The Song of Dissoluteness

It is really a breath of fresh air in the online literary world . The writing style is excellent, the writing is continuous, and there is no unfinished work. I hope that I can become popular, take over the baton from the previous batch of great masters, and re-guide the writing trend today when the number of online articles is huge and the quality is extremely low. A small suggestion, it might be better to have fewer female characters, or to replace them with men.

The senior is a talented person, but it is a pity that what he writes is the skin of immortals and the bones of martial arts. The writing is first-rate, but good works cannot rely on words alone.

Suddenly I have many feelings. We are born as human beings and have natural human rights. Sadness, happiness, reverence, unyielding, bravery, cowardice and other good and bad things are all free and independent. But is this really good? If one person is not restrained, there will be no problem, but what if it is a group of people? How much turmoil is there in this society? Think about how scary it is when "good people" turn into "mobs" online and are incited. Those people also advertise freedom and democracy. Note: I can't post a book review, something happened.

This kind of opening, in which the protagonist is weak and bullied by the villain and even the child's love interest, is easy to dissuade people. After all, the current routine of the novice novel about breaking off an engagement is known to be disliked by people. Although your article is not a novice novel, the beginning of it can easily be regarded as a novice novel and scare readers away. The author may consider changing the beginning. Friendly suggestions

Raise your hand here if the mask is in trouble. Jie Chao Da Da has three consecutive books on martial arts and fantasy. I sincerely hope that after finishing this book, the next one will be about modern fantasy or Western fantasy. ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ).

Anjia likes Xinggui because of the life she dreams of. This feeling cannot stand the test, so when she gets a wealthy life and something unexpected happens, she is immediately shaken. Anjia is not heartless, so she will definitely feel guilty, guilty, and confused, and material things cannot make up for all this. Rose likes Xingku because she pursues strength. She only values ​​people who are stronger than herself. Among the people she knows, the only ones she knows are Shen Zhe and Xingku, so she chooses Xingku. But love is not all of her, or even only a small part of it. She is a Long Aotian-like character, and what she wants most is to control her own destiny. So her path is to become a centralized queen. Meng Qingmi likes Xingkui because she deeply loves Xingkui's previous life, and she regards Xingkui as his previous life. However, I believe that marriage in the past life is only a fetter in the future life. It is possible for father and daughter, close friends, husband and wife, brother and sister, and even enemies. The past life and the present life are two independent people. Testing this feeling is very simple: if Xingkui got Wu Ax's memory by accident, and now a real reincarnation of "Wu Ax" pops up, just see how Meng Qingma reacts. She will be entangled and distressed, but she will eventually return to Wu Ax. (Of course, this assumption is impossible. The Skeleton God personally verified that Xingke's life experience was the reincarnation of Wu Ax) So I think the one who truly loves Xinggui himself and is willing to sacrifice everything for him is Sister Xiaozhujiu. However, love is so unfair to her. She has always been in the bitterness of "asking for something but not getting it" and cannot get rid of it. Xingke doesn't love her. She once made up her mind to drink fire dragon water and become a man in an attempt to bury this love. However, God didn't give her this, and by some strange combination of circumstances, she turned back into a woman, so she finally decided to accept herself and her love for Xingke. She said: "I will give him everything. I don't want anything, as long as he is good to me." Her wish almost came true, but the curse of the fire thief made her reject the body with her own hands. She finally made up her mind to confess, but the response she received was still a cold rejection. She is so pitiful. When I saw this, I almost didn't send a pound of razor blades to the author. I think Xingkui owes Zhujiu an emotional debt. He doesn't know what Zhujiu has to do because she loves him, even though it is unnecessary for Xingkui and is just a burden. As a man, Xinggui is too single-minded and sage, so that he lacks the passionate romance of men and cannot give Zhujiu any tender comfort. He felt that it was his responsibility to Zhu Jiu to cut through the mess quickly and make her forget about this unrealistic love. You can do this to Rose, but to Zhujiu, is this really okay? Actually according to my idea. . . If Xingkui is not the real reincarnation of Wu Fu, and Meng Qingmi and Wu Fu leave, Xingkui loses the last possibility of humanity and completely becomes a fire thief. He leads the fire robbers to farm and fight back, and then harvests humanity from Zhu Jiu and becomes an adult again. However, the Skeleton God denied this possibility and settled for the next best thing. Meng Qingma became bigger and Zhu Jiu became smaller, and everyone was happy. But the hateful anti-harem party😭. . . .

The most interesting thing about the mask novel is that they may have their own sins, but they are essentially good people Many readers say that none of the women in the protagonist is a good person The first Meng Qingya, waited for four hundred years, then gave up love for the world, and finally sacrificed herself to become the new Sanqing The second Rose can be said to be a great representative, and in the ending it is like Asuka in "Eva End", she made it clear that she fell in love with the protagonist from the beginning Even though the protagonist was still an ordinary person who had not awakened at the time The third Zhujiu, except for marrying several women to act as a man, and then letting his brother have sex with the women, he basically never did any bad things The fourth Bai Xueer, except for wanting to sleep with the male protagonist, she basically never did any bad things, except for becoming a fairy in the later period and eating a few souls, but in the end she sacrificed herself and saved a lot of people The fifth Meng Ruling, she has never done any bad things, she is just a silly sweet lady

This author's writing is so awkward and uncomfortable to read.

The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. The characters have no IQ. Some things can be solved by talking about them, but they just don't talk about them. Some people, who already know they are bad people at a glance, insist on talking about it. It seems really worrying (")

At the beginning, the child's IQ is low, his logic is not enough, and he is a little savvy. It's easy to write when you write it. I write wherever I think of it. What do readers think? The first three chapters describe being bullied by children in large sections. One or two sentences would be enough. What's the point of writing it in such detail?

She suddenly stretched out her little hand and smeared it on Goshawk's face. There was an undeniable determination in her movements. Goshawk felt relieved for a moment, as if a heavy burden had been lifted off her body. His lingering past, the cowardice hidden in his heart, the murderous intention of thunder and fire, and the lingering guilt were all gone with this light touch.

To be honest, Jie Zhaojun's description of deep love is still lacking in warmth. Why don't I always feel how deeply Bai Xue and Xing Kui love each other?

I really can't understand it. In the end, Xingke actually didn't kill Yuan Hui. It really disgusted me. I really couldn't accept it. This is the most disgusting thing I've read in this book. It's even more disgusting than the male apprentice suddenly turning into a woman and dancing with the master.

The introduction persuades me to quit. The author cannot control too complex text and is easily embarrassed.

Character creation is more like Maggot Fly Corpse Sea Sword

Shenglian and Meng Qingma are like Wu Zetian and Princess Taiping

Jie Chao is so talented and the writing is so good.

After watching it, Bai Xueer cried at the ending. At first, I was a little disgusted with the description of this relationship, but in the end, Bai Xueer, Bai Xueer, will definitely be able to be in love with Xingkui forever.

The adventures and crises are too dense, there are two more Linghu Chongs than Duan Yu and Zhang Wuji.

Only to find out there is a living corpse named Biden

In fact, Goshawk has begun to have nihilistic thoughts, and he doesn't care much about everything. However, the happy ending is a bit strange. According to the logical thoughts and actions of the characters, I think it is better to end with tragedy. There are veterans like Goshawk who can recommend it

The protagonist of this book can be said to be the most lickable of all the protagonists I have read. It is really hard to resist.

Xingkui felt that Yuanhui's evil deeds were actually instigated by his so-called mother. Because he had a reason to forgive Yuanhui, he was relieved.

What Lu Tan said is also true. Xingku knew Zhujiu's trick but didn't tell Lu Tan. It's not what a gentleman does. He didn't consider Lu Tan's feelings at all. Zhu Jiu is even worse. Since you don't like Lu Tan, don't marry her. If you are a woman, don't engage in such drama.

Bai Xueer also became fond of cannibalism. However, Xingku even let Yenaga go, so he should also forgive Bai Xueer.

After reading the whole book, I feel that no one is good, everyone deserves to die, and it is not a pity for everyone to die.

Just write it here 🤮🤮🤮. From every book behind the mask, the author's bad taste is so great that you can read every book.

It's so poisonous, almost no one is human 😰

I have started reading. The author's writing is very good. It is definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

The male protagonist is the ultimate turtle, and the women around him are all extremely desperate. However, the turtle endured it hard and killed all his good brothers.