I Have a Mountain Stronghold

There are too many flaws. The descent into darkness isn't thorough enough, and the portrayal of goodness is unsettling. It's neither a saintly figure nor a scheming one; it's foolish yet possesses a touch of cleverness, and clever yet prone to making foolish mistakes.

The author of this book must be incredibly lucky! It was adapted into a wildly popular comic, then an anime, and even a live-action drama – what kind of treatment is this? A novel with a terrible ending achieved what so many phenomenal novels couldn't.

Am I the only one who thinks this book is a masterpiece? Actually, if you removed the system, used more precise wording, stopped relying on internet slang, gave it a more sophisticated title, and put more effort into the synopsis, it would definitely be several levels higher.

It's not like a battle for supremacy, it's not like farming, and it's not really a martial arts world. The protagonist either needs to be a strategist or a fighter; I've seen characters whose individual fighting prowess remains mediocre even after being on sale for a while, which is frustrating.

I didn't read the last few dozen chapters. Cheng Dalei's choices... In history, such a person would have his brothers die, his family die, his friends die, and he himself would die without a burial place. No emperor would allow such a person to live.

What trash! Do you think farewells are somehow noble or classy? I can practically see a pathetic, self-pitying buffoon through the screen.

I read the comic and then went to find the novel. The comic's plot included the flooding of the seven armies and a wise man offering guidance. Coupled with the incompetence of the ruling class, I assumed the protagonist would learn from his mistakes and conquer the world.

After reading over 400 chapters, I initially thought it was a decent read, but it turned out to be a poisonous story. The protagonist's character is toxic; he's smart like a fool. In the chapters where he squanders a winning hand, like rescuing Lin Shaoyu, he abandons tens of thousands of brothers and gunpowder weapons to go alone.

This book would still be garbage even in 2018. It would still be garbage even in 2007. Don't even mention its age; this book is garbage. Over 300 discussions confirm it's garbage. I came here from reading comics; garbage.

Thanks to the author for giving me the opportunity to criticize. Years later, this book is truly disgusting. The plot is forcedly idiotic, filled with endless emotional displays—what kind of artsy youth is this? Thankfully, the author hasn't used that pen name again; I'm afraid of disgusting others. I wonder if the author has changed their pen name? This time, I'm personally going to criticize your book; I'm paying to do it. What utter garbage!