Dominator Diary

... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. The Jade Emperor looked at Xuande, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but say that these five divine flames are the Crystal Flame, Hunyuan Flame, Wind Falling Flame, Tianxing Flame and Sith Flame. Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! You understand? Xuande looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have all the last four. ... I'm just missing the first one." The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could he have them! ? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame?" Xuande nodded and said, "Yes, I came here just for the water experience."

This book lost its appeal after reading some of the follow-up parts. Questions include: The unclear main line makes people have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. At present, it is just a passive upgrade story. The foreshadowing lacks appeal. The protagonist's identity was suspected to be a foreigner and then disappeared. Goldfinger was suspected to be an arrangement by a big shot and then disappeared. Suggestions to the author: Make it clear in the main line that you should farm when you need to farm, and work hard to upgrade when you need to upgrade, to increase the attraction of the foreshadowing, side by side to express the uniqueness of the protagonist, a foreigner, to increase the appeal of the outsider, and side by side description of the battle of top powers to bring out the shortcomings and improvements of Goldfinger to increase the appeal.

Hasn't this always been a loner, running around like a dog?

It's not bad, but I was asked to leave from the front.

You can pretend to be lively

Come on come on! O(*////▽////*)q

Ang, let me rest my mind first. After reading for a while, I feel that a few questions are inevitable. May I make some suggestions? 1. Naming... I feel that supporting characters such as Hilary Stallone and Deng Ge really affect the reading experience. I laughed while watching it... 2. The lack of explanation. It can be seen that the author has quite a lot to talk about, but once the writing gets too high, the reading experience will be incoherent. For example, setting an ambush, or pushing a motorcycle to run, the author can pay attention to many details, so he will have the idea of ​​​​"I have already explained it anyway" in his heart, and the reader will ponder for a long time... It would be better if the key things can be explained clearly. 3. Too many pure language conversations. When only two people are present, there is no problem in speaking only in quotation marks, but it will make reading fatigue. If you can add small details of the characters in the middle of the dialogue, not only can more words be added (crossed out) to make the characters more vivid, but the too-fast pace can also be slowed down, making the reading experience much more comfortable. 4. Let's write about the topic of excitement. There seem to be too many swear words... If it really becomes popular, this will be an inevitable black point... You really shouldn't take a name like Cao Nima... It will look a hundred times more comfortable if you choose Ni Ma... Of course, I have only watched a little bit so far, and I have no idea whether it will get better in the future, so I can only briefly talk about my feelings and discuss it. I don't have any thoughts of accusation, and I hope you can forgive me.

As for farming and climbing technology, it's just a little bit at the beginning, but then it's gone.

The Day the Comet Arrives is a realistic story with no powers or systems, and the story of the entire human race shrinking ten times. 170Cm/120kg becomes a 17cm/120g human Other animals remain unchanged

It's very interesting to read the introduction. Why do I have no clue after reading three or four chapters?

I heard that the beginning was changed, so I came back and watched it again 😊

Chapters 40 to 42 are a bit unacceptable. Yi De complains that he has never had any good fruits. It can be considered that he has lived such a great experience. To put it simply, people in society who do not understand rejection and self-protection will have a very uncomfortable life. In the background of your writing, such people cannot survive. It is fake that the base can survive for so many years. Or is this a common problem among Internet article writers? When they see a woman. . .

Come and press the claws. If you were easily persuaded to quit before, just change it. 🤓

The author is interesting, please add it🤓

Mr. Ke's background is grand and easy to write down! Nourish again

Emmm, I have raised so many

The heroine finally comes out! Are you sure the armor and blade on her are not Brother A? Or Sister A╮(╯▽╰)╭

Comments are welcome, and comments are expected!

I relied on this book to get up, don't believe it.