There Is a Hexagram in My Mind

You have a good imagination and it's interesting to watch, come on!

Originally the writing was pretty good, but the more I wrote it, the more crooked it became, or in order to cater to a certain taste, I would always jump out of the way a little bit. Is that okay? Now there is an idiot again, and the face-slapping scene is becoming more and more popular. It is no different from ordinary novels. Let's discuss some tips after reading it. Come on, the author 👍

Talk less about past lives, be less watery, write more concisely, have a bright future, and have babies and stuff, it's too childish. Come on

There is always a kind of rush by a great master

I have a vague feeling that the plot is not extremely complicated, but I don't know why I just can't understand what you wrote. I really can't understand it, and my head is about to explode.

In fact, if the gap is only one or two centimeters, in the eyes of the audience, he has already knelt down. Is there any use in worrying about this?

Maybe I'm too rigid, it's really getting a little bit different from my taste! Forget it, let's keep a few chapters!

I don't know how long it's been since I read fantasy, but this book was unexpectedly relatable. Come on＾0＾~

I haven't read it, but when I looked at the title of the book, it really didn't cross my mind?

The protagonist said that he wanted to be tortured, so he chose an unbeatable opponent to compete with. When he was beaten, he stopped at the last moment and said he would give in. Then the protagonist rushed over with red eyes and said to come again. After being beaten, his nose and face were bruised, and afterwards he said that the other person had done something wrong. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist never said why he wanted to be tortured. He just wanted to be tortured for no reason. It was really not to his liking and he ran away first.

Before time travel, it was a novel written by a master. After time travel, it has become popular and is no different from ordinary novels. Moreover, the protagonist's character and thoughts have also undergone earth-shaking changes. I don't like this character very much.

The protagonist should practice hard and not do too much.

If you say you want to kill someone, then kill someone... Don't you think this is awkward in the modern world of cultivation?

At first glance, it seems like something is stuck in my head →_→

I am also writing The author's writing style better than me But I always feel This first chapter How to say not very good But I read the reviews and they all said this book is good I'll just take another look After all, it is a book on the recommended list Maybe I can learn something secretly PS: Another point is that the writing is still a bit unclear, and the writing feels a bit sloppy. It should be more concise in some paragraphs. Finally, all the trolls are welcome to spray Especially the kind that doesn't convince you to write it My answer to you is "I'm just writing, saving the manuscript..."

This is still a novice area, with all kinds of rhetoric piled up, all kinds of artistic conceptions, and unyielding perseverance, making it seem like you are dealing with a lifelong enemy, a life and death enemy. I find it a bit inexplicable. There is also the protagonist's mentality and so on. It is understandable to write about the transformation process slowly, but don't go too far. You have already written so much and you are still writing about mentality and other things. It will get boring.

Goldfinger is good, but the plot is hard to tell.

Discover Hua Dian, there is no legend of Shennong in the parallel world?

The more I watch it, the more I look like the eunuch protagonists in Japanese comics. Either you should be devoid of desire, or you can just push it away. Is it interesting to have an affair with a group of girls? Every time I see this kind of protagonist, I get annoyed. I hope the protagonist will not develop into this kind of eunuch protagonist in the future←_←

In fact, what I like most is the beginning part. From the eloquent description, the small bridge is like flowing water, very comfortable! After time travel, maybe I wrote a little too hastily, or in order to cater to a certain taste, I always try to escape from time to time, okay? !

This is a rare good book. After reading more than 60 chapters, there are very few loopholes and very few poisonous points. Is the author really a newcomer? This book should be on the same level as my favorite Lord of Mysteries. Why are the recommendation votes so different?