The Book-Trapped Cannon Fodder's Comeback

A very nice novel. Easy and no brainer. The heroine's IQ is on the line. She doesn't give in to the original heroine, and she doesn't lose her wits when it comes to the male protagonist. She doesn't tell the male protagonist about her golden finger (portable space). This is something I haven't seen in other novels with female protagonists. In the past, I saw in novels that the male and female protagonists told the male protagonist every secret after they had a heart-to-heart relationship. Fortunately, most of the authors were the female protagonist's biological mothers. In the end, the male protagonist was not attracted to Gold Finger and was infatuated with the female protagonist. Those who become greedy are male partners (husbands in previous lives). After the death of the heroine, she was reborn with all kinds of regrets, and then abused her ex-husband, but then told the current male protagonist (or accidentally let the current male protagonist find out. Of course, the current male protagonist has noble sentiments, is dedicated to the heroine, and doesn't care about gold fingers, so people don't know what to say.

I watched it for so long that I couldn't bear it anymore! Too wordy! ! When I first read it, I almost gave up on the first few chapters, but I thought that this was a new author, so I endured it. Then after more than ten chapters, the author also discovered his own problem (confusion, verbosity, and illogical logic), and then said he would correct it! At that time, I felt that I could continue watching. But I have seen more than 100 pictures now! It's still verbose and hasn't changed at all. Obviously I can express it clearly in more concise words, but I have to be wordy! Can we understand it well? Then today, taking advantage of the limited exemption, I took a look at the back. I skipped the middle part without reading it, and then this new chapter is still so long-winded.

I don't know why I read this book. I looked for the plot from the narration and thought it was because there was no male protagonist. It turns out that the heroine, the Holy Mother, gave herself to the former male protagonist. It's poisonous, so be careful!

This book is so extraordinary The entire Versailles literature, no matter what the heroine does, the author has to write several chapters from the psychological description of various characters to show the heroine's nobility. For example, I remember that the heroine was invited back for dinner by her grandfather in public, so he wrote several long chapters based on the psychological description of the heroine's master, the heroine's sister, the heroine's family elders, and the heroine's family descendants. I thought it would be on the best-seller list, but it turned out that this junk article was all a psychological drama. There is no action description, scene description, and too little language description. Emotions, this story of yours is all based on your imagination.

Except for the fact that the heroine does not get married, other romances are no different from those in which the heroine is stronger and the hero is stronger. The heroine is still weak when encountering the hero, she will still complain "uncompliance", and she will be weak and weak.

The introduction to this book is fake. There is a male protagonist, and every day, he has children.

It's really not easy. It can be said that it took a lot of effort to finish reading these 21 chapters. I can't even feel at ease after reading it. First of all, I don't know if the author is a novice, or if the author's writing style is like this. Basically 99% of it is a long paragraph of narrative, and many of them are repeated over and over again, over and over again. My brain is spinning. Secondly, the author uses many words very casually. For example, does the heroine not have clairvoyance and clairvoyance? ? For example, the heroine wants to sing about Jerusalem? ? (Both examples appear in the same big paragraph in Chapter 21) There are many more that I won't give examples one by one. Although we can understand them, it's really not good to be so casual. Finally, I won't talk about other sentences, word order, typos, and logical irrationality. What I want to say is, author, do you only read the comments that brag about you, and don't read the comments from readers who corrected their mistakes? I read 21 chapters, and in each chapter there are a lot of complaints about your typos and sentence mistakes. I don't complain about them, but the mistakes are still wrong. The only one who made more comments was the flatterer. I just want to say that people still need to be modest in order to grow.

Oh, it turns out that not marrying someone in the introduction doesn't mean there is no male protagonist. I'm off. 😥

Why are you so long-winded? ? Wouldn't it be action description, environment description, and character description? Can you only write narration and explanatory text? This is so long-winded that I actually downloaded the app just to comment! I'm really impressed! !

The heroine doesn't get married but just has the hero's child? I looked at the introduction and then commented on me...😅