Master of Transdimensional Dimensions

After reading a little bit, I found that the whole thing is quite smooth, and some settings are reasonable and well-founded. What makes me complain the most is the character of the protagonist, which is a bit mediocre to be honest. It doesn't have to be sharp, but when describing how he looks at and thinks about problems, you can add more highlights, emotions, anger, sorrow, and tendencies toward good and evil, etc. For example, there is no exploration of the new world by the protagonist at the beginning. All information is obtained through attracting people, and the protagonist is not expressed "what do I want" and "what do I want", making the protagonist very confused.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I can't hold on anymore. The structure and ideas are very good, but are you good at writing instructions? ! ! ! Halfway through, I can count on one hand what the main character has done. You can skip dozens of chapters without affecting the reading. It's all about introductions. It's so annoying.

It can be seen that the author is very hesitant, wavering between changes and changes, and writing the book in a long and verbose way.

The writing of is not as good as the first book, the story is too bland, and it is not interesting enough to make it more and more unbearable.

Following this plot forces readers to become Buddhists.

I don't understand this book. Can anyone tell me how the title and introduction are related to the content of the book?😅

Defection is more hateful than enemies. The author has not written about the fate of those who defected and enemies. This book is very good in terms of writing and plot, but it doesn't feel refreshing or enthusiastic enough. It has always been mediocre.

The finale is almost here, and I still have some regrets about this book. Following up from the previous book, I prefer the plot of the protagonist doing scientific research. It doesn't matter even if the plot is bland and has no ups and downs. But the problem is that there is too little plot research in the early stages of this book. This is mainly because the author was influenced by the fact that some readers do not like to study the plot. I hope that the author of the next book will continue to work hard and think about who his target readers are when making settings, and also determine what the selling points and positioning of the next book will be. I think the author's setting is okay. The biggest advantage is the character control of the protagonist and the research-type plot. Although the plot is not ups and downs or exciting, there is nothing poisonous about it. Therefore, I hope that the author can determine the selling points of his next work, and then not make frequent revisions, and not let some readers disrupt the writing rhythm. Once you have determined your selling point, you will basically determine which readers are your fans. Do not constantly change your articles for other readers who are not within your target audience range, causing dissatisfaction on both sides. No author can satisfy all readers, so pinpointing your target readers is really important! I hope the author writes better and better!

There are too many watery places, and you are a research type. You have never studied anything and only follow the script.

It should be the later stage now, the soul has transformed twice.

I like this book very much, very pleasantly surprised, the setting, the writing style (maybe others think it is bland, but I like it very much), the character of the protagonist is great, I like it very much Come on, author, I have added your other book to my bookshelf, I will read it slowly 😊Happy

Emmmmm, I have read this book for so long that I forgot about it. I finished reading it today and I feel like ordering it all 😁 Does the author have any plans for a new book?

It is suspected that Dana's death in researching extra-dimensional knowledge led to contact with the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to obtain talents←_←

This novel does not need a protagonist at all, the author just explains it! It seems quite novel. After reading the first dozens of chapters, there are only a few lines of dialogue and communication between the characters! Every random thing is explained for several paragraphs! A tea leaf can appear dozens of times! A talent, said over and over again! A shop The character, the structure, how it got stronger, what the boss does must be written clearly! The role of the protagonist is to run back and forth, wherever he goes, the author explains it! There are already more than ten pictures of Bai Wuchang, you should go and hook the soul! In a novel, the protagonist should do something! Don't get carried away later when doing things. The background of the world and the introduction of some things take up the main part! A long paragraph of explanation, it feels like this world is so deserted, no one talks! Besides, the things explained are basically repeated explanations! Like name, wealth, power! I explained it at least 10 times! But it is novel, so I don't want to read it, and I think the next chapter may be better, the protagonist may go do something!

The writing is okay. However. . . . Study those things. It seems pretty cool. But the defining point of pig's feet has not changed. Have you completely abandoned your spiritual practice while studying things? I'd rather the pig's feet be more reckless. I also don't want to see this kind of situation where all kinds of research seems to be ridiculous, but the point of definition of the context has not changed and is still a weak scumbag.

The setting is pretty good and unconventional. It's just that the world is a bit small and the plot is relatively bland. The first few chapters show how easy it is to persuade someone to quit. The Broken World can still be expanded like the World of Life and Death. Personal opinion

There are only 3 worlds in total with more than 200 chapters, and there is another current one. In fact, it is just a world to travel around. Half of it, what are you doing?

Ciri passed it on, and I feel it is completely inferior to the previous one. From my personal point of view, I didn't want to read it anymore after seeing the NPC settings. I can only say that it is completely boring. I suggest that the author can write books with dark tendencies in Western fantasy, such as wizards and wizards.

So far, it's all to my taste, but unfortunately the quantity is too small.

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The early stages were too bland. A bit like a running account

The writing is weird. The writing is obscure. Compared to other novels, you can tell what it is about at a glance. This novel requires more discerning time. There is something wrong with the author's sentence structure.

The author should pay attention to publicity.

Very well built and well thought out

A soul body, you tell me the constitution and strength. Hehe