Planes of Hunting All Realms

It was good in the early stages, but not so good later on. The protagonist became a little indecisive and the plot looked awkward.

I'd like to ask if the author has changed. I didn't feel it was so awkward when I watched Ring of the Void before. It's too different.

IQ zero in previous chapters

It's a mess. I don't know what the author wants to write about. It includes dreams, games, time travel, and reality. The author is too exaggerated. Can you handle so many themes? It's really messy, and the twists and turns are very abrupt. The plot jumps here and there, which made me jump around. As soon as I became interested in the plot, I was thrown into another line by a weird twist, and everyone who watched it was confused!

There are too many realistic writings. Do you really want to play mother-daughter romance? I jumped to read it and felt that this book was not as good as the previous one.

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The author should show the chrysanthemum quickly, because of your update speed. . .

What the hell, any woman in the back can do

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It's so jumpy. I haven't finished any of the previous plots. Why is it that I suddenly reach the plot of Once Upon a Time? The story doesn't connect

I think it's best not to write books by other authors. What does the author think

##The latest news is that after a certain reader got acquainted with the author in the group, he pretended to travel to the author's hometown. The author went to receive him. During dinner in the evening, the reader got the author drunk and gave him an anus... When the police asked the reason, the reader said that it was because the author had too few updates...

The protagonist's God's plan requires more genes, so mutants can breed more. Different gene combinations can breed and produce more mutants. Don't you have two mutant children? Their abilities are not the same. It is best for the protagonist to unify the world and improve the status of mutants, so that more people can combine with mutants instead of relying entirely on human production.

The ancient saint-level strength was frightened and frightened by the cry of Dumbledore's phoenix in the Harry Potter world... This is written without thinking at all. Let alone a drop of ancestral phoenix essence and blood, how can the ancestral phoenix itself have the power to frighten a saint-level existence.

The results are really poor, the author should work hard. I even invested the money I spent on instant noodles.

Xia Tian, ​​there are so many poisonous points in your book, especially about women, why don't you just accept Shan Rou and Zhao Zhi? The same goes for Tang Zichen and Wang Chao. To be honest, although many people reject harems and think harems are heretical, don't forget that the old readers of your last book are all people who can accept harems. Your forced reduction of harems is actually not as good as those novels with a single heroine and no heroine, which will not please both sides...

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I wish the author and all book friends good health.

Author, you have refreshed my lower limit of understanding of gods. The trident that controls the seven seas in Saint Seiya turns out to be an innate spiritual treasure. Does that mean that the ancient saints cannot even defeat the spaceships that can explode stars in the future?

As soon as we arrived in the main world, there were all kinds of NPC plots, including licking a few disgusting directors and giving them antiques and healing potions as if they were friends with each other, another fat man who met and sold antiques and became brothers and went to Thailand to play gangsters, a staff maker went to rob a tomb, and so on. Is the protagonist short of money? It's really funny that she doesn't lack anything and is always looking for something to do, but also says that she is too busy with things. Anyway, the plot of the main world shouldn't have too many poisonous points, it's just like the author's previous book. Delete it if you want. Authors who are afraid of other people's comments are no different from a useless Taijian.

The protagonist of this book has a terrible character and still stands on the moral high ground and criticizes others all day long

I don't know how to manage it, my strength is not very coordinated, sometimes strong and sometimes weak. Even the Desert Eagle can't beat Obai's skills. He can basically beat most masters of the gold system. Later, he practiced various martial arts, but he still can't beat Alexander... Obai can beat the five unique skills, but the protagonist is stronger than Obai but can't.

I wish the author a new beginning in 2020 and may he write better and better

Can anyone recommend some harem books? Preferably ones with a lot of serialized words. The starting point was all about single heroines and licking dogs.

Is this really the author of Void Ring? Why is the level so different? It was fine at the beginning, but then the level plummeted. It was too watery. I took a look at it for free and it was poisonousdead

The first book I read was a pirated version. It is a classic version of Planar Flow that I like. I think this book must be supported regardless of whether it is good or not. If you read it, the author will give it a thumbs up!

There has never been a legacy of martial arts in our country's mythological system. The author's inclusion of martial arts in Journey to the West is pure nonsense.

What kind of protagonist does the author want to create? I found him from Baiwei Shengsheng, but I endured various discomforts and read more than ten chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. Friends who have read it, can you tell me how you can't stand it. For me, the protagonist can be cheap or bad. It doesn't matter as long as the plot is good and the character is interesting. What is the character of this protagonist? Are you mean and stupid? Many operations are simply insulting to people's intelligence, and the plot is extremely awkward. . .

I have been trying to develop abilities for a long time, but I am still like an ant dog. I have developed so many powerful abilities but I am still beaten to death by one of the moves of a movie ancient. What are you doing with your useless magic that is so powerful that you have been jumping up and down for so many years? Isn't it enough to just keep learning and practicing Kama Taj's magic? I've already been on the same level as Gu Yi. How can I still be so rubbish after doing it for a long time? How do you have the nerve to write about those abilities? Is it disgusting? If you never have a strong mentality and have no ability to control, you are just a chess piece. Having so many abilities is useless. If you have no idea about abilities, you just know how to write them. You only know how to elevate the movie character and always step on yourself. What you write is a waste. You still have a golden body with only defense and no strength. What is a golden body? How will you compare with those who practice the Eight-nine Mysterious Gong and the Nine-turn Mysterious Gong in the future? Did you know that practicing these exercises will not only increase your defense but also increase your strength? Arhat's golden body only has defense without the blessing of Buddha's light?