The Myth Goes Alone

Bai Suzhen is in the realm of immortals. She only needs to repay her karma and immediately rank in the immortal class, enjoying the incense of the world. If she is distracted, she is at least at the level of Jindan Yuanying. It is not the little Taoist who took away her body. What's more, the skinny camel is bigger than the horse. As an old monster with nearly two thousand years of Taoism, Bai Suzhen has never seen any conspiracy and tricks. How could she be so cowardly and taken away by a little Taoist priest? She didn't have the skills to keep things under control, and she wouldn't have been practicing for so many years. She would have been exterminated by someone to defend the Tao, or eaten by some big demon to increase her Taoism!

Even though the name has been changed, it's still not easy to find books in the Fairy Gourd series. Please don't enter the palace. Do you have any recommendations for books in the Fairy Gourd series?

I reread the book. There are several things you forgot to change in your article. Let me point them out to you. Chapter 84 The Xuanhuang Tower appears

It's really rubbish. Since you wrote the story of The Legend of White Snake, just expand it on the basis of the original work. If you don't write it, just make up a new story and write it. It's useless to revise this randomly. If you don't have the ability to write it, don't write it. Not everyone is good at writing books

The white lady who was about to become an immortal was taken over by a hot chick? Are you sure you're not kidding?

The title of the book is The Rise of Liaozhai, so I wanted to ask where Liaozhai went and why the more I write about it, the more it looks like a fairy gourd.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and it's so cloudy that I don't know what I'm writing.

The protagonist has no brains, and the danger of death is right in front of him, why don't you run away quickly? Stay in the old house and wait for his second brother to come back and kill him?

Your dispatcher dispatches people from eighth-tier cities to Shanghai! You yourself said that Suzhou Prefecture is much better than Qiantang, but Xu Xuan was sent to Suzhou. How funny!

Instead of revising the article, it is better to rewrite the outline and start a new book. 😆 The more you revise, the worse it gets.

After reading Chapter 14, I was a little confused. The white lady was taken away and died, Wang Daoling was killed, Fa Hai passed away and died, holy shit, how can this be fun.

This book tells how many times the protagonist doubts other people's words, a lot of reasons why he can't believe others, and a lot of reasons why he can trust others. The first time he wrote it, he could see that the protagonist was wary. The second time he wrote it, he was a little bored. The third time he wrote it, there was no need to describe the characters and plots, and the only thing left was that the protagonist kept doubting other people's routines. (It's just that this matter is too weird...; Xiaoqing's words don't seem to be false...)

Can you please stop writing about monsters who give you experience? There are techniques and magic weapons, but if you don't practice them well, you have to run around, and you will run away. Why don't you pay back? You have to mind your own business. If you weren't the protagonist, you would have died so many times.

A good start, the protagonist finally escaped from all the conspiracies and gained the foundation of cultivation. It was just a last resort to send Xu Xian to plot against Zhao Jiu. However, at this time, shouldn't he settle down in Suzhou City first and improve his cultivation level? He hurried to the wild to seek death. . . Some people may say that only in this way can we have adventures. But I want to say, does the protagonist know that he is the protagonist, always survive the disaster when he goes out, and then have adventures one after another? And with his spiritual sense, he didn't realize that there would be danger when going out in Qiantang, but why didn't it happen this time. . . As for the protagonist's various ugly faces and being betrayed in various ways, I can only say that he deserves it~ For readers, it is all kinds of frustration. If the author has the ability and relies on the protagonist to outwit each step, then it is still worth watching. If it is purely based on luck, then it is really good. . . Above~

A time-traveling soul wouldn't be so naive, right? Do you really think of your sect as a school? Come when you want and leave when you want? A disciple who has been trained since childhood and a disciple who is an art caster, who does the sect value more? You say wait until you encounter difficulties before you think of a solution? If you go to ask for help, will they definitely help you? Do you think that for a little money, someone should give you careful guidance on how to condense evil spirits? Tell you where is the Yinsha Earth Meridian that suits you? Is it a school? Can I take a course by paying some tuition? Just ask why? Do you have any contribution to the sect? Do you feel a sense of belonging to the sect? How do you replenish the Yinsha earth veins you consumed? Of course, I don't think you must go to Xuandu to teach. I just read what you wrote. It seems that you have to join a sect after all, and you should start as early as possible. Disciples with an innocent background are always more valued than disciples who are masters. Of course, you can insist on not becoming a master.

After reading this book, I read some reviews. To be honest, I couldn't stand it anymore after I saw the White Snake being snatched away by a scumbag. However, since ancient times, commentaries have revealed talents, so I read the comments. After reading them, I realized that the author filled this hole later and was a clone of the White Snake. That Fa Hai is only at the second level of qi training, so I don't know if the hole has been filled. Let me tell you here, the reason why many people complain is because White Snake is so deeply rooted in the hearts of the people and so classic. In front of this classic, you have to use the unknown original version of Liaozhai to write it, and add some of your own plots to foreshadow it. Although I really want to say that it was originally good, but you underestimated the charm of classics. Classics are classics, just like Tianlong, who has been slapped a lot, still thinks Huang Rihua's version is a classic. You suddenly dug such a poisonous pit. Although it was filled in later, some readers did not agree with it. They just abandoned the book and made complaints after seeing the poisonous pit. Although it was added later, how many people would grit their teeth and continue reading after seeing the poisonous pit? As for some people criticizing the author, there is actually no need. After all, it is not easy for people who write books. One thing to mention, I felt that it was a bit messy and a bit of a mixed bag. But there's nothing to say. I still support it. After all, it's not easy for the author to come up with code words every day. Please send me your votes. You're welcome.

The story is very well written, keep up the good work

It's a good book, but I edited it a few times and now it's so messed up that I can't read it 🤫🤫

The flutter is predictable because the story is more important than the writing. But I want to say that your writing style is indeed very good, better than that of most Qidian authors, the plot logic is also reasonable, your IQ is online, and you are not stupid. These are all advantages and the foundation! Because even if your writing skills are poor, even if your writing is just a novice, as long as the story is good and attractive, people will continue to read it. The key story is not very good, but the beginning is not bad. I just watched the first few dozen pictures, and then skipped reading after I joined some sect. Because your story has directly become an ordinary cultivation novel, no different from others. There really aren't too many books like this in more than ten years! You are not a master, you do not have a regular book reader, and there are no obvious highlights compared with other stories, so it is foreseeable that you will naturally fall behind.

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Damn it😱, it's a scam! 😓😓

Chapter 51, talking about the favor with Mr. Feng. He was rescued from the Dragon King's palace and sent all the way to Jinling City, where he stayed for only a few months. Who owed it to whom. Is there suspicion of the Holy Mother?

Why is there so much missing in the middle? There should be one volume.

Well written, keep up the good work

The changes are messy. After raising them for a month, Xuanhuang Pagoda has disappeared, and the exercises should be done. If the name of the pig's feet was also changed, it would be like another book 🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷

Why does this chapter of this book have nothing to do with the chapter? Looks like I've seen a ghost

Is this written about a Liaozhai fan or a Xianhu fan? There are a lot of comments in the comment area about the setting of Xianhu and so on.

Too cheap? Why am I changing something that I wrote well before?

That's it. **Appendix was mentioned first but it was forced to be recommended. Isn't the starting point that there is no book?

What's your relationship with Feng Xi Po Di? The pig's trotter is called Gu Cheng