Immortals Patch up the Sky

First of all, the concept of this book is very good. It describes the mortal beings and powers under the immortals from a certain small tribulation realm. The protagonist is well portrayed. The description of the supporting characters takes up a lot of words, but has no specific meaning. As the author said, he is not good at portraying female characters. The author's pen There is basically no difference between women and men except for gender, and the members and captains of the guards are all the same. At the beginning of the description, everyone is pretending to be bad, such as Xiu Wenkai, Chai En, Yang Yi, and some Tian-level teams or even teams, but when problems arise, they are always punished. The power system was chaotic. It was said that the Heaven level defeated the Earth level, and then they formed a team to defeat the Heaven level. As a result, Xiao Jiling and Chen Sen killed them randomly. The performance of the guards is as emotionless as that of immortals. The guards are like dogs. There is basically no climax in the book. The characters basically endure humiliation and bear the burden. Everything seems to be developing smoothly. In addition, I feel that there are still holes that have not been filled. One is Yu Dongrui, and the other is Shen Fengzhai Beigong Ying. Who is the mastermind? Also, isn't that mortal Guan Wei? How did he become Feng Xin in the end? Maybe I didn't read carefully. I hope the author can explain it. In general, the intention is very good, talking about the difference between immortals and mortals, but in the end it comes down to strength. Only with strength can you have the right to speak. The protagonist's ability to survive to the end depends only on strength. He is said to be a mortal but he is not far from an immortal at all. I actually finished reading this book completely, but I read the last few hundred chapters a little too fast. In the end, I admire the author's perseverance.

Although the results are terrible, the author's spirit is worthy of admiration.

It's so awesome. Not even a single fan has thanked me for over two million words.

Come on, see me occasionally and encourage each other

It feels like the author is writing a group portrait novel. Everyone has to explain the historical background. It is inevitable that fewer people will read it. It is too complicated 😅

Where are chapters 38 and 39?

Come on brother, people with this kind of determination will definitely succeed, believe in yourself

What is this book about? I found that the author just kept writing, but there was no follow-up to each other. Just like watching the flowers on horseback, keep a running account.

I haven't read it yet. At least the author is great. I'll vote first.

Immortal Dao Soul, come on, click in to see the details of the book. Wow(ﾟoﾟ;

It's really heartbreaking to see so many books that have not been signed. My book "Ten Spirits Seal the Heavens" is also a long fairy tale, and I can't sign it either. I'm really sad.

I thought that Chen Shang was the protagonist in the first chapter and belonged to the rebirth novel, but it was not the case. The protagonist was in the second chapter. Maybe the first chapter attracted me so much that I couldn't accept the real protagonist. What a pity.

I wonder if there will be a female protagonist~🤔

For someone who also writes novels, others have published more than 30 chapters, alas!

The author's writing is good and he has ideas, but his weaknesses are obvious, and there is a sense of showing off his skills between the lines. Internet articles are not written like this.

The author is so pitiful. He writes so much and doesn't put it on the shelves? ? First time seeing it? It's really not easy to write online, and life is not easy.