Prisoner of the Star Prison

It's written quite well, a big improvement over the last one! However, the grades are terrible… 🤫🤫🤫

Is he going to die if he doesn't act like a sweet, clingy guy? It's so annoying. He'll throw himself at any woman he sees.

Would it kill you to try a different approach? I'd be poisoned to death right from the start.

Why is this author commenting on such a small amount?

I've seen too many stories where everyone is focused on the protagonist, as if you can't get stronger without fighting and killing. Leveling up is like being a turtle in the early game, only really exploding in the mid-to-late game. This book doesn't have the whole world opposing the protagonist, and leveling up is quite fast.

The writing style is that of an elementary school student. The logic is weak.

I've read 13 chapters, and I suddenly realized that what you've written is probably an accountant's diary, not a novel at all. So, it's all for nothing.