I Sell Dungeons in Another World
我在异界卖副本
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 230k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 8y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Don't rely on a repetitive persona; creativity is the most important thing.
Recently, I've seen many readers criticizing the character design of this novel. The system-driven, high-tech internet cafe setting was great enough, right? A female customer was assassinated by her own kind outside the shop, and the protagonist even rushed to her rescue. But what happened to the novel? It was ruined by the repetitive plot of constantly opening branch shops.
This book has taken so long to write just one side story, and the protagonist is such an idiot; it's a miracle it doesn't flop within two months.
He wants things to go his way, yet he's incredibly cowardly, acting like a scoundrel. He says things that are immoral but is still very concerned about what others will say. If this protagonist didn't have a mindless system and invincible abilities, he would be killed in a minute if thrown into a leveling-up or weakling story.
This book is very well written, excellent. The protagonist simply reflects the mindset of a realistic businessman. Many people criticize the protagonist for cheating others and refusing to help those in distress. Do you think refusing to complete the system's required tasks? Preventing others from entering? Does letting others in mean cheating them?
It seems the author abandoned the story. I've read over ten chapters, and while the novel's concept is actually quite interesting, the protagonist is rather unlikable! Many small authors on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) constantly claim their protagonists aren't saintly—but look at the most popular protagonists on Qidian; how many are truly scoundrels?
Full of negative energy, makes you want to kill the protagonist.
The author's portrayal of the negative protagonist is very successful; you almost want to kill him. Generally, negative energy isn't a problem, like Gu Zhenren, but the protagonist in this book has a rich inner world and doesn't just create negativity for the sake of negativity.
This book will surely be abandoned within two months.
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The biggest problem with this book is the protagonist's character! His values are warped. Even when writing in a dark style, he needs to have charisma, someone cool and charismatic, not someone who gets ahead through a system and acts like a smug, obnoxious villain. The author should really look into similar novels.
The protagonist has a twisted and perverted personality. The author created a protagonist whose behavior is illogical and whose actions are completely meaningless, making him disgusting.