I Am a Swordsman in Liaozhai

Too tacky. As a positive character, he does not have the kind of righteousness to help humanity and hold the sky up with one hand; As a villain, he does not have the domineering power to benefit himself and plunder the world; As the protagonist, I hope to be able to do what I can't do and become someone I can't be, instead of being greedy for life and afraid of death like me, sacrificing righteousness for small gains, mediocre and incompetent; It all depends on one system for cheating, so why do we need this protagonist? Just write a system, and the protagonist can enjoy the benefits, and the fighting system is not better than what it is now?

You are a bit frustrated with the name of the author's system. It is actually called the Liaozhai Sword Immortal System. It could also be called the Zhutian Sword Immortal System, or the Ten Thousand Realms Sword Immortal System. Why is it called the Liaozhai Sword Immortal System?

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He even saves those who want to kill him. . .

The author is very late. How late is it?

I read the author's profile. The writing is really good. It's not easy to write, and I often get scolded. You don't have to read it if you don't want to. No one forces you to read it. Just like me, when I read the author's profile, I turned away and left without even opening the table of contents.

Did this book get bad grades? Does the author still write?

I can't tell, I still like watching Iron Armored Little Treasure

The author could write a story in which some things were actually done by humans, but the blame was placed on monsters. This kind of story would be very interesting to think about.

Dare I ask, are you Taoist Brother Pili or Jinguang?

Let's put it aside first and go back to the outline. Think again The book is good (come on)

I have also recently been writing a novel of the Liao Zhai genre. I opened the book today and it is called "The Demonic Way of a Liao Zhai". It is a dark novel and I am taking advantage of Dabao Land to occupy a building first!

It seems that someone has read it, and I am also chasing a few more books about the Chinese chat room. Personally, I think your books lack a kind of temperament and a kind of charm. The layout and writing are too casual. The sense of immersion is not too strong. Some things should obviously be moved to other places when the protagonist upgrades. . . . The sense of fragmentation is too severe.

After catching up with the progress, let me share my opinion: this book can at least be regarded as a grain of grass among various types of Liaozhai. The author's writing power and imagination are worthy of praise, and he has been given a recommendation vote to support it. But there are a few issues that I think the author can consider: 1. When writing about sword cultivation, it is easiest for Long Aotian to write "just look at me and kill the whole family". The author is obviously aware of this problem and has made adjustments to the protagonist's personality and swordsmanship to make the "killing monsters and upgrading" system a little more humane. But I feel that the author has not grasped the rhythm well, jumping from one extreme to the other, from killing monsters on sight to the "can't kill anyone" style of the Holy Mother. (Of course, the specific development of the killing ban in the plot of Lanruo Temple will continue to be observed.) It should be noted that killing with caution does not mean not killing. Buddhism still emphasizes using thunderbolt means to practice the heart of a Bodhisattva. Being kind to those humans, demons and ghosts who have committed heinous crimes or have great potential threats is actually a crime against good people. How to grasp the balance needs to test the author's writing skills. 2. Judging from the author's thinking, he probably wants to get rid of the shackles of the system and transform into a traditional fairy novel. This is also an excellent idea - the system novel is easy to start and collapse in the middle and late stages due to poor grasp of the construction of the power system. However, the author's transformation was a little too hasty. The protagonist himself has never learned real Taoism. After getting the system, he followed the path of sword cultivation. After being bedridden for ten years, he suddenly became a master of Taoism. It would be difficult to convince the public with just one Xuan Yun teacher. If the protagonist is really such a good understanding, How could he be reduced to a fake Taoist priest? In this regard, it is recommended that the author spend some time to make up for it, even if it is a way to introduce new functions to the system (of course, I believe the author has already thought about it) 3. Hiding in the city is not the current protagonist's approach. In fact, There are many characters who hide in the world in Liaozhai. Some turn into beggars and pretend to be crazy and act foolishly. Some travel around the world to punish evil and promote good. Some live in the mountains and near the city and only travel by fate, and some live in the city in anonymity. However, none of them is like the protagonist, who is well known to everyone and lives in peace at the same time. Store - Notice: Liaozhai is a world of fairy tales, and its government is still operating normally. For this kind of mysterious power that the government can't control, the government will either incorporate it or destroy it. As the saying goes, "If you don't look for it, everything will come to you." If you are too high-profile, don't think about being able to enter Taoism safely. My personal suggestion is that it is better to open a medical clinic incognito in another place. When you are busy, you can hang a pot to help the world. In your spare time, you can eliminate demons and defend the road without violating the intention of saving sentient beings and not being afraid of sentient beings in the mortal world. I hope the author will consider it. This is a lot of verbosity, just some personal opinions, I hope it will be helpful to the author. Of course, my opinions may not be right. If I offend you, please forgive me.

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