The Book-Trapped Cannon Fodder's Comeback

It's a pretty good novel. Lighthearted and not too intellectually taxing. The female lead is intelligent; she doesn't feel inferior to the original female lead, nor does she lose her mind in front of the male lead, and she doesn't reveal her cheat ability (a portable space) to him. This is something I haven't seen in other female lead novels.

I've been reading for so long, I can't take it anymore! It's so wordy!! When I first started reading, I almost gave up on the first few chapters, but then I remembered it was a new author, so I persevered. Then, around chapter 10, the author realized his own problems (confused, wordy, and illogical) and said he would fix them! At that point, I thought I could keep reading.

I don't know why I read this book. I tried to find the plot from the narration and thought it was a story without a male lead. But the female lead is so saintly that she gives herself to the ex-male lead. It's addictive. Enter at your own risk!

This book is so ordinary! The entire work is a veritable Versailles epic; for every single action of the female protagonist, the author dedicates several chapters to describing the psychology of various characters to portray her nobility. For example, I remember when the female lead was publicly invited back for dinner by her grandfather, he wrote several chapters on the psychological…

Aside from the fact that the female lead doesn't get married, it's no different from other romance novels where the female lead is stronger than the male lead. The female lead is still weak when she's with the male lead, and she'll still complain in a defiant manner, just as delicate and helpless.

The book's synopsis is fake; it has a male lead, a girl named Tiantian, and they even have a child.

It was really not easy; it was quite a struggle to finish reading all 21 chapters. I couldn't even stay calm while reading them. First of all, I don't know if the author is a novice or if this is just the author's writing style. Basically, 99% of the text consists of long paragraphs of narration, and many of them are repeated over and over again, making my head spin.

Oh, so the synopsis saying she doesn't get married doesn't mean there's no male lead. I'm outta here. 😥

Why are you being so verbose? Don't you know how to write action descriptions, setting descriptions, and character descriptions? Can't you only write narration and explanatory texts? It's so long-winded that I actually downloaded the app just to leave a comment! I'm truly amazed!!

The female lead doesn't marry, she just has the male lead's child? After glancing at the synopsis and then at the comments... 😅