
Portable Two-Dimensional System
随身二次元系统
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 407k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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54Fans
201Chapters
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I was persuaded to quit after reading the first chapter. The protagonist's parents just died, so the protagonist is so miserable? Where are his parents' disciples? Where is his parents' master? What about his parents' faction? A person who can become the Young Sect Leader will not have a faction to support him? Isn't this fake? The cohesion of the sect is so poor. Is this probably not a demon sect? Is the villain's intelligence that bad? Do you do it just after your parents died? This must belong to the Demon Sect, and the upright approach is done slowly. If the protagonist can become the young sect master, then his talent will not be bad. Why should he give up on a genius just after his parents died? I think the smaller the sect is, the more it cherishes its talented disciples. It's God's will that this sect won't be destroyed if it does this. . . .
After reading the first ten chapters, I would like to ask if this is the Naruto system or the two-dimensional system? It felt like it was all Hokage's stuff, and I didn't see anything else.
I'm about to be persuaded to quit, this Hokage is never finished. . . . There are so many of them, and they are still on the Hokage list. Even if a new skill list is opened in the future, they will be persuaded to quit by this Hokage. . How to persist
Come on update!
Write well, don't get lost, don't give up, don't be discouraged, it will be fine, come on!
Come on, this road is destined to be persevered!
Don't give up because of anything, persevere, work hard to update, write a good book, and everything will be fine!
Good-looking, not poisonous, especially the domineering attitude of a male pig's trotters who dares to fight everyone in the world for his sister.
Good-looking, not poisonous, especially the domineering attitude of a male pig's trotters who dares to fight everyone in the world for his sister, he is full of masculinity!
What does a monthly pass look like? My works are so miserable that I don't even have a monthly pass 😭
Um, it feels weird to use Naruto skills in the fantasy system.
I read Chapter 30. I was originally persuaded to quit at Chapter 22, but then I wanted to see if there was any plot that would attract me later. It's a pity/I can't stand it anymore. Chapter 22 feels like it's logic. It's okay if the male protagonist doesn't kill the girl and doesn't fall in love with the girl. The sister actually asked the male protagonist to have sex with the girl, and then gave the male protagonist a kiss after she failed. Damn it, sister, you were originally being hunted with no way to heaven and no way to earth. It looks like a threesome in the wild. Maybe the author will delete my comment after reading it, but I still want to say it. Maybe you think it's wrong of me to criticize your book after I only read 30 chapters. However, your divination can only make me unable to read it until I read 30 chapters.
Alas, I am still a eunuch. How can you succeed if you don't persist?
I feel that this book is very monotonous when I read it recently. Except for the Mo family, all the NPCs are very angry and have no character at all. The protagonist only escapes from being coveted for magic and then is coveted again. I feel that the development of the story is too slow and boring. The author needs to think about it. The supporting characters pop up one after another, but none of them are well-characterized. Once the protagonist comes out, he kills people and seizes treasures, and then encounters the next batch of mentally retarded people who are destined to die. The creativity of this book will not be so good after seeing too many of this kind of supporting characters (。・ω・。)ノ♡
Well written, keep up the good work! Also, let me ask if Xiao Botu is as bloodthirsty as that sister Ai Li? In the future, he should be like Aili, and he will be able to lose air every second of the day, right?
The road is still long, take your time
After reading and updating, why do I have the urge to read this book again? Author, please update quickly, I can't help it anymore!
Let me be resurrected with full health and mana.
Can't you make more updates? It's so frustrating to wait😭😭😭😭
Three updates a day. Thank you for your hard work, author. Come on.
The power system is a bit unclear. Those who are born with nature and nurture are not considered cultivators, and there are cultivators behind them. In fact, writing this kind of power system is easy to collapse, and a system with emotions (and it is so cool) okay, it doesn't matter, come on
Now that I see it, I think, overall, I have the desire to continue watching it. I guarantee that if I don't sign with tj, I will continue to follow it.
Tower tower tower, "Rebirth: Proving the Way by Killing" has been put into storage
Tower tower tower, "Rebirth: Proving the Way by Killing" has been put into storage
I don't know why a reader's book review was deleted. Now I'm posting a reply to the reader's question. This book is not just about the two-dimensional world of Naruto, it's about all the anime worlds I've seen. Of course, the material of the anime is determined by the combat effectiveness.