The Golden Age Against the Tide

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters, the setting was too ridiculous and casual! Half a month's salary in 1992 was only 20 yuan? When I was in elementary school in 1992, my family would give me two or three yuan a day as pocket money to buy breakfast and soda. How poor was the protagonist, who only had a monthly salary of 20 yuan and a half? The second chapter said that it took ten minutes to run to reach 800 meters. A normal person can walk more than 800 meters in ten minutes. A soldier with good qualities can run three thousand meters in ten minutes! And in your last life in the army, you didn't even dare to say bad words? How do you train soldiers in a platoon when someone who has been a platoon leader doesn't even dare to say bad words? Say hello and good night?

It feels uncomfortable to write like this. Is this kind of writing style popular at Qidian? I would also like to watch it if it had a single female protagonist. Just accept as many as you want, as long as you have feelings and don't accept randomly. I can't stand all kinds of emotional entanglements and I still want to write about a single female protagonist.

Either accept it all, or reject it outright, pretending to owe a lot to this one, and have a deep love for that one. Isn't it disgusting?

I've only read the first 30 chapters, and there's a cousin, a skewers girl, and a courtyard girl. . Where do all these emotional dramas come from?

I looked at the first three or four hundred pictures and they were really rubbish and I don't know what the next ones are like. The relationship between the protagonist and the female characters is too messy, and there are so many female characters that he doesn't know which one he likes. He would provoke each other a little bit, and when the women liked him very much, he would withdraw. I don't even know what the hell this is about? ? ?

It was too confusing and I couldn't understand it, so I asked him to leave

This author's writing is so messy. I have read more than 100 chapters, and I still can't see a main thread. It's often this matter, and I just keep writing about it. Then there were problems with the connection between the upper and lower parts. The viewer is inexplicably unable to follow the author's thoughts. The story is a good one. It's the author's narrative logic that should be revised.

Why? When establishing a company, foreigners must be given 20% of their shares.

The writing is a bit convoluted. I think that if Internet articles are to be marketed, they should be written in a clearer and clearer way. Books that require understanding are difficult to become popular. Internet articles are more suitable for authors, not so suitable for writers.

The front is pretty good, but sheep are sold in the middle. . . One dollar of sheep, transportation, store opening, labor, dividends, and long-standing debts. Can you get the balance right? The distance is 4-5 hundred kilometers from Beijing to Inner Mongolia. Will it teleport?