The Rise of a Merchant House

Holy crap, you only wrote one flop book, and you're only at level 5? Dude, are you a shareholder of Qidian?

Author, this plot is too cruel! The female lead eats a fish that costs the protagonist a hundred million, and she knows he's a superhuman. Her father owes her two hundred million and sells her off, and she just gives in like that? She knows the protagonist's power all too well... Speechless. So brainless.

The romance aspect is truly awful; can we please stop with the harem?

A cliché opening, oh well, goodbye.

Five trillion yuan to build affordable housing? Do you even know what five trillion yuan means?

Why do you always write about PUBG? And each chapter takes up several chapters, it's just padding the word count. Even if the game is popular, you can't forget what kind of novel you're writing!

179. The more I read, the more frustrated I feel. The author's ideas are too far-fetched. It's wrong to always revolve around the plot between men and women!

What I want to say is that in Chapter 150, the ancient martial arts family lacks mystery. It's as if everyone in the novel knows about them, which is bad and lowers the overall prestige. Secondly, it's ridiculous that a few schoolgirls, who just met some shady characters at a bar, can suddenly have someone from a top-tier ancient martial arts family get their help.

Is this written about Jimo? My great Qingdao is that awesome?!

This kind of opening formula is used in many novels.