Devil's Test Paper

What we like to see is the protagonist with high IQ surviving in various dangerous environments, using various clues to deduce the truth, and then survive. Instead of seeing a bunch of Western things, like devil messengers and whatnot, who has the patience to see them? What ghost corpses, Jenny, Tom and the like are really disgusting. Who do you want to show these things to? If you add a bunch of Western stuff to the horror and supernatural novel, it will be very poisonous, okay? The lottery and other things are also poisonous. Didn't you discover it when you first wrote about Hell Apartment? But why do you still use this setting later? You must know that one of the reasons for the brilliance of Hell Apartment is because it relies solely on manpower, not props. What we want to see is one horror story after another, not an adventure disguised as horror!

This book really disappointed me. It was too tiring to read. There were a lot of unnecessary and cumbersome descriptions, as well as a lot of psychological descriptions that did not advance the plot and atmosphere. The plot was dragging. It was a bit interesting at the beginning, but I just kept turning the pages afterwards. Most of the content in one chapter was explanation, which made me tired.

I feel that there are too many nonsense and psychological descriptions in the devil exam paper, and the addition of the Western demon Satan makes it difficult to incorporate it. I suggest that the author should write more Asian supernatural legends, and not write about the Satanic sect of the Black Shadow Cult. Isn't it nice to do it like the apartment period?

I read Hell Apartment when I was a freshman in high school. At that time, I was deeply impressed by the horror atmosphere set by Tinder. To this day, I recommend Hell Apartment first among horror novels. Sometimes when I look back at this novel, I do feel that the writing is not good enough, but in any case, this book can be said to be a milestone in the development of horror novels. However, regarding his next works, I have the same view as many book friends - not as good as Hell Apartment. This is not a blind comparison or nitpicking, but a lack of adaptability to the change in writing style and a dislike for writing techniques. To be fair, the writing level, plot development and story structure of the subsequent books have not deteriorated, but are more mature than Hell Apartment. But why are you disappointed? I would like to share some of my own opinions: First, what the old audience likes most is that the characters in the book use wisdom to find a way out among ghosts and aliens, rather than the later Long Aotian-style sweep or the immortality novel-style chance and epiphany that continuously improves strength and treats ghosts and monsters as nothing. The second one is Western mythology or Cthulhu's sudden death. I personally think that a good horror novel can certainly contain horror legends from ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad, but it should not be too abrupt, giving readers the impression that some villains and plots are temporarily added, which will make many people feel very awkward. The third is to review the first two problems. The reason for them is the lack of a clear and complete main line and outline. What content will appear in this book, where will it end, and how to pave the way so that the expansion of new characters and new copies will not be so sudden. These should have been grasped by the author before starting the book. If the entire book is not planned well, it will often be a highlight at the beginning, a tired middle, and an explosion at the end.        ，，，，，，，， The above are just my thoughts as a young book fan and a loyal fan of Tinder. There is a lot of subjectivity in them. Moreover, the audience scope of horror novels is small, the writing income and time cost are too disproportionate, and the current situation is to severely crack down on this field. These are objective and very serious real problems, but I still naively put forward these opinions of mine, hoping to be a little bit helpful to the author. After all, in my eyes, Tinder is the pioneer of horror online writing and the person most likely to go further.

I hope Tinder can refer to the writing style of the horror and apartment period 😒 At that time, the plot was very concise, and there was not so much nonsense. The protagonist did not have plug-ins and so many psychological descriptions. I feel that the current devil examination paper is not at all written by the author himself, or it is not written so seriously and meticulously. After reading your books for six years, from the horror to the examination paper, I sincerely hope that the author can regain his glory and write this novel well, and give us old readers a surprise.

It can only be said that it is a novel that was buried by the authorities and the author. The author's horror novel is really one of the scariest among all novels. It is also very imaginative and has an excellent setting. The early stage of this book is completely a masterpiece... The combination of the answers and horror completely brings to life the four words of being forced and helpless. Zz Excluding external factors, various problems began in the middle of the book. The author likes to give characters a so-called emotional entanglement between men and women. If the writing is good, I won't mention it, but it is really awkward, and it is a very childish relationship between men and women. Love means giving everything, just like Princess Huanzhu. You hurt me, I hurt you, and in the end we cried together. A good person is a good person written in black and white, a good person at the level of the Virgin Mary descending from heaven to earth. The most embarrassing form of good person expression is the old-fashioned one. In children's animation, I must protect everyone's concept. To be honest, Pleasant Goat behaves more like a good person in the traditional sense. The childish world view of the characters greatly affects the reading experience. Every time I see the male and female protagonists, I think of Erkang's big nostrils, and then Ziwei shouts there, "Do you love me, do you love me, do you love me..."

After watching the second scene at the beginning, I felt that the setting and atmosphere were pretty good, but there were too many repetitive and long-winded places. For example, the girl's scene where the earthquake feelings appeared repeatedly in just a few chapters, and the boys' scene in the deserted village also emphasized a problem several times. To be honest, it was a bit tiring to read.

I have finished reading Alien Horror, Hell Apartment, and Death Curse Island. The protagonist in the book is helpless towards death and never gives up the pursuit of survival. The author's control of the horror atmosphere is a very important thing for me to appreciate the author. However, the book "Examination Room" went a lot wrong, with too much depiction of human nature. Less of this kind of depiction will add a lot of color to the content, but too much of it will inevitably add a sense of heaviness, and descriptions such as reasoning cannot withstand scrutiny because of lack of polish.

Hell Cinema is a trap. It has not reached the zero theater. It is really a masterpiece and I can't put it down. Unfortunately, the transformation failed. This book has no feeling like before. It's a shame.

Alas, to be honest, I actually hate the way Tinder is written. Supernatural powers are flying all over the sky, and a circle of weak mortals use weird rules to compete with those guys in a battle of wits and courage. It's quite brain-burning. You can think about it differently. Is it interesting for a superior being to look at the teasing ants? The ants who have strength, resistance, and sparkle are the meaning of these weird rules. Otherwise, I really don't know how you will end up in the end. It takes a lot of effort for mortals to fight against weirdness, but mortals are always noobs and have no new ideas. How can a group of mortals achieve immortality. Immortality means eternal life, so if you are hit by a car and die, does that also comply with the rules? Manual funny

Overuse of ellipsis can give you a headache. He keeps saying "I..." And "I know..." All the time, which greatly affects the reading experience. The psychological description is too long-winded and low-level, as if a low-level loser is gibbering about some big truth, and is full of a sense of dissonance. ...... Author, what happened to you...? This kind of change in Long Aotian's show-off style...(-ι_-)

Come on, fire! Adjust yourself as soon as possible. There are still a lot of fans supporting you! Don't underestimate yourself, you are a very talented author! Also my favorite supernatural author!

Black fire will always be black🙂

I was watching Hell Cinema recently. I haven't finished it yet, but I saw the plot of Heaven and Hell 1, and then the following is a fan song 😊

From Hell Apartment to now, this book is really not that good. The portrayal of human nature is a bit stiff. Whether "immortality" is worth pursuing is also open to question. I am very satisfied to have been supported by Huoda's many real and interesting books for so many years.

Can you please stop writing about war-related aspects? This horror novel is good. But when I saw this, I saw the protagonists' feelings about eternal life. I'm going to play.

The ghosts in this book kill for the sake of killing, and have no emotion at all. The protagonists are all struggling on the edge of death. I have only read 14 chapters, and the ghosts in Infinite Horror are still better written. There are only ghosts that harm people but there is no way to deal with them. After reading the book review, there are no protective props or anything at all. Forget it.

What a pity. The previous books written by Pyro Master were so wonderful, but now I look back and see that they are all blocked! I hope the blockade can be lifted after the limelight subsides!

Please speak your mind I just saw Huo Da say that this book has never been praised, and I can really see how uncomfortable he feels I don't want to say something that is so annoying that Huo Da should hurry up and write the exam paper back to pure horror. After all, Devil's Apartment is already writing, and it's lucky that the exam paper can continue to be updated. Okay, enough complaining, here are my thoughts on this book First of all, this book is not bad. Judging from the setting alone, the world view of the test paper is second only to the movie theater in Huodashu The reason why we complain that the test paper is not good-looking is not because it really does not look good but because it is not to our appetite. If a group of old people who are accustomed to eating spicy food all year round suddenly switch to light food, they will always be a little repelled. But if you are someone who is used to eating boiled cabbage, you will find the light food extremely delicious. In terms of the design of the test questions, the logic is strict, each question has a reason for its existence, and there is no redundant content. But from a plot perspective, although there is no big problem, water still exists. Of course, this can only be considered a minor problem. As for the character creation, I can say that it is good. No matter which character he is, his personality is quite full. (Of course sometimes these characters may disappear temporarily xd) The last point, which is what I said above, is not to our liking-that is, the horror atmosphere is not satisfactory. Of course, I am happy to see Huoda have a transitional work. After all, people cannot hang on the same tree. After Hell Apartment, fans who have been paying attention to Huo Da have been using Hell Apartment to compare his other works. Granted, I've done this too, but that doesn't mean we think Huoda's books are particularly bad. Hell Apartment and Alien Horror are the pinnacle of classics. Now Huo Da is already a veteran, and he can be said to be very good at describing horror scenes and characters' hearts, which is also reflected in Devil's Apartment. I believe that Huo Da's ability has not weakened, he is just looking for another path - a path that can ensure that he does not violate his original intention and allows himself to face reality calmly. No one can grow in smooth sailing, but it is absolutely impossible to grow if you only suffer all kinds of setbacks without encouragement during the process. Therefore, I implore you here not to be stingy with your words of praise, but to encourage Huo Da more, instead of using criticism in the hope that Huo Da will become more courageous as he becomes frustrated. After all, Huo Da is also a cannibal.

Mark it first. I entered the horror movie theater and was shocked in the early stage. I didn't expect that there was such a level of novels. However, later on, there were job changes, gods and demons, and I was persuaded to quit. The sense of substitution was not enough. I wanted to watch ordinary people struggling to survive rather than various abilities. (That is, I like the world of low martial arts, and I have not seen much about Western demons since I was a child, so I don't understand the horror. I only watch Eastern zombies, evil spirits, etc.). I hope this new work of the author can maintain the rhythm of the early stage of the cinema, come on!

Congratulations to Brother Tinder on the release of his new book! (*ˉˉ*) The fire is raging, and my little brother comes to pay homage to the building

I think the new book Black Fire is very good. I don't understand why there are so many criticisms. I have also read Black Fire's books one by one. I think this book is very good. No matter in terms of setting, plot, or writing style, I can't fault it. It's just that the update is too slow, but it is human nature that a good book takes a long time. I think it is still the original horror atmosphere of Black Fire. DaDa has already become a god in the hearts of us old readers. The aroma of wine is not afraid of deep alleys. I hope DaDa will not be affected by some biased criticism, be yourself, put quality first, your efforts, real readers will read between the lines of your words, we have always been here, come on.

I just read the book review and I really feel sorry for the author. The IQ of this book is online and the characters have distinct personalities. Qidian's article is a rare masterpiece, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage. As a result, there were so many scolding book reviews, so you can imagine the author's depression. This is the first Black Fire book I've read. At first, I thought the author was pretentious. Why would a grown-up man be depressed? After reading so many trolls in the book reviews, if I wrote seriously and carefully, my results would not be as good as those of many novice writers, and I would be criticized so much and cursed so much. The key is that writing this kind of article requires a lot of effort and brain-burning, but I am truly impressed that I can still write it down. Come on.

As a long-time reader of Tinder, I can only say that this book is really disappointing. It's okay to include private information. It will make good readers think that you have a good outlook on life, but it is disgusting to include it. If you don't know history, or have only a partial understanding of it, then don't show off, or make others laugh and make yourself unhappy. Take the Songhu Anti-Japanese War as an example. From a military and political perspective, it is not wrong. With the strength invested by the national army at that time, it would be no problem to solve the 3,000 Japanese troops in Shanghai. If it could be resolved quickly, the Songhu Anti-Japanese War would have another outcome. However, A series of tactical and strategic mistakes in the middle, and Bald's strategic determination changed again and again, which made the national army exhausted and bought time for mobilization. This led to the subsequent great rout. In the final analysis, the ideal was beautiful, but the problem was that one general was incompetent and exhausted the three armies. However, the Songhu Anti-Japanese War was also a watershed in the Anti-Japanese War. Prior to this, there were two factions within the footbath among flower growers. One was the moderate faction, which advocated using limited power to encroach step by step from North China and boil rabbits in warm water. The other faction was the radicals, who directly bombarded his mother and occupied the flower growers for three months. After the defeat of the Songhu Anti-Japanese War, the radicals quickly suppressed the moderates and invaded the flower growers with all their strength. They also dragged the footbath into the quagmire. This caused a series of economic collapse and resource shortages in the footbath. They were forced to sneak attack Yingjiang and then finish the job. There is nothing that should or should not be done. The bald head is a bonus and all the points are added to the internal struggle. Other than that, it is useless. The disastrous defeat in the War of Resistance is due to our own incompetence. Look at history objectively, rather than writing for readers with a strong sense of subjectivity. In addition, the popsicle fight between Yingjiang and Mao Xiong, Mustache and the Gods, etc., The author also wrote that there are dramas everywhere, can we just write them simply? We are not here to see history. If we really want to see history, can I buy the complete record of World War II and watch CCTV documentaries? Also, even if the Ming and Qing Dynasties are divided, how do you look at it, the Da Meng Dynasty will definitely be good? Is it necessarily bad to have braids? Are barbarians the only ones who have done inhumane things? All of this depends on how you look at it. I can only say that the author's journey from almost becoming a god to being neither good nor bad is purely his own doing.

This book was ruined by the heroine. It was originally a good book. Alas, the author is stubborn and cannot hear what the readers are saying. It is his own fault. You can never wake up someone who is pretending to sleep.

Fuel the fire! Be confident in yourself! From your novel hell apartment to hell cinema, marvel at the plot of your novel! I really feel that your works are more attractive than so-called popular novels. No matter what others say about you in real life, your writing is so great! I saw what you thought about the Campus Legend section, so I wanted to share my thoughts. 🙂

Mainly because this book is a horror novel and the space for describing emotions is limited, so this is the only way. If you don't believe me, you watch a love movie, it's only 2 hours long, how can you make it if the hero and heroine don't fall in love within half an hour?

1 Since everything is written about supernatural beings, it directly strengthens the power of the head of state and affects the protagonist group. 2 I feel that the plot is tight and there is too little daily life. The character information revealed through the exam always feels like it is done entirely to enrich a single story. It is heartbreaking to say that the characters have not been seen yet. But the immortality of the supporting characters contradicts the horror novel. 3. The identity of the protagonist and leader is too single, and he is constantly on the road to escape. Compared with the early stage of Hell Cinema, at least the protagonist can not be restricted to die because of his different identity. Hell Apartment has a strong sense of decryption. You can feel that the author has done a good job in the background color of some background panels, but the character of the protagonist and leader is all the way to the end.

Sorry, I have been reading popular books for so long. This is the first and only time that all the "real heroines" and "suspected heroines" are so disgusted and disgusted. I really don't understand how far Zhu Sunling has to go before he can give up. From the first time Gao Ying and Zhu Sunling met, Zhu Sunling has been plotting against Gao Ying. If Zhu Sunling gave Gao Ying an absolute order during the mid-term exam, "You cannot use absolute orders and other rewards to hurt me, nor can you prohibit me from copying your rewards," it was out of self-preservation; then this time, in order to protect Dong Xie, a psychic, Zhu Sunling held Gao Ying still, and then copied Gao Ying's rewards, and said, "You are still too emotional after all." This is really equivalent to stabbing someone in the back. What is Zhu Sunling's reason? The reason is that Gao Ying's divine healing can eliminate all rewards that are unfavorable to Gao Ying, which means that theoretically Zhu Sunling cannot use absolute orders or other rewards to harm Gao Ying. But the problem is that Zhu Sunling once asked Gao Ying to give him an order, prohibiting Zhu Sunling from using rewards to harm Gao Ying. This categorical imperative is not considered a negative state in nature, which means that divine healing cannot eliminate such categorical imperatives. Therefore, regardless of whether divine healing exists or not, Gao Ying and Zhu Sunling can not harm each other. No matter what happens, if Zhu Sunling is worried about not being able to check and balance Gao Ying, the worst he can do is copy Gao Ying's divine healing reward. Anyway, Zhu Sunling's absolute command to Gao Ying, "You cannot prohibit me from copying your rewards," will not cause harm to Gao Ying in itself, and is not within the scope of elimination by divine healing. Otherwise, Zhu Sunling would not be able to copy Gao Ying's summoning evil spirit reward at all. It is true that Zhu Sunling's character is too vicious and too independent to allow others to dominate her, which is understandable. But to put it another way, that is to say, no matter which examination room Zhu Sunling is in, as long as someone else draws a reward that is not under her control, they may be plotted or killed by her. She doesn't trust anyone at all and is not worthy of being a companion worthy of being entrusted to her. What's even more confusing is that Gao Ying's new reward had no negative effect on Zhu Sunling at all, and Zhu Sunling still left resolutely. It can be seen that Zhu Sunling not only doesn't trust anyone, she can even think of it one after another, and she just takes it as fun to stab her teammates. So I think the real reason why Zhu Sunling turned against Gao Ying was not because she couldn't control Gao Ying, but because of two reasons: First, she took a fancy to Dong Xie's identity as a spiritual medium and intended to protect Dong Xie. On the premise that Dong Xie killed Ji Yixuan and then killed Agnes, everyone in Gao Ying's team, including Gao Ying himself, Yan Yuchu, and Ji Yixin, must be killed. Dong Xie's; secondly, she realized that Gao Ying refused to listen to her and insisted on killing Dong Xie - I think this is the key. Although Zhu Sunling said that she needed teammates with high abilities, in fact, what she needed was just capable and loyal slaves. She didn't need the kind of comrades who could not be controlled by her at all. She would rather stab a comrade in the back than have such a comrade. I estimate that Zhu Sunling's betrayal will cause a wound in Gao Ying's heart that will never heal. From now on, Gao Ying might not trust anyone else. Finally, I have to say that Zhu Sunling is very much like the blackened Marquis Heine. He also has delusions of being persecuted, and always has a mentality of "there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm me." For her, there is no need for confidant friends. She only needs obedient slaves or dead people around her. Sad and hateful Zhu Sunling! You are not worthy of Gao Ying at all!

I have been following Tinder's novels since the period of The Messenger from Hell Apartment, and I have also read the two earlier ones. Apartment, including the previous works, scared me so much that I hid in bed and shivered, and I was paranoid even when I went up the stairs. The author said before that it was tiring to solve puzzles and burn your brain, but this is where it gets interesting. The first is Yinmen Village, which is well written, including the creation of a terrifying atmosphere in the early stage, the collection and inference of clues in a short period of time, and the revelation at the end; the ending of the campus part is too hasty, and some clues are not fully laid out, such as where the summoning book comes from, how Yifei knows the truth of the matter, and what is in that book method of summoning possession; the prison part is overall dull, with occasional highlights, such as the straight-line attack section, but the section describing the birth of Agnes is weird and interesting, making people wonder why they were born on the same day as Elizabeth, who is the owner of the mysterious hand, and why he helped Agnes to be born. The cooperation between Zhu and Gao was originally a highlight, but it ended up being anticlimactic. The clues that were disemboweled in the early stage were not used at all. At the end, Wilvin's unparalleled performance was even more confusing. He and his Abyss-level uncle had no sense of presence in the early stage. They promised to practice hard and push all the way? At the end, a stroke of genius suddenly came to the fore, and gold dollars were howled out. What was that scream at the beginning, and why were there repeated clues about cats or small animals? I was really depressed after reading this book. The simultaneous spread of multiple lines is a highlight, but the writing of each line is too rough. Even if the real author writes slower, at least he needs to collect clues and write them all. Like this small town book, evil spirits have the ability to kill so many people. Why didn't the entire town be emptied? There should be fishermen who live by the sea. Why not let the fishermen lead the people and let Charlene lead the people? Somewhat unreasonable.