I Sell Dungeons in Another World

Recently, I have seen many readers criticize the character design of this novel. The character design of the systematic black technology Internet cafe is good enough. When a female customer is assassinated by her own race outside the store, the protagonist rushes to save her as a hero. What is the result of the novel? It was ruined by the repeated plot of opening branches. Gourmets in other worlds were ruined by the large number of masters. From the beginning, there were only a few seventh-level masters in a country, and later the eighth-level masters were only worthy of being slaves. There are so many novels from Qidian, why is there still a constant book shortage? It just lacks creativity. No matter how good the character design is, it is of no use if it is not creative.

It took so long to write a copy, and the protagonist is a SB. If this book doesn't hit the streets in two months, there will be ghosts.

While he wants to be happy, he is also very cowardly. He is like a gangster who cares about other people's discussions even if he talks about disrespecting human ethics. If the system had not been sane and there was invincibility in the store, he would have been beaten to death in minutes if he was thrown into the upgrade stream or the useless stream. Moreover, the author generally adjusted the IQ of the supporting characters to be higher and the IQ of the protagonist to be lower. It seems that everyone can calculate the protagonist. The standard was Long Aotian.

This book is well written, very good. The protagonist has a realistic businessman mentality. Many people criticize the protagonist for cheating people and refusing to save them. Do you want to not do the tasks required by the system? Don't let people in? Is it a scam to let people in? But if you stop the dungeon to save people, the protagonist will not be able to complete the task and will die. If you were to change your position and were the protagonist, would you choose to stop the dungeon and then die because you could not complete the task? I just sprayed it without even looking at the system settings carefully. I pretended to be a saint for something I couldn't do. I sympathize with the author for this good book being bombarded by a bunch of false saints. A group of hypocritical people like to kidnap morals.

It seems that the author is a eunuch. After reading more than a dozen chapters, the concept of the novel is actually very interesting, but the protagonist is not very likable! ! Nowadays, many small authors from Qidian always have protagonists who are not virgins~~ However, look at how many of the popular protagonists at Qidian are bastards? ? Positive protagonists are very marketable! But being a good person does not mean being a fool! Being smart doesn't mean you must be afraid of death! Looking at the protagonist of this book, the author points out that he has a cold nature and a very unpleasant character. Then he would make a fuss, be startled, and get angry at random words, giving people the impression that the protagonist is sick! Not a very likable character. There are too many dead people, and the game dungeon is too rigid. Even medicines have to be sold by the protagonist. How interesting it is. It is also interesting to see people from other worlds teaming up to open up wasteland in front of the store from a different perspective. Many novels do not necessarily have to have a protagonist.

The negative protagonist created by the author is very successful. I want to kill the protagonist when I see it. Generally speaking, negative energy is not a problem, as is the case with Master Gu. However, the protagonist created is very rich inside and will not be negative for the sake of negative energy. The protagonist of this book does not have any merit or humanity. He is negative for the sake of negative energy. According to the country's Internet policy, it is estimated that it will be banned and blocked in a short time.

Within two months, this book will be published.

This building is for comment correction and collection of copies.

The big problem with this book is the character of the protagonist! If the three views are not correct, even if you write in a dark style, you must have a charming personality that makes people feel cool and handsome, rather than relying on the system to succeed like a villain and needing to be slapped in the face. It is best for the author to learn from novels of the same type.

The protagonist's character is twisted and perverted. The author created a protagonist whose actions are illogical and completely meaningless, which is disgusting.