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This article has no male protagonist, no male protagonist, no male protagonist. No CP~ No love. The heroine doesn't have that muscle.

The first few dozen chapters are a bit toxic... It's super boring to watch, and there's no plot advancement. It's not satisfying, and it's even less fun... Except for the heroine being awesome in the first four chapters, the content from chapter 40 to 50 gives me the feeling that she has nothing to do. In the novel, the heroine herself is bored, and in the novel It also felt very boring to me, and I didn't know what I was writing about a lot of things... The content was very confusing. One second I was writing tasks, and the next section started talking about the background of the game... It's rare to make a copy... As a result, the question-and-answer section gave people the illusion of reading a popular science book...

The whole article is about the heroine playing games to get revenge. Most of the games are played, and it is also very detailed and verbose. Anyway, I think this novel is very suitable for cultivating sleep. The heroine was very powerful when she first appeared, but she was quite weak after time travel and her personality changed. . .

I received two more rewards today. I was no longer looking forward to this subscription, so I just wrote as I pleased, out of self-satisfaction. Thank you everyone for your encouragement. I didn't expect that so many friends would recognize my efforts. By the way, there were no recommendation votes before it was put on the shelves, but now there are recommendation votes every day... I am flattered. Finally, thank you to those who give me recommendation votes and frequent messages every day cdc19 and all my friends in the fan rankings 🤭 I will continue to write, thank you again for your support.

To be honest, as a girl who is good at playing games, I always feel a sense of embarrassment when reading this kind of e-sports article...

After reading dozens of chapters, I would like to talk about my impressions. The background of this book should be imitation of Sword Three. I don't know if that is correct, but it feels like it. What I want to say is that some of the content in this article spans a bit, and some content has almost no connection. It transitions all of a sudden, such as levels, and the experience of the protagonist is not very well connected. There is a feeling that the author is eager to get rid of being weak and can't wait to reach level 100 immediately. Another problem is that the author starts by narrating the plot of the game, cutting it off from the beginning to the end. It is very confusing to read, and he uses a lot of words to write the plot. However, this is a Chinese version, and it is the kind of story that goes directly into the plot without the beginning. It is like watching a TV series starting from more than 10 episodes and having no idea what it is about. Overall, the article is quite good, interesting and attractive. This is why I wrote these words after reading so many chapters. I hope the author can strengthen and control the logic and content transition, and it will be better!

I feel like there is no water in the green river, I like it very much

Author, I really want to have a heart-to-heart talk with you. I always feel that the heroine is not your biological child. It's not like I haven't read abuse literature before, but this is the first time I have seen this unique method of abuse. What is the purpose of the heroine living in such a miserable state? If it were me, I would drag the world with me. Moreover, this villain who traveled through time together has unusually deep poisonous spots. A divine farmer like me felt like my eyes were bleeding. I haven't seen this level of nausea for a long time. The last time I saw a supporting character with this level of disgust was when I was addicted to Mary Sues several years ago. When I first read it, I was still wondering why the reviews all said it was well-written and beautiful, but also said other things about it. Now I feel that if it is just a simple daily game, then the writing is really good. There is nothing to say, just two words perfect. But apart from the daily plot of the game, the plot is really poisonous. The level of bloodiness is really different. I can't go on anymore. I feel poisonous when I see the pregnancy part. When I saw the account was deleted, I really didn't dare to try anymore. I also looked at the chapter names at the end and felt that I had to say goodbye. Moreover, I am so disgusted by this villainous male protagonist that I am bleeding. I think I should wait for you, the author, to come back and read the ending to soothe my soul.

It's rare that there is a book that I can continue to read. The author, I have automatically subscribed to it. Just figure it out.

There are still 42 chapters left in the manuscript... I will work hard! 😆