Modern Martial Arts

Every day I think about how martial arts were in my previous life, and you have made a breakthrough! Daydream all day long.

Showing off all day long, his strength is rubbish. Being plotted at every turn.

Can the profile be changed? I recommended it to others before, but the profile persuaded me to quit. The paragraph about Dugu Nine Swords at the end of the introduction can be deleted. .

Just practice swordsmanship🗡. I look down on it and want to practice swordsmanship again. I daydream about it every day. Wu? Peel and remove bones. No wonder the grades are so poor.

I have read more than twenty chapters. The biggest problem is that the paragraphs are too long. My eyes hurt now. The smaller problem is that I talk too much to myself. I hope that the background and thinking mode can be integrated into the story. If it must be explained in this way, I hope it can be simplified.

Wardtian, different rules, you have to practice the previous martial arts, just like swimming in water is faster, you have to prove that walking is better than swimming

I opened this book that day and found that it was still being written. The author is truly determined.

The writing is okay, both in terms of plot and creativity, but I feel that the protagonist talks to himself too much. It would be better to use another way of describing it!

The front of the book is good (I only read this much)

After reading dozens of chapters, I really don't understand what's written.