One Land Becomes Immortal

The inexplicable ending broke my heart 💔 There are not many fairy tales with CP like the author's writing style. I didn't expect it to be another unfinished book. Do you really not consider opening a copy? Cry, no more words, wipe away your tears, here comes another completed novel by the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! At the same time, I pray that the author's new article will still be true🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

I was really bored watching some. The logic is full of errors. What impressed me most was that the heroine was chased by a powerful enemy, so she smartly changed into a skirt, bought some cosmetics and put on a gorgeous look. As a result, the powerful enemy no longer recognized her, even when speaking to her face. The reason is that this stupid enemy is not married and does not understand that women can wear makeup. Hahaha, even primary school students would not dare to write like this. Fun.

It ended inexplicably, and I felt like I had received a critical hit of 10,000 points😢😓

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the female cultivators in this sect are all petty and love-minded. They don't cultivate themselves well and chase the male cultivators every day. Is this reasonable? .

Ah... It's gone now, so sloppy!

A bit hasty ending

It is a very orthodox fairy tale with a good look and feel. The setting and everything are on point, but it is not finished. Although it is a bit bland, it is indeed a fairy tale that impressed me deeply. Personally, I think the most outstanding thing is the setting and description of the talisman formation, and the female character behind it. In the part where the main character resists the beast tide, there is a sense of eagerness to return after studying and serve the motherland. Hahaha, in the end, the heroine is rewarded with a stable male protagonist. The process is not without its ups and downs. The heroine is not the kind of super strong female character, she should be regarded as a close friend and female supporting role next to the strong female character! But wow, I think such an ordinary and extraordinary story is more fascinating.

Transformed into a god and ascended so quickly? ? ? ? I haven't watched it for a few days. What happened?

It feels like it ended a little hastily. The ending of the story ended abruptly. Why didn't I continue writing it?

No more? It would be a pity not to have some extra episodes!

So what is the relationship between the heroine and Ye Chen? I hope some Taoist friend can explain it! ! !

I am also a poor person who suffered a critical attack. Woohoo.

Uh⊙∀⊙! Is this not finished? Is it over?

The heroine initially said she didn't want to be with older people, but later on she had emotional entanglements with older people. Is it possible that there are no geniuses in such a big place? Only a strong old man is worthy of her? Whenever there is danger, let a man save you! In Beihai, he knew clearly that the evil cultivator was hiding his cultivation, yet he went to die and was rescued by others. Not the halo of the heroine, she has died a hundred times 🤫

The comments are bombarded, but I still have a lot of fans, why?

Thoughts after watching: I was depressed after watching it, and I always felt that something was missing Firstly, the logic is not strong; secondly, the description of the content is not detailed; thirdly, there is no dialogue, and they are all about describing inner thoughts.

Come on, big brother... There is nothing worth giving up.

Why did it suck? The author didn't think he had written it anymore. He could just tell it straight away and then write it again after a while. But it didn't finish well and it ended in a hurry. I hope to start a second part.

I'm disgusted by that Kui Xiangbai. She killed her father but she didn't kill him. I'm so angry! !

Cause and effect, so many causes helped Chang Shu ascend, so how to end this result?