Pingwei Hunting

If you want to see the author wearing women's clothing, please raise your hand

Reading the introduction reminded me of a movie by Jet Li, it seems to be called The Savior, watch it first to respect it! ! !

The Morning Reading List arrived, and it feels good to read the recommended reading list (ฅ>ω<*ฅ)

I just watched it. After entering the magical medieval world, I found that the plot concept of the story plummeted. It was incredible...

The book is very interesting. Why are the results so low? It is much better than the messy routine writing, okay~_~

Jet Li acted in a similar movie many years ago

I originally left a message for the author, saying that he was overly flattering himself. In particular, I talked about the fact that the heroine also traveled through time. Originally, the protagonist was supposed to travel alone, and "that's enough." The writing is interesting and not bad at all. I had to add some emotional scenes, and write the one-on-one scene as a group one. The protagonist travels alone, and can travel through countless worlds. Traveling to other worlds and meeting people who have traveled through other worlds are enough for you to write thousands of chapters. You also forced to add drama and settings, trying to write something different, but in the end it was not written, but it was written well. Instead, it was superfluous and included a whole book. (I have gone too far in my self-pleasure, forced to go my own way, and the description of women's appearance is still the same as it was a few years ago)

After a while, I raised it for a while until it died!

One Hundred Thousand Bad Jokes, Time and Space Administration

Let's talk about the biggest failure in this article. Leya obtains a pocket watch and has the ability to travel through time and space. First of all, according to the pocket watch rules: when you enter that time, you must kill the same version of yourself. In other words, when Leya enters the protagonist's world, she will kill his classmates. I won't say which female classmate it is. I reminded the author when he started writing about other people's pocket watches. Unfortunately, he didn't listen and frantically deleted my comment. I have no choice. Although it is not written that Leya killed the protagonist's classmate later, the rules have been broken by the author😒 So you are destined to write poorly.

The settings are good, but apart from this, there is nothing else. I don't understand the tone of this book at all. Since it is a hunt, it must be more intense and slightly darker. The protagonist's spiritual journey can be traced, but why use a cheerful tone to describe such a serious story. It looks extremely contradictory. Including the settings between the characters are quite nonsensical. To be honest, if you want to write a funny article, you can definitely change it to a golden finger.

There are too many pocket watches, and I personally feel uncomfortable looking at them.

The introduction looks so much like the movie "Space Wanted"

Isn't this Jet Li's wanted order from the universe?

I have been chasing it for a long time, but now I don't know why I am no longer interested. I would like to commemorate that time of chasing books with this sentence.

He keeps saying that he likes the heroine! Garbage garbage

Can you change the name of the male protagonist? If a good boy has to give a girl's name, it will really make things worse. When I saw the name of the protagonist in the first chapter of the opening chapter, I thought my hands were shaking like a girl...

. . . After ordering it all, I found it was unfinished. . . .

I just read Chapter 23 and I don't understand it. In other words, if every parallel world has a pocket watch, the pocket watch is not necessarily in the hands of Yin Ying in every parallel world. People who have a pocket watch in every parallel world can go to another parallel world to hunt themselves, right? And if Yi Ying in this parallel world has a pocket watch, it's possible that Yi Ying in another world doesn't have a pocket watch, right?

Jet Li Movie (Savior)

Universe Wanted? "The One"

The name is quite impressive, but it's useless 🤓

It is completely worthy of its performance People other than the protagonist are obviously smarter. There are some logical inaccuracies With a theme like "Kill Yourself", I don't know why it is written in a relaxed atmosphere of visiting relatives and friends for an outing. Liu Lili appeared several times in the book, giving people a good impression. But later she was killed, which was really unacceptable. I don't know why it was written like this.

The protagonist looks like a fool😅

It's good to wear one's own dimension, and it's also interesting to communicate with people from other dimensions and reflect the contrast of the same individual in different dimensions. But (the turning point) when others can also wear Dimension, it becomes uncomfortable. Your friends in your own world can be replaced, even if the clone retains the memory of the original, etc., Readers can see it more ╯╰ Starting from the fact that other people can also wear dimensions, the coolness is extremely reduced...

About the history of the magical world The more I read, the more something seems wrong Have you ever thought about the history of the United States? Except for less efforts at emancipation and the Civil War. The next plot of the plot is the Civil War between the South and the South in the magical world.

I follow up as usual and don't feel it is any different from other books. As a result, I didn't know until today that this book actually only has 20 readers? ! If this is really the case, then just stop writing if you don't want to. But it's such a pity...

When the second pocket watch appears, it means that it exists in every world. So the question is, why is the world not in chaos? Will super powers and super technology basically exist in every world and collapse?

When I saw the title of the final chapter, I kept thinking of getting pregnant without warning.

The new book "Guests on the Edge of Doom" welcomes interested friends to read it. I have experienced the apocalypse, more than one apocalypse, I have seen the collapse of civilization and the destruction of order. I am like a traveler, living in their world. Civilization is sometimes as fragile as a piece of paper, but life, even in the darkest abyss, there will always be people working hard to find the light. I often wonder, will my world come to an end? There is no answer to this question. Unless one day, I can go back there, as a dead man.