The Zheng Kings' Realm

When I first read the first ten chapters, the writing was very good, and the language and character descriptions were very good. I was surprised why it wasn't popular. Only after reading more than ten chapters did I realize why the protagonist was made to make some mistakes knowingly? It makes reading feel uncomfortable. Isn't this forcing readers away? If the author is not strong enough in writing, there is nothing he can do about it, but it would be terrible to deliberately write some plot points to embarrass the protagonist and make the plot twists and turns. The end result is that everyone is unhappy, votes with their feet, and reads other books. When writing a book, you must be careful. Don't deliberately write mistakes and difficulties so that the protagonist makes them himself. Everyone has no problem with the hell difficulty opening, but they are particularly disgusted by the protagonist who makes stupid mistakes. Look at the protagonist of "Qin Li". After reading it, I only found one similar problem, that is, once the protagonist accidentally revealed his hostility towards Zhao Gao, he was discovered, and the number of enemies increased, which still made everyone unhappy. The more well-written a book is, the fewer plots the protagonist makes on his own. Your book contains two chapters in less than twenty chapters. Once, the ancestral temple made a mistake, and then he gave advice to remedy it, and then was mistaken for rhetoric. How unhappy!

Damn it, I watched Jin Ba Chun Qiu, and I have to say that the author's previous writing was rubbish. The protagonist's ability to commit suicide is too strong👍. The author needs to know one thing: No one likes to watch a mentally retarded protagonist. It's weird if his grades are good. Jin Ba Chun Qiu must not write the protagonist as mentally retarded later on.

The author always shows off his poor literary skills, which is embarrassing

It's really nonsense, and the narrative ability is surprisingly poor. All kinds of self-righteousness. It's really weird, even more embarrassing than Xiaobai's article

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"The Wandering Earth" has been hot enough recently, so let's turn our attention to our nearest neighbor India. "Seven Days of Crisis/Tik Tik Tik", known as India's first space science fiction, tells the story of an Indian stealing a Chinese nuclear bomb to save India. A meteorite will fall into the densely populated Bay of Bengal in six days, and the entire India will be submerged by a tsunami and wipe out the country. The only way is to blow it up with a 200,000-ton nuclear bomb, but the largest nuclear bomb in the world is only 20,000-ton. But! The important thing is this. The Indians discovered that an infrastructure madman built a 200,000-ton nuclear bomb and secretly hid it on the space station. So the Indians flew into space on an American space shuttle and went to China's space station to steal nuclear bombs to save the crisis!

The protagonist has been taken for granted several times. When it comes to life-threatening money-making plans, he still takes it for granted. The way to make money is figured out by sitting indoors for a day. Then I didn't investigate the market and understand the market demand. I took it for granted that high-quality wine would be popular and that I could make a lot of money and make quick money. You must know that it takes a period of time for a new product to be launched and accepted, and this period of time is related to the market demand and the product's fit. So this method of making money is a failure. Although I don't know whether high-alcohol wine will be popular in the Spring and Autumn Period, but I don't have the right to say it without investigation. At least you should make some preparations before coming up with this method. It can be seen from between the lines that the author does not take it for granted in some historical time travel novels in Qidian, but he has made the same mistakes himself. It will give readers a bad feeling of 1+1>2. The author's writing style is actually quite good, and the entry point of Zheng Guo is also relatively novel. If more careful attention is paid to this book, it is worth looking forward to achieving good results.

Those who came here in July, raise a paw

I haven't read it yet, but I opened the book and saw that the heroine is Wen Jiang. I remembered that it was described in Spring and Autumn I am the King, so I came in and took a look 😁😁😁. I was curious →_→

This is no longer writing history, but science fiction 🤔😠