Rebirth with a Moaning Monster

I'm very curious →_→What is the author's female channel's work?

I always thought the author was a male

Let's create a group, I'll give you all the recommendation votes

The development is too slow. The seven-year-old is always too cute and too watery.

I think this book hit the market because of the Young and Dangerous part. Nowadays, reading novels is just for fun. No matter what angle you write this story from, it will arouse the readers' own emotions. This is the time when I left, thinking that I would come back again, but I didn't expect that I would die 🤫

It's a pity. I also said that I should raise it a little longer before looking at it, but I didn't expect that it would die after raising it. But I see that Shao Chong has worked so hard, so the recommendation votes for more than three months are not in vain. Come on!

I, the royal sister control, am going to beat you loli control to death today!

30 Million words?

Came here after reading the recommendation from the Dog Emperor. I've read half of it, let me know what you think. I like to read the author's delicate descriptions of life, so I followed it, but I really couldn't accept the big twist of turning into an infinite flow, so I skipped this kind of plot. There are too many masters of this type, and I have read too many good works on martial arts, fairy tales, and wireless streaming. I still hope to write less about life and more about life. It would be nice to have a little practice and some superpowers, but it would be boring to completely tilt it. My personal opinion, don't blame me.

What were the first two books written by a male channel for the first time? ? .

Just think of it as the dirty sister borrowing her brother's account to write a novel. So, what about Zou Chong's new book? When will it open?

First of all, let me explain that I have finished reading the book, and now I will briefly talk about the reading experience of the book. I saw that I couldn't follow Chapter 83. The daily plot after rebirth was very comfortable to watch, and the turning point in the spiritual energy was a bit abrupt. Now that the protagonist has begun to practice, his level has dropped rapidly. The author used to write about cities. When he first came into contact with Xianxia, the protagonist's training was not very good. It is similar to another book I am following now. The background is also excellent, and the description of the supporting characters is excellent. As soon as the protagonist begins to practice, something goes wrong. That book (Chat Group of Villains in All Worlds) chooses The main purpose is to use strengths and avoid weaknesses. He uses the Spring and Autumn style of writing to briefly describe the main character's training and then skips it. I hope the author can also pay a little attention to the main character's training. As I saw in Chapter 80 or so, because of the powerful skills, there is no ripple when the demonic energy enters the body. , So spiritual energy pours in desperately. This is a routine in some early Internet articles. Personally, after reading it too much, I feel that this is very cliché and unreasonable. Demonic energy is originally aura absorbed and transformed by demons, but now entering aura will produce a catfish effect. . . I can't tell you the specific problem, but I feel it's inconsistent. This book should have been on the shelves around 120 chapters. I personally couldn't stand it until chapter 83. I don't know if it's because of the sluggish first order of the book. The description is a bit fragmented. Let's take a look and talk about it. If you are interested, you can discuss it below.

The introduction to the new book shows that it is a female author, which makes people subconsciously suspicious.

A eunuch? ! ? The style of this book is actually quite good. Please continue with the next book.

What should I say, life is not a novel, the author needs money to live. There is so much to consider. If you can't make money writing a novel, then you just have to give it up. No matter how interesting he is, he must give up. This cannot be changed by reality. I hope the author will become a god soon and come back to fill in the holes.

Life is important, I will still support the next book

The beginning of martial arts is continuing. The entire public account in WeChat is very interesting. It's very interesting to kill me, the emperor of the Qing Dynasty. WeChat will not ban you because of this, right?

Unfortunately, I keep laughing at your last sentence before 404. I want to turn into a young and beautiful girl and be chased by you!

Author, let me give you a suggestion, which may not necessarily be correct. I feel like there's something wrong with it. Your book seems to have unlimited flow, right? Infinite Streaming is supposed to be "quick time travel". Golden Finger appeared early, but it doesn't seem to be fast time travel. When I read the book, I found that it started very late. If you correct it and resubmit it, you might be able to improve your grades.

I finished reading Wuxia at the beginning and put it on my bookshelf as a finished book. Suddenly I found out that the author has published a new book. Is this really a complete book with such a small number of words? Isn't it because of the appendix?

I understand, but I also feel that this book stall is a bit too big. I feel that the supporting characters in it seem to have no sense of existence. I always feel that the character who appears in the next second may not be seen at all within 30 chapters. Each chapter is a new character, a new character and a new story. The continuous relationship is really not very good.

If you say this, author, we have nothing to say. After all, everyone is the same now. Many good books are about eunuchs for this reason. It is very depressing to see another eunuch. Today's books are rarely popular if they are not extreme. This can only mean that society as a whole is under great pressure and everyone is very irritable. … If possible, I hope the author will send an outline, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to get stuck.

To be honest, I was stunned for a moment when I saw the pictures of the alien world. I think the realistic plot is still better.

Well, let me give you some opinions. If the author feels it is inappropriate, you can delete it. 1. The effect of gold finger is not obvious. It feels more like a mascot to me. I read the chapter introducing its functions three times before I understood what its functions were, and I almost missed it. 2. The upgrade system is not obvious. Urban novels also need to upgrade their systems. The setting of this golden finger is too complicated. Nowadays, people prefer simple and crude genres, and readers are too lazy to remember so much. 3. Driving too often. In my opinion, this is a problem, just like having sex, it's too frequent and I can't stand it. On the contrary, if I come here occasionally, I will feel very naked. 4. The progress of the plot cannot be said to be slow, but a lot of ink is spent on some non-main plots. Of course, these are just my own opinions, and it's normal for others to disagree. This book can still be read.

When Lin's mother returned home, she saw a scene that made her want to divorce Father Lin: In the dim room, Father Lin was sitting at the dining table with his legs crossed, holding steaming peanuts with chopsticks in his hand, and eating deliciously with a wine glass in his hand. Just at this time, the protagonist came out from the corner carrying a plate of fried chicken with edamame. He was startled when he saw his mother who was still in a daze at the door. . . . . Forget it, I won't write anymore. Anyone who can write a fucking novel is a monster. The plot is in my mind, but I just can't describe it, and I don't know what the situation is.

Well, my personal understanding is that everyone can take a look. If you can make up for it, don't criticize me if you are wrong. Well, let me first talk about the use of the Yingying monster. It is written in the book that he is the first warrior, which means that the Yingying monster is not the only one. But what is his function? It is not mentioned in the book, but my impression is that the return of spiritual energy and the different world should be caused by its arrival, including BUGs such as Journey to the West. The current function is that there are twelve categories, and you can obtain things by lottery. But it should be controllable and not random. Well, the monster that the protagonist saw when he traveled through time should not be at full level. But why did it drop the level? I personally think that time travel requires energy, and the side effects of time travel are the return of spiritual energy and the invasion of other worlds. Then the levels and functions of the monsters are not fully introduced, and the strength is not explained. It is recommended to use mine 🤓 for physical awakeners and special awakeners (such as space, time and space, metal, wood, water, fire, and earth). Now they say that the human powers or abilities of the awakened people are not explained in detail. If you are practicing martial arts or cultivation, you should still use Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Transformation Jin/Qi Training, and Foundation Building. Golden elixir, etc. Others roughly explain the Weiwei protagonist, the protagonist's parents are ordinary people, the protagonist's younger siblings are unknown, the company commander, the company commander's subordinates and some awakened people

After reading the author's last words, does this mean that he admitted that the author's original claim to be Shaochong's sister was a lie? Anyone who thought it was true at first leave a comment below and I'll see how many people thought it was from a female author.

Come on, I have been a bookworm for ten years. According to the current quality, it will be popular. Also, can there be more authors? Well, at worst, the Lun family will give you a squeeze on your shoulders, okay? Please, please update more😊

For those of you who are doing this, I want to be the author

I just saw it yesterday, let's start voting now