Games in Upper Dimensions

There's nothing bad about it, but I don't really like this style. It can be seen that the author has a lot of imagination, but it gives me the feeling of using too much force. The world jumps too fast, and the setting of the clone mirror makes the world transition faster. Personally, I think the description of Dieyi is a failure. It doesn't have any sense of high-latitude life. Instead, it looks like a self-righteous Long Aotian, and his behavior from time to time seems very low-key. As for the character of that female official in the country, it's really annoying, and this causal law research organization is even more baffling.

Although I really want to write a long article. . . I feel that not many people can take the time to read a long article, but the unique setting of this book is still very endearing, he said. . . The writing style is okay. In everyone's eyes, the first 100 chapters are quite a long foreshadowing. Don't be fooled. The foundation of a book is good, the foreshadowing is good, and the twists are wonderful. The follow-up will definitely be interesting to read, hahaha. The book of the end of the world ~ This is the first one, so there must be some bad points. Anyway, please suggest the questions that should be asked~ Anyway, I have already drank this poison, what about you~

The author is quite responsible and wants to improve the world view and game settings as much as possible, but the mentality of the protagonist is a bit unbearable. He is glass-hearted, childish, and resentful. This is also a normal reaction of ordinary people, and it is also the symptom that is most likely to die. To be honest, if I were a high-dimensional gamer, I might be more aggressive than Die or something else, because it is a waste of my time. If you want me to bet, then you have to let me see what potential you have for me to invest in you. Your mentality, quality, and skills are all at the level of ordinary people...

I feel like I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is too cowardly, and he doesn't feel angry at all when someone plots against him. In other worlds, we should kill decisively. Hesitating is really useless

I really can't stand seeing 53. Reading the synopsis, I thought this was a story about infinite flow enhancement, but the protagonist grew up too slowly. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 54, the protagonist learned to hug the thighs and have rough fighting qualities. There was no so-called baptismal growth. What was even more confusing was that the angel appeared without thinking about fighting or communicating, and actually chose to go to the new world. What a mess. There are also relevant departments of magic. Even if you claim to be studying superpowers or the like, studying the law of cause and effect is as absurd as trying to solve advanced math problems for a baby who can't walk yet. . . .

Why go to school if there is a serious conflict between going to school and playing games? Is it difficult to get gold and gems from chess pieces? Going to school is not about eating, is it really necessary? ? ? ?

If you read it, the story is quite good. It has been recommended by the book list boss. It has 150,000 words. It should be read by enough people, and there will be more votes and so on. But this is the situation now. How should I put it? On the one hand, the writing style is slightly lacking. On the other hand, you should revise the beginning. The long dialogues are daunting. Although this is very important and is an important part of promoting the development of the plot, readers really don't have much patience nowadays, especially the first three chapters. They try their best to attract people, and there is no limit. It was too late for He Wuza, let alone the troublesome things that appeared... The character... A long section was written about his changes in mood, the parents making trouble at school, and then running back to find the thing... Writing about the growth of the protagonist is something that many great masters would not dare to touch, and it is still at the beginning... My personal opinion is for reference only. There is actually no need to go back and make changes now. If you want to write, just write the follow-up. The author of this post can delete it if he sees it, otherwise it will be a sin if it affects your grades. I wish you better and better as you write more!

The first three chapters are really depressing to read... It's also brave to write like this...

After reading Chapter 17, I felt that it was well written and the subject matter was eye-catching. There is a lot of room for development. The goodness of the protagonist and the evil of the world interweave an unimaginable future. I hope that the protagonist will not be a virgin, but someone who can overthrow this game or change the world. I hope that the author will not be as stupid as Internet articles, but can create his own world and create a different future. 2018.6.4 By Zui Chentian (I am a student, so I laugh when I see it)