Wanjiejiayuan System

Really, I feel relieved when I see so many people saying it! First, if you write like this in every world, then let me ask first, how many chapters do you want to write? Second, you are a protagonist, you can cultivate all the worlds, there are no weird worlds, and you can always live forever. Now you want to live forever in an urban world, right? Third, relatives, especially the cousin, can understand the family relationship that is constantly being cut off and turned into chaos, and they are not asking you to do anything! Whether you can behave maturely or not, why would you want to see him if you don't even like him? It's okay to treat him as air! And why do you write about him so many times? What kind of plot can he help you advance? Can it help you take care of the real world? How can I help you? (Although it may be useful later) Fourth, understand which parent you want to satisfy Cang Shuhong, but you have to have a brain, okay? As a child of the world (only one person can exist in a world, and you are the only one who can go to your world, do you think it is equivalent to a child of the world), if you have some courage, you can only draw comics, right? You will only. . . . Forget it, let's leave it like this for now

It's best to write less about that relative. If you don't like it, don't write it. If you want to write it, go out and help him change it. Otherwise, it will be the most disgusting thing to be half-dead. Is the exception heroine the Japanese girl? If not, it's better to reduce the description and length. It's all out of reality. If so, then I have to say, this It is not suitable for a Japanese girl to be the heroine. I will not talk about the Sino-Japanese issue, but the character of this girl is not suitable for the protagonist, especially to help her cousin speak. Although she does not know what is going on, but she speaks directly outside, it shows that she is not qualified in thinking. Smart people will ask questions at home instead of asking on the spot. He has low force value, low emotional intelligence, and low IQ. He has no other advantages except for his gentle and kind personality. It's fine that the protagonist is an ordinary person, married to a harmonious family, and respectful to the elderly, but I'm afraid the protagonist is inappropriate. The protagonist must at least have an IQ of Zhao Min, Huang Rong, or Huan Huan. I personally think Li Xiuning is very good.

Cousin's role is to be disgusting? And is the portrayal of Cang Shu's mother also meant to disgust people?

It's too serious a departure from the topic. I've withdrawn it!

The idea is good, but the plot is dragged out and feels a bit watery. There are mostly plots with unclear meanings. Cousin, Dream Eater World... It feels like it has not grasped the theme.

In the biochemical world, you can obtain advanced evolution potions and evolve your physical body to its peak. After practicing the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon and the Dragon-Elephant Prajna Kung Fu, you can go to Jin Yong's world to PK the Four Heavenly Dragons and Sweeping Monks together. Then go to the Huangyi World to get the Evil Emperor's relics, set up a formation to turn the relics into a spiritual energy storage device, and pour all the spiritual energy from the best spiritual stones into the Evil Emperor's relics in the Immortal Cultivation World. I practice the Beiming Divine Art by myself and slowly absorb the spiritual energy to advance.

666, Met the book eunuch of Silver League for the first time

Erina! So cute! Would it be nice to let her be promoted to heroine?

Updated 27 days ago? Raised to death?

After Chapter 92, the poison continued. In Chapter 111, Cang Shuhong was molested by gangsters in the street. It was too old-fashioned and poisonous. After being put on the shelves, it actually became more poisonous. Fortunately, I did not pursue it and gave up the trap 😤

No matter what others say, I think this book is of great interest to me. The author has done a great job updating it, but there is no point in caring too much about other people's book reviews. One person and one idea cannot satisfy everyone! This book is not bad in creativity, just follow the writing, there is no need to change anything! It feels like updates are slow. The author must have been hesitant recently, right? No need! That's good!

Death from poison. At first, I wasn't very interested in writing novels and comics, so I started reading the content of Jiayuan System. Seeing the system revision appearing in the mall, I frowned. My cousin appeared and started to be slightly poisonous, preparing to rely on his years of poison resistance to persevere. In Chapter 99, he finally couldn't hold on and died of poison.

To be honest, although this book has some poisonous points, it is still acceptable. But, if you don't write a good marriage system, add a mall system that allows users to open stores and sell things, and there is also Wanjie Live! Is this Wanjie Good Marriage or Wanjie Mall? Or Wanjie Live? The theme is biased towards the Atlantic. In addition, I came here because of the theme of Marriage in All Worlds. I suggest the author change the title or introduction of the book... This is not Marriage in All Worlds...

The writing was good at first, but the story started to get smarter when the cousin came out. What did you want to express when you wrote the cousin plot? After practicing some Chinese martial arts, you become a master? The novel was edited by a young lady, and the comics were also drawn by a young lady. In addition to providing some ideas and outlines, what else does the protagonist have to offer? The protagonist has always been a loser, the kind who just muddles along without wanting to change.

Author, can you please write about the world of White Snake: Origin?

What a wonderful book with a great title, it was wasted.

The last few chapters, from Cang Shuhong's kidnapping to the current protagonist's cheating on his mind, are really very discouraging.

Wanjie Jiayuan is a blind date platform, right? Then as long as you find a partner, you can't use most of the website's functions. Then if you want to write Bankai Ryu, don't you have to become a scumbag? There is also the issue of obtaining the consent of the mother-in-law. You are writing about Bankai-ryu and it is not a city. Can you end it quickly? Either break up or leave it at that.

In this system of yours, if you copy the book, you will bump into the protagonist.

The main product of this book is to pick up girls in all the worlds and show off, with the purpose of getting rich while opening a harem and becoming a winner in life. Most readers should come here for this reason. Everyone wants to see their goddess and the protagonist become partners. How the protagonist handles the relationship between different girls is also a major selling point, but personally, I hate the protagonist who plays Bai Xue and is ambiguous. When you flirt with a girl, the first thing that comes to your mind should be how to give her a bright future. When you fall in love with a girl, you have to take corresponding responsibilities. Instead of playing with one and throwing the other like the scumbag cousin in the book. For example, if you want to fall in love with Teacher Aoki now, and your relationship is so close that even your parents have met, how can you reasonably open the next copy and start a relationship with the next girl? Throw Aoki-sensei aside? Or divorce her after marriage because of a trivial matter? This is not much different from a scumbag! I hope that the author can reasonably handle the development trend of the plot, and rationalize the plot as much as possible while extending the service life of the work. Avoid the work from becoming a complete fast food culture. This is what I feel, not a troll!

Reality is pure reality. This kind of forced routine is not pleasing now.

What about the details? Not authentic! Asshole!

As a suggestion, you can refer to some settings of the villain chat group. To make all worlds independent, we cannot let them know that they are just characters in a work. Only those in the main world know that the protagonist is the main world. People in other worlds simply think that they are in different worlds. In the setting of the high-tech world, those who have a little money will choose more advanced artificial intelligence chips instead of mobile phones. The transaction function of opening a store is prone to collapse, and the mailing function should also impose certain prohibitions on items. In many worlds, there should be state power to forcefully interfere with system owners. It is easy to cause problems when transmitting large quantities of items that do not belong to an era, especially in the technological world.

The main purpose and interest of this book lies in the interaction of characters in multiple worlds and the growth of the protagonist, and this is what readers are looking forward to. Dream Eaters is not bad, but if you only focus on Dream Eaters, you will lose the fundamental interest of the book. The Dream Eaters part can be used as a fanfic, which is completely different from readers' expectations.

Author! This plot is unlikely, right?

How many do you need to pay for Dream Eater World? How to end the transition to the next copy? How to maintain harmony in the harem?

This plot is not very reasonable! Is the policeman's patrol car a living thing?

We are attracted by the life-changing and established persona of Beauty from All Worlds after getting the system, not by watching an otaku who relies on other people's writing to show off. It's okay if you just write it in the early stage, but it won't be interesting if you do it later. Ever since I traveled to the world of Dream Eaters, I no longer had the motivation to pursue it. Maybe you were thinking that an accident would happen so that the protagonist could mature and make full use of the system to grow, but these branch lines were written too much and too thinly, and a lot of unnecessary dialogue was written. It's enough for my cousin to show off his martial arts once or twice, and it can also pave the way for the Dragon and Snake in the future. But that gangster was so disgusting. Let's not talk about the issue of a gangster masturbating in the street in broad daylight. The protagonist actually made a fight with him. What year is this? This kind of person is nothing if he loses his martial arts. There are many people who will make trouble for him. Even if his master comes to take revenge in the future, it will be better than now. As it stands now, just by looking at one Dream Eater, you can complete 2.300 Chapters. I would be unwilling to go through all the villains and plots. From the fun at the beginning to the disappointment now, so I downloaded it.

I have raised it so far that I plan to slaughter it, but looking at the catalog, has it become a fanfic of Dream Eater?

And I don't see how purple hair can compare to a hamster. I hope this article about drunkenness and promiscuity will not appear again.