Shushan World Swordsman Tour

Author, is this book a eunuch? ?

Some book friends think that the masters of Shushan World knew in advance that those treasures and so on could not be taken from this or that. In fact, the Shushan sect's foreknowledge is not that strong. The founder of the sect has long eyebrows, even if he is not sure about his junior brother's mind, he will enter the devil's way. The equally arrogant Master Ji Le, when he first appeared on the scene, all his disciples disappeared due to various reasons. Ling Hun was originally handsome, but when his soul left his body, his body was destroyed by Bai Guyi, and he could only take away a beggar. Yi Xiu was originally tall, but he was besieged by Ling Hun and others. In the end, they joined forces and used the magical power to move mountains and suppressed them for decades... If the gods are so good, how could they be like this? Moreover, the book does not mention those "experts" who know all the magic weapons and heavenly books, or pay attention to them all the time. This is just the book lover's own imagination. For example, if Emei couldn't open the box of Nanming Lihuo Sword, why didn't they do some "magic calculation" and know what to do? Obviously not, Grandma Jin still had to say: Fellow Taoist Yuqing is well-informed, wait for her to come and see if there is any magic method. You still have to find someone to inquire. With a magic weapon like this in front of you, you still have to find out how to open it. How come those who have not been born yet "know everything in advance"? I prefer the author's plot handling in this book. He was not timid when collecting treasures, he was just cautious, selective, and within his ability. 👍

Shushan is about sword fighting, chivalry, and exploring caves, rather than sect competitions. This is no different from half of the cultivation novels, and it has lost its uniqueness. If you are not careful, it becomes a cultivation novel with Shushan skin.

Is this being raised to death by me again?

It seems that Shushan has never been unable to practice at the same time, right?

The Legend of Shushan Swordsman is a novel I read when I was in fifth grade in elementary school. It can be said that it was because of it that I became deeply fascinated by all the fantastic ideas in the novel. Most of the Shushan-themed novels disparage Emei to attract attention. When it comes to derogating Emei, few people can handle it very well. Most of them belittle the EQ and IQ of the cultivators in Emei, or belittle the behavior of Emei in fighting monsters and killing monsters, and beating evil people to seize the heaven and earth. Let me first say that Emei acts in a rather domineering manner, targeting evil demons. Shouldn't demons like Green Robe who eat people's hearts and lungs alive be destroyed? Shouldn't the three phoenixes that cut off the path to immortality be destroyed? As far as the book is concerned, the setting at the beginning is not bad, but when it comes to the fight with Jin Chan, it becomes a cliche plot of the evil young man bullying the pig's feet and being slapped in the face, and then the old man comes out to make things worse. I think that if the leader of a religion has only this little emotional intelligence, he will blatantly take revenge on his son just because he lost a fight. This is probably something only those village tyrants and hooligans would do. People with a little knowledge will first investigate the situation. If you deal with the situation properly, you might be able to get rid of your son's arrogance and aloofness; even those with a dark psychology will never seek revenge for their son by going astray, but will quietly eliminate the pig's feet in other upright ways. As far as my own feelings about Shushan are concerned, Master Qi is a gentle, graceful, wise, responsible, and gentleman-like figure. Otherwise, how could the long eyebrows of the first man in a thousand years pass on the position of master to him? Or maybe none of the other brothers (except Xiaoyue) objected, and the real senior brother Xuan Zhenzi expressed support for him to become the leader? Therefore, the writing method of Shushan should not be limited to disparaging Emei, nor should it be limited to the world of Shushan. It should be based on or start from Shushan and look at the entire universe. This is the great Shushan in my heart.

Mr. Sky Swordsman was a decent man during his lifetime, so he shouldn't be too miserable after his death. Let's all spit on him and leave.

Unfortunately, I am sorry for everyone!

I don't know, but before writing a fanfic, you should at least know why the book is well written and how it perfectly discards the essence.

I just started reading it, and after reading a few chapters about the work, the author said that the character of Huanzhu Louzhu was a bit broken. In fact, the reason why the character of Shushan was broken was because the era that Huanzhu Louzhu lived in was not a peaceful era, with warlords fighting and the invasion of foreign powers. Invasion, thoughts surged, and the living conditions of the people at that time had a great impact on the master of Huanzhu Tower, so much so that the monks in the Shushan book did not have the spirit of immortality, but seemed a bit harsh and mean, which made us living in modern society feel a sense of disharmony.

If you want to stop updating, please post a reason to explain it, but it will disappear at every turn. After reading the author's previous works, I found that they were never completed normally. It's not easy to become a top scholar in practice, so don't make it difficult for yourself if you don't succeed.

The novel is okay, but what I criticize the most is that the protagonist looks down on other people's greed for life, profit-seeking, cruelty, treachery, protection of shortcomings, etc., But at the same time the protagonist does it himself.

That is a revolution that defies heaven. As the saying goes, it is easy to live in peace without rebellion, (harmony) with flowers (harmony) with electric drills, and cultivation of immortality is not against heaven. Why come to Shushan! In Shushan's world view, people would not accept Miao Hong at all unless his roots were upright. This is not selfish or not. There are as many resources as there are merits. If you separate people, you will lose one point. In addition, in the era of the end of the Dharma (the spiritual energy trend is decreasing, etc.), The general environment is degraded, and the family members are crushing each other. They will also allow a person with mediocre qualifications to consume several times the resources of a person with the qualifications to cultivate immortality to grab a job. In the era of good resources Guangchengzi and Baimei, they have been enclosed for future generations like land. This is called walking your own path, leaving others with no way to go. Why do those evil magic weapons use the materials to hit people? It's not because they have no genius! What's more, when attacking people, be careful not to be riddled with sins. After raising them for a certain period of time, send the juniors to wear divine armor to kill them. They will gain experience, lose equipment, and have merits, so why not do it for them!

Don't wait any longer, author. . . . . . Hey, don't say it anymore, I'm so miserable

Start. . . Don't want to say anything? The protagonist's IQ is tolerable, but the afterimage of Yuan Gong makes no sense, even though he has become an immortal. . . . . How can one become an immortal with this kind of mind?

I vowed not to be a eunuch... But the result...

Four hundred thousand words and only two heroines? ?

The author should show up less in the book review section and concentrate on writing the book instead of explaining. The ones that suit your taste will stay, and too many explanations that don't suit your taste will be useless. Veteran authors rarely appear in the book review area. This is not good for you and will also affect your mentality and thinking. Another thing to say, don't always argue with book friends. No matter whether you are right or wrong, it is the book that will be affected.

This chapter opens "The Rise of Wudang in Shushan". Wudang is also a famous sect, with Patriarch Sanfeng! There are also some relationships such as the Kunlun Sect! There are also more outstanding disciples such as Wudang Four Swordsmen and Wudang Seven Women! In addition, the protagonist grabs treasures, grabs skills, and collects good talents on behalf of others! Wudang is booming!

This is definitely not the world of The Legend of Shushan Swordsman. The author has too many private goods and has completely changed its taste.

I would like to give some suggestions, I have only read Chapter 57 so far. 1. The author often mentions Shushan in the book, which is not good. Since writing, I will gradually stop mentioning it. This will limit the development of the book, limit the bold leap of thinking, and limit the appearance of characters (everything is from Shushan). This book must be the author's thinking, the author's story, and the author's understanding. 2. There are so few sects, and they often frame themselves in a very limited world. Can't they join in? Huashan Sect, Kongtong Sect, Songshan Sect, Changsheng Sect, Huanximen, Tianhua Palace, Wumatang, Black Crow Gang, etc. The audience can read both Shushan and the author's novels. Isn't this good? 3. Protagonists and supporting roles. The supporting roles should be diverse, including strong, suspicious, mixed, perverted, neither male nor female, indecisive, murderous, sentimental, hot inside and cold outside, etc. The protagonist should be good at thinking, practice hard, be calm in situations, clear about grudges, benevolent, righteous, chivalrous, etc. 4. As the story develops, many characters will slowly appear, including humans, demons, monsters, Taoists, monks, doctors, mortals, Rakshasa, Shura, non-humans, knights, monsters, mounts, immortals, island owners, hermits, etc. These characters plus the story can form a flesh-and-blood plot and be enjoyable to watch. 5. In trials, there are secret realms everywhere. At that level, there must be secret realms. Otherwise, no developers will want to introduce games or mobile games in the future. 6. Kung Fu, elixirs, formations, weapon refining, spiritual pets, restrictions, cheats, secrets, magic weapons, magic weapons, spiritual treasures, fairy weapons, puppets, talismans, runes, voodoo, curses, etc. Need to be added, and the protagonist needs to master them slowly. 7. Ancient families, these unborn and born families should be included. 8. In addition to the prosperous and remote lands, there are also barbaric lands with few people inhabited, which can be added to the wild lands. There are many more, so I won't tell them one by one here. I hope the author can refer to them. I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written, and it will become a classic in the future.

A bit of an abrupt explanation! When the protagonist was in Emei, Qi Shuming didn't notice any abnormal time travel! Why did you use this excuse not to become a disciple when you arrived in Kunlun! The foreshadowing plot felt weird. I watched 68, 69, and 74 alone. There is little point in revising this! In the world of Emei, it makes sense that someone became enlightened in three years.

EMM, I have been waiting for a long time to write this book at the end of the year. I am writing this. If I had not told you that this book was written by you, I thought you recommended it to someone else. You would have come to support it earlier if you had told me earlier! 😁😁😁

The protagonist tells a lie once and has to tell it a second time. In fact, there is no need to write it like this. It seems that there are too many thoughts and is not a fairy-like manner. Unless there is too much difference, the realm in Shushan is useless. What matters is the magic weapon and the power of the fairy sword. There are many scenes where the old masters of the Demonic Way are chased and killed by several Emei juniors.

The world of Shushan is actually the end of the Ming Dynasty and the beginning of the Qing Dynasty, which was the age of great exploration in the West. I want to see how the famous fighting clans of the West earned the title of the Empire on which the Sun Never Sets on the sea. Using a mortal body to kill gods. Can the author write?

Almost everyone has their own point of view. The author can refer to it, but it cannot be affected too much. You should be the main one and be inclusive. Only in this way can you write a good article!

Please update it quickly. This book is obviously good, but the update is too slow. It has been so long that I have forgotten what you wrote before?

A Sword 7 Feet How tall is a pig's foot in the book? What do you mean, you're almost as tall as a pig's feet? Are pig's feet over 2.3 Meters tall? ? ? Author, can you be more rigorous? This obvious logical thinking looks really funny.

As a die-hard Shushan fan, I would like to talk about a few points about this book: 1. The updates are too slow. Compared with the top-ranked novels of all types from Qidian. Com, none of them update so slowly. Even free ones update so slowly. By the time you pay, all the popularity will be lost. This is a flaw. This book will not become popular unless it is improved. 2. Depending on the author's intention, he wants to write the map in the ascending order of the human world - the spiritual world - the fairy world, so my suggestion is not to introduce it according to the storyline of the original work. Otherwise, except for the human world, which can be the same as Shushan, you have to make up the rest of it yourself, which will give people a sense of inconsistency. It is suggested that a separate story line be created with the world of Shushan as the background, and characters from the original events interspersed in it, which will not only give readers the feeling of the Shushan Swordsman Legend, but also have new ideas. 3. Keep track of the progress. I see that there are about dozens of chapters now, and the progress of Pig's Feet is a bit fast. I know that the author wants to improve his cultivation level as soon as possible so that he can participate in major events in Shushan. Personally, it is not necessary. Don't go to the Shushan world and rise rapidly, and become immortals, earthly immortals, and heavenly immortals in a few days. Small people can also participate in big things. You have to understand that people who read online articles are small people, and people like Da Da and Jack Ma will not read them. Then you need to write from the perspective of small people participating in big things, so that readers can feel involved and interested. If it is too lofty, it will separate you from the masses and make readers bored. If you think about it, most of you don't think about what time we get off work every day, and the issues of gifts for friends and happy events, just like if you are already a god, you still want to grab some human magic weapon, Taoist book, treasure, other people's opportunities, etc., Isn't that a bit cheap? The above are all personal opinions. The key word "suggestion" is just a suggestion. It doesn't matter if you don't adopt it. I will continue to read your updates. Netizens, please don't complain.

It's too watery. The introductory plot is watery for more than ten chapters.