatory. The author cannot express what he wants to express, so the writing is jumpy and blurry. Although we can understand it if we look closely, it does not have the smoothness of reading.

Dancing with Dante at the beginning is so gay

The author will write a worldview setting for the next book that will be easier to understand.

Isn't the third industrial revolution the 20th century?

On the importance of a cover?

30Th century, the third industrial revolution? The third industrial revolution began already in the 20th century, and the fourth industrial revolution is about to begin.

Nowadays, there is a set of guidelines for online writing that can be called "standards". Maybe great writers can ignore them, but if they want to start the challenge from scratch, this is often the case. For example, in the Golden Three Chapters, the protagonist's image is highlighted, the main plot is hidden, and the setting is gradual, such as Goldfinger. The author hopes to continue working hard...

If I didn't get the first place, I still give my best support to the author.