Indescribable Game Live

Mr. Ke handed out candy and asked if you dare to eat it.

It's still suitable to make a video about running a group. Not many readers will be able to understand the novel. Moreover, the video is more interesting than the novel. The Cthulhu Mythos is suitable for magical modification, but not suitable for direct writing. 11 Votes

This data is at least better than mine. . .

Could it be that the author has been tricked by Mr. Ke? Does he need to be rescued?

I feel like the author likes to write about erotic characters with multiple identities. Is it my imagination?

Not bad. Although the popularity is a little low, I will persist in writing each book until it is finished. 🙏🙏🙏I admire it.

The plot is too complex (too many hidden and reversal plots), the timeline is too confusing, the protagonist has too little sense of existence, lacks excitement, and the worldview is too dark.

This is still a very good book,

If you are not a master, I do not recommend writing such a confusing beginning. It is limited to online articles. I have no strength to click on the fourth chapter.

The book club has been established! ****** Is 280858157 The author comes **** quickly.

Book Club 2 8 0 8 5 0 1 5 7 I don't know why the last post was deleted 😭

Sure enough, the best way for the secret group to fight against psychology is to make KP psychology fail~! [Come and share if you succeed in doing something]

I did the math and found that I was harmonized 4 times in total. ******I won't fight. As long as I fight, I will be harmonized. Just search for the book title and group a name.

Come on, author! Although your books are all over the place, I like this style very much. By the way, can you kill less lolita characters?

I wish the author better and better results, and I offer you a monthly ticket. This is my first time. Author, you have to be responsible 😏😏😏

He even ran away from Cassandra. I hope you can survive until the end.

Author, can't you write down the value of the dice, such as (100/1) big failure or something like that?

Author, how about you divide it into two 3,000-word chapters? It looks so awkward now.

Why don't I create a book club group? If you don't respond tomorrow, you'll be agreeing.

It feels like the writing is a bit hardcore, but a bit bland. There is neither a sense of horror that makes people think deeply, nor does it find another way to make people laugh from time to time. Although the name is a live game, it cannot really be written like a record. It is best to fix the people who will run the team so that the names are easy to remember. Otherwise, if there are too many people in the script, you will not be able to remember the names. Just change one or two people from time to time. Now I feel like I can't remember a single character. Now most of them are running teams with acquaintances. It's not good that the investigators always don't know each other. It is recommended to use kp as the main perspective, because there is no novel with kp as the main perspective. Also, the first tour took a bit long, so I suggest you finish the second tour quickly and introduce more about the background of the world. I really recommend not to be so hardcore in the future. Looks very bland

The protagonist of the last book? The split spirit of the ancient immortal? Su Xia Li's magician? But looking at the latest chapter, Aaliya seems to be the name of a god? Not just an ordinary god? Little Derby was also forced to play her? What is the relationship between the infinite beauty of this book and the infinite beauty of the previous book? Ahhhhhh, author, can you write a single chapter to explain the relationship between the characters? I don't even know who is who now, even if there is only an introduction to the characters.

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Try not to write the plot in the form of narration. It feels a bit dry. You can use the form of psychological activities to describe it. Too much third person will greatly affect the reading experience. Although kp needs to be fair and rigorous, it can also be more lively. The current kp is a bit like a highly intelligent artificial intelligence, and there is no sense that the protagonist is even the "mastermind behind the scenes".