Konoha's Nanocore

Subscriptions have been deteriorating recently, and more and more veterans are canceling their subscriptions. There must be something wrong with my writing of the book. As for fan fiction, everyone likes to read cool stories with decisive killings, but I wrote it in a vulgar development style, and went into detail as soon as I wrote it. The plot progressed slowly, but to be honest, I really didn't delay the plot on purpose, and it didn't take long to write the book. It became a habit! I have deleted all the remaining six chapters in the manuscript. The newly written plot is written in a different way and the plot advances faster. If there are still old people who are disappointed with this book, can you leave your own suggestions on where you are disappointed with this book before leaving? Thank you so much! ! !

It's been a long time since I read this book. If it wasn't the author's new book, maybe I wouldn't come here to review it. To be honest, this book is really good, but the author's Marvel fanfic is much better than this one.

I don't really like to read fan fiction lately. I read too many. Except for the initial attraction of Goldfinger, I can roughly understand the plot behind it with my eyes closed. No matter how I look at it, I don't like it. The more I look at it, the more annoying it becomes. It's simply a change of soup without changing the medicine.

Sorry, I think husband and wife should support each other and not treat each other as ancestors. It's disgusting.

There is no extraordinary world, and technology is the primary productive force. But there is an extraordinary world, and extraordinary power is the primary productive force.

Things like nano cores are too wasteful in the Naruto world, and they are still in the hands of illiterate people. If this could become a god in the universes of Marvel, DC, and Super Gods, just think of Superman and Hulk and Magneto, ugh😔

Let me ask you, nanomaterials can cause PM2.5, So will Konoha become a foggy city in the future?

The biggest drawback of this book is age. In Naruto, how do you become a master sculptor in your childhood, meet and trade with nobles, and some of them even have S-level tasks. It doesn't fit the Naruto setting! The world in Naruto is war, and generally people don't particularly like literature and art. The price is too high, and you don't go to a ninja school, so it doesn't feel immersive when you read it. I don't want to miss Naruto anymore.

It's disgusting. It's disgusting that such a big person can actually cultivate himself. Wouldn't you use your nanotechnology to modify yourself into an emotionless person? Feelings will only tie you up, what if someone catches Ino and threatens you?

It's the nanoworms that Aburame takes her roots from.

As long as you read them without thinking, they are all good books.

The protagonist's ability is of no use. The last boss is the Chakra Ancestor. Chakra has no effect at all. The magic chakra is only somewhat useful. It's so difficult for his descendants to defeat the Chakra Ancestor with the chakra inherited from him. It's a bit funny for the protagonist to want to watch Chakra defeat the Chakra Ancestor! It's better to play the technology tree, which is more realistic. There is nothing that one Big Ivan can't kill, not one or two.

Every time you see this kind of introduction, you will be heartbroken.

It's a very good book, and the plot is also very interesting. However, the ending is too sloppy and feels like it's unfinished. I hope the author will pay attention to it in the future.

It's just that I always look embarrassed when I look at it every day. Maybe it's because I'm past puberty. I feel that if it were an anime or manga, it would have a good effect on the daily plot. But if it were a novel, this way of writing would always feel like something shortcomings. An extra little comment. Every time I see someone calling the protagonist Feng, I always think of Nie Feng.

Okay, I was bored and left a suggestion comment, but now I see it's gone! Drunk

An unexpected ending. I thought it was just beginning

This book is too cool, the protagonist has too little sense of presence

When I read Chapter 5, let me tell you something. I just mentioned that you should avoid being discovered by your roots. The introduction also said that you should 🐶. It has been emphasized at the beginning that the protagonist should be ordinary and accumulate strength first. If this is the case, the idea is still better and you can read it. But when you encountered Hinata's incident in Chapter 4, you didn't run first and hid aside in self-paralysis. You are not even a genin. How can you have the confidence to avoid the Byakugan guard who came later? Not to mention spying on Naruto's roots. The most ridiculous thing is that even if you hide, you take the initiative to go out and help the prince when you go out. Don't you want to be taken seriously by your roots? In the context of everyone hating Naruto, you went to make friends with him? Still not conspicuous enough? I was really drunk. In less than 5 chapters, I slapped myself in the face and overturned my core settings. I really didn't dare to read any more. 😰 If Long Aotian's harem is going to happen every second, you can just write it in the introduction. It's not good for you to do this to both sides. Those who like brainless Aotian will leave after reading the introduction. If you want to read a few chapters about developing commoners to persuade you to quit, don't you have a hard time with yourself?

There are female characters at the beginning, which is the writing method that I personally dislike the most.

The ending is really rushed, wouldn't it be nice to make it longer...

I hope the author will continue writing and be very satisfied with this book!

This book is not finished, right? The ending ends too quickly, everything is over in a hurry.

The protagonist's upgrade speed should be slowed down

Give me some advice ① Try to have a label in your mind when setting the character. Don't forcefully modify the character's characteristics because of too much love. For example, Danzo, if you are a human being, he will snatch you and want you, so Danzo doesn't want to lose face? The Hokage wants to accept a disciple or ask the Will of Fire if he thinks too highly of himself. ② There are too many hokage traps. It is recommended that the author consider filling in a complete story first, such as the substitute technique (which is a blind method written as a time and space ninjutsu), such as wood escape (whether it was invented by Hashirama himself or developed by the Senju clan), such as blood boundary (how did the ancestors of the first batch of blood boundary appear, is it innate or acquired), etc. ③ The details of the events. Many events have been written countless times in other novels. Will you consider omitting some parts and developing some imagination and foreshadowing that the author did not fill in, such as how the Uzumaki clan and the Senju clan disappeared? ④Whether some psychological descriptions and character details should be replaced with some words or should not be too detailed, so as not to give readers a special feeling ⑤ I hope the IQ of the supporting characters will be on the line. The decisions of some big shots and adults should not be too childish. For example, I want the kid Sarutobi, I want Danzo or Hokage, etc. What about grocery shopping? That's all for now. Generally speaking, novels that avoid the above points will probably achieve good results. I also wish the author better and better results.

I don't have anything to say, I just want the author to know that there are still people who are silently supporting him.

The book is good😍

In fact, I have always been curious. What the Third Generation did was to prevent Naruto's identity as a Jinchuriki from being revealed. If the villagers call Naruto "Naruto the Demon Fox" every day, wouldn't spies from other villages suspect it?

To decompose everything and use it to replicate itself, you need a lot of it! I'll chew the planet for you to see~ Afraid of electromagnetic range attacks. Wave shock weapons, gravity weapons. But as long as one nanobug is not eliminated, it will reappear.

The author can learn more about the scientific knowledge of nanomachines! In fact, the protagonist is not a scientist, so the application development of nanometers will be very slow! Without a certain accumulation of knowledge, nanobugs can only decompose, copy, and calculate at most! What other book friends said about natural energy absorption, etc., There is no way to do it until the protagonist can't do it himself! After all, creative attributes will not appear in individuals or groups without ideology!