Reborn as a System

This is a good book. If you try hard to write a few million words, you will have the hope of becoming a god by conquering the universe.

Going against the grain, I like it, keep the quality and don't collapse

After reading it, the length still needs to be improved. The setting is very novel. This is my most consistent idea. Interesting and different things are good settings. But on the other hand, it can be regarded as a derivative of system flow. From the beginning, you can tell that the style is more of a comedy. It is easy to write and very attractive. But suddenly our host became smarter, which made me a little panicked. Suddenly he became smarter, and then the plot reversed. Where is the daily fun I want? Give it to me. But even though I say so, I'm still looking forward to it. It's 4.4K words, which is probably my first book. It was signed very quickly, and I'm a lv1 writer. This setting is indeed promising, Hong Kong is true, entertainment comes first, now if you want to tell a serious story, you need a little patience. I think the author has this tendency, but he still lacks patience. But the plot is really just so casual. If it continues to be funny, I'm afraid it will be criticized, but happiness is the most important thing. It is recommended to be more funny, make the main line skeleton clearer, clarify the structure, and apply more paint on the joints of flesh and blood. After all, entertainment is the best.

The overall feeling is more humorous and the material is relatively new. Although the pace is slow, there is still interesting content. If there are things that attract people, it will be relatively smooth if you keep reading, and you will not get stuck somewhere. And I can feel that the author wants to write some serious content, and I look forward to the follow-up. However, the disadvantage is that there is actually some water. There is a feeling of repetitive description in many places, and there is a bit too much nonsense. The characterization is weak and feels lacking in flesh and blood. All in all, it is an orthodox online article with relatively new material. I hope the author will stick to his own style, but put more thought into the plot and description