Travel Through Konoha and Open Treasure Chests

Personally, I think this is my favorite Naruto fanfic. After all, Naruto itself is a passionate fanfic. In this novel, there is growth, fighting, emotions, and even more exhilaration that cannot be experienced in the original text, the exhilaration of overcoming all obstacles with one force. The best thing is that there are not too many conspiracies and intrigues in this novel (such as the daimyo's **** or the completely blackened Danzo) to pollute the original IP. And I personally feel that the degree of magic change is not great, after all, there is also Hidan. The characteristic is that the protagonist's tricks are really awesome, but that's how fan fiction should be. It's a cool story about Naruto. It's not cool to open two reincarnation eyes! If I have to find faults, the protagonist of this book lacks some interaction with the two protagonists of the original IP, and the ending is a bit lacking (it is not a snake tail). It would be better to write more extras.

The protagonist's name is Bai Mingyu, right? Why don't everyone call him Bai Yujun? Where did that clear word go?

Chapter 19: Sneaking into what? Is it necessary to dive? The Uchiha is just a little proud, not a lunatic. At most, when doing things, he is a bit strict and unkind. If you are a child and act openly, what will others do to you? Won't. If you sneak in and get discovered, then there will be a problem. Just like the urban management, if you occupy the road and set up a stall, they will kick you out. When you walk on the road, will they chase you away? Won't. If you make a mistake, the Uchiha will arrest you. At most they won't let you in. If I don't let you in, then you can consider sneaking in, right? Many things can be done openly, but many protagonists have to be sneaky. I don't know what's wrong with people nowadays? ? ? ?

In fact, the power of each system mastered by the protagonist has unlimited potential, but the mastery is so complicated and the development is so bad. It is really embarrassing to watch the thief, as if he clearly has a knife in his hand, but he still wants to use the knife to cut a wooden stick to hammer people, and he can't figure out the direction of progress.

After reading the previous chapter, I feel that the protagonist is crazy and seeking death. He is not an original resident of Konoha. His parents are ordinary people, but he is able to come up with so many techniques and props that can be said to be inherited by the family. Muji Ninjutsu, extremely practical but different physical techniques, blood-stained boundaries, open treasure chests and infiltrate everywhere in the village every day. What's even more outrageous is that he tried to contact the Jinchuuriki. At the age of seven, he defeated the chunin and rescued Hinata, but he actually found out that he was the messenger of the Kumo ninja. A person with great potential and many tricks, who had close contact with many important figures of the next generation of Konoha, behaved suspiciously, and always thought about the appearance of a child, but did not have the innocence of a child. Danzo, such a suspicious person, did not arrest him and check his memory.

It's funny, you're still afraid of being struck by lightning after eating the thunder fruit. You are thunder yourself. That's ridiculous.

The Sixth Form of the Navy relies on pure physical strength, but the protagonist can use it just after opening the Sixth Form, and there is no burden on the body at all. Haha, I don't think the protagonist can match the physique of the pirates from the beginning. From your introduction, I think the Devil's Essence is obviously much stronger than the ice shield. At least it does not require sealing, and it can freeze time and space later. It is obviously not on the same level!

It felt quite poisonous. I had no strength at first, and even a bandit beat me to death. But when I arrived in Konoha, Hinata was captured, and I rushed to fight the Jonin without even practicing. It's amazing, why are you so outstanding?

What a lunatic. The protagonist is definitely confirmed to be Akatsuki. He can kill Obito twice, and his strength has long been enough to defeat Akatsuki. However, he never makes a move, and then he appears in Konoha like a savior. What do you want to do? Pretending? I don't try my best in everything. I have no idea what the author is trying to express. Does he want Akatsuki to exist and then pick them all by himself with Akatsuki, Obito, Madara and Kaguya during the fourth war? Show yourself as a saint in front of others and then take advantage of the situation to become a hero? Things that can be solved long ago must be solved when they are at their most complicated. It is really poisonous.

If you steal a woman from Itachi God, you might get hammered

When I saw more than 40%, I just felt that the author had been deliberately weakening the protagonist and those abilities, which made me feel frustrated.

Two people with the same strength. One uses the Sixth Marine, and the other uses the Eight Gate Dunjia. Then the former must have died——

Pooh! No one teaches the protagonist to know so many moves by himself and teach others When Danzo Sandai and others S B?

In fact, I didn't read much. I mainly read the introduction and then read a few pictures to give the author some suggestions. There are too many plug-ins for the protagonist, and they are too strong. I guess. In fact, there is a devil's essence. Learning sword skills is enough. After the ice ability develops, time and space will be frozen for you, so what else is needed. And you are an outsider. Bing's ability can be Shui Wuyue's Ice Escape Bloodstain. It's hard to explain anything else. You can give the protagonist a Demon's Essence, a Ice Lun Pill, and then a sword skill, and in the end, everyone who is invincible in the world will be killed. The remaining abilities are somewhat redundant. I hope the author will write better and better, come on!

After reading this book, I felt that the protagonist was doing a disservice. Basically all the Akatsuki were dead according to the original trajectory, but now the tailed beasts have all captured the Akatsuki and none of the Akatsuki have died. Every ninja village has been traumatized. There is no doubt that the protagonist is the Akatsuki.

Why do you have to save Jiraiya? Isn't it better to let Jiraiya die? If I have to go against Akatsuki, I feel that summoning the Ten-Tails and becoming a Jinchuriki together with Akatsuki would be a big deal! There's no need to give up being a jinchuriki for one or two women, and I don't think there's anything good about Konoha!

I found that my poison resistance was still not high enough, and I was stuck in the front. The most unacceptable thing is that a blood heir from another village should go to another person's house to take the exam. It's like going to Konoha to take the exam with your Byakugan or Blood Ring Eye. Do you think the Third Generation will kill you?

It's been over a hundred chapters, and I was beaten up by a supporting character. It's such a rubbish story, so it's okay not to open it.

I want to say, how did the protagonist get from the Country of Grass to the Country of Wood at the beginning? Doesn't it mean that there is only one person's travel expenses? Didn't it mean that the Third Ninja War had just ended? Why did you just leave and arrive here in three days? 😅 And how did you learn the navy's six-style shave? That shouldn't be something a seven-year-old child can learn! People in the world of One Piece are generally physically strong, but it is impossible for a child of a certain age to use the Sixth Form of the Marines. I will not complain about the group of bandits. The protagonist went to Konoha to see the treasure chest and blatantly used fighting skills and that sword. Think about a child of an ordinary ninja. After arriving in Konoha, he suddenly used a fighting skill similar to the Muji Ninjutsu. He also defeated a ninja with a sword that he did not find when he entered the village. Hehehe

At first I thought it was a mindless and cool story, but I didn't expect that in the first few dozen chapters, the author wrote for the protagonist that he would be beaten to death by the opponent every time while driving this B-hook.

I spent more than 30 chapters in vain, trying to force others to be smart. Normally it's nothing, but when it comes to a certain plot point, everyone is completely brainless.

Let me tell you a joke, Danzo can kill Mangekyo Fugaku, haha, Mangekyo is so incompetent, Sasuke in the original novel would have died long ago. When Kaleidoscope has a proper Super Shadow Level, Susana is passive.

Eat it all over the world with one trick! Too many skills will only make people feel miscellaneous but not masterful, and they will bite off more than they can chew! Just master a few core skills and you're done! It is not good for the author to arrange too much! Didn't you see that the pinkeye next door only has this skill? There are not many cataract patients! Expensive essence is not expensive! Why

Except for a lot of unreasonable places. I can still take a look at it

No, if I don't spend my money, I feel like I'll cry

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

His abilities are not systematic and rather miscellaneous The pig's trotters are rather frivolous, and there are various suspicions of flaws.

There are some things about the basics of Naruto that are wrong. I recommend the author to take a look at Little Naruto with Kuaishou. Many things are wrong, such as Kakashi's copy of the name of ninja. If Kakashi does not have five attributes of chakra in his body, then even if he writes The Rinnegan cannot be copied. There are several prerequisites for the Sharingan to copy ninjutsu. First, the sealing speed must be kept up with, and the person must have a certain understanding of the number of people being copied. The most important point is that the number of people must have chakra corresponding to the attribute, otherwise, everything will be in vain.

The protagonist has too many abilities, there is no fighting system with each other, and the plot logic is confusing.

I am recommending a new book "Job Jumping from Paradise". The Death/Fire/Sea fandom is very arrogant in the introduction. It even adds unlimited streams and the classification of the heavens. Everyone please laugh with me hahaha